So... Lina fans are probably pretty happy. Battle fans, not so much. Once again a chapter is much, MUCH longer than I expected it to me. I'm pretty happy with most of the writing, but I really couldn't get a bead on how I did with the beading party segment. (MisterFred, Master of Puns.) One of the reasons I write this AAR is to experiment with styles and settings.
So don't leave me in suspense guys. Was the beading party interesting, the motivations and customs understandable, the emotions intense? Or it was it a bizarre and unnecessary add-on, full of pointless harping, hard-to-follow, and uninteresting?
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