Copperhaired Berserker!
04-29-2005, 12:58
As you know, my first story, The collosal empire, was the start of my RTW stories, so let the story begin! note; the name for this story came from Craterus and i will probarly do a better story than my first because Monk told me my faults in the story.
Part 1: Introduction
If you had read the colossal empire in the mead hall you will know that Brutus was the heir of Manius. Manius had a extroidinary life and so, became king of the mighty Romans! But he died, so I'll tell you about Brutus.
Part 2: Brutus's life
Brutus was tall and speedy, he was young and handsome, he was a professional at fighting and leading, he was also good at philosophy, in short, the kind of general you want. Many people respected him even before he became king(this was before Manius died), Manius must have envied him because of that, he was only a street rat before joining the army and no one respected him. Brutus had the best of life, a loving wife and two children, both of them were boys, their names were Tiberus and Manius II,(Brutus loved his father so that's why his boy was called that) the two boys were like miniuture versions of Brutus.
Right, I'll show you the next part tomorrow or tonight, depending on what mood I'm in. I really hope I've did this story better than my previous story. Bye!
Signed
Berserker!
Part 1: Introduction
If you had read the colossal empire in the mead hall you will know that Brutus was the heir of Manius. Manius had a extroidinary life and so, became king of the mighty Romans! But he died, so I'll tell you about Brutus.
Part 2: Brutus's life
Brutus was tall and speedy, he was young and handsome, he was a professional at fighting and leading, he was also good at philosophy, in short, the kind of general you want. Many people respected him even before he became king(this was before Manius died), Manius must have envied him because of that, he was only a street rat before joining the army and no one respected him. Brutus had the best of life, a loving wife and two children, both of them were boys, their names were Tiberus and Manius II,(Brutus loved his father so that's why his boy was called that) the two boys were like miniuture versions of Brutus.
Right, I'll show you the next part tomorrow or tonight, depending on what mood I'm in. I really hope I've did this story better than my previous story. Bye!
Signed
Berserker!