M:TW Hungarian AAR "The Creation of the mini Mare Nostrum in the Black Sea"

[Jack50]

Hello all and welcome!

I am starting an AAR the is using the Hungarians from M:TW in the early age. My "goal" is for Hungary to be a pan-slavic/turkic empire that has the Black Sea as it's own little port.

What I will supply: A tale of the times from 1087 to 1453 of how Kiraly Laszlo the I was able to build Hungary from a nation of semi nomadic peoples into a great empire! I also will provide updates and pictures to this AAR. You will get to know the Kings and others in this tale.

I will run it in 25 year "blocks" with usually a couple of background pieces. I use pictures from the game as well as other internet pictures(with credits given)

My first piece will be up here May 12th or perhaps sooner. My posting is roughly once a week, but can be quicker if I get time in RL Finally, I write as it helps with my severe depression and PTSD (Thanks US Marine Corps) not to grandstand for you folks

What I need from you: It would help if you read it, but I really want critques!!! Don't feel like your going to strangle my inner muse because you said my stuff sucks I want to know how to improve!! Furthermore, I will be incorporating some Latin (as I self teach) and Hungarian. If something doesn't look or sound right let it be known so I can PM you (and bug you with questions)

Any comments or questions post here till May 12th then will open new thread and have moderators close this one.

[Tsar Alexsandr]

Sounds great. :D

I think some Hungarian phrases would be great, that would add a lot of flavor to the piece. But if you do that could you please give us footnotes at the end of the chapter? I don't speak Hungarian and I doubt many of us do.

I like that you're using the ethnic term Kiraly too. :D

[Jack50]

I hope all is well. I ran into a bump with my computer deciding to have issues. Never fear the year up to 1103 is in the books. just need to get it all together (fraggle pictures ) So it will appear on a sunny day

[johnhughthom]

Fraggle pictures? You modded in a Fraggle faction? Awesome, I can just see Gobo leading your cavalry charges....

[Servilius Novus]

I am a Hungarian and I approve this AAR!