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    I'm going to do something almost unprecedented. I am going to start an AAR well into a game! The year is 190 BC, summer, and the faction is Qarthdastim.

    I cannot guarantee this will continue to be updated since my efforts will be primarily focused on EB2 and school/work. But if you guys like it I will try to continue. Also, being late in the game it could crash anytime. (Will upload some screens later)


    Sons of Elissa


    Prologue

    The King is Dead


    Summer, 190 BC

    Milkyaton Apollonia: Sophene


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    Light filtered dimly through the curtains of the palanquin, the only sight of the outside world came whenever a chance breeze stirred the curtains enough to part them. The sickly-sweet smell of death seemed to fill the stale air and it made Milkyaton cringe in distaste. He knew he was the cause of the smell. That damned wound had festered and it prevented him from walking or even riding, which was why he had to be hauled around in this ridiculous palanquin. The men didn't complain of course, the actions of their general had saved them all, brought them through Asia together, and tales of his exploits were still the talk of the camp.

    Milkyaton remembered well the moment when he plunged his sword through Eumenes' chest; he'd almost missed when the Babylonian had caused him the wound that now enfeebled him. Yet for all the glory won that day, when his army had fought off twice its number in Hellenes and Asians, he had still failed. The orders from Germelqart and Bodashtart Phameas had been to press on to Arbela, but this damned wound forced him to turn back, not to mention the losses he had suffered. It would not be easy to face Bodashtart, his relief after the capture of Karkathiokerta, but then again, Germelqart was dead now.

    It was hard to believe the king was dead, even a year later, but now no one was king. Germelqart had left no male heirs, just a daughter, Ramona, and his closest living male relative, the young Briareus, had fallen ill shortly after his uncle's death and been in no position to make a claim. In the following months Ramona had married, a young man of noble stature named Zamolxis, but he could make no claim having married her after Germelqart's death.

    In the meantime Bomilkar, son of Hanno, and his son Hasdrubal had managed to maintain order from Kart-Hadast. Hasdrubal was actually Bomilkar's second born, but his first born, Bisaltes, had proved himself a failure, forced to travel around in the shadow of great men while his younger brother became a prestigious governor and senator in the homeland.

    After seven years on campaign, home was a distant memory, and Milkyaton found it difficult to recall exactly what the great harbour looked like, or the temple of Tanit, where the skins of gorilla's still hung on display from when Hanno the navigator put them there. It was strange fate that had placed Milkyaton in command of an army. His father, Thero, had married into a wealthier family and secured a good position for his son. Milkyaton was not particularly quick or charismatic, but he was steadfast and true, so when the orders had gone out to assign commanders and sub-commanders to the invasion force destined for Anatolia and the mighty Seleukid empire, Milkyaton had been paired with several others.

    The others had been more adept at management and affairs of state than Milkyaton, and had stayed behind in Lydia and Phrygia as governors. Milkyaton had surprised his superiors as a capable commander, and his loyalty to his men had won him their affection. Many were veterans of the war in Egypt against Ptolemy's successors, but they had placed their faith in a boy from Kart-Hadast.

    The palanquin stopped moving and Milkyaton could hear Thucydides, his advisor, ordering that camp be made. They were very close to Karkathiokerta now, but night was coming and it was time to stop and rest.

    An hour later saw Milkyaton in his tent with Thucydides, his wife Roxanne and his ever vigilant nanny, Lidia. Roxanne was pale, as she had been the last five years since he had her brought to Asia to be with him. The climate, the food, the people, nothing about Asia agreed with her, but he needed her. She was gifted with a wisdom beyond her years that Milkyaton very much needed.

    Lidia was another story altogether. The woman was pushing sixty now, but her jaw was as lean and her arms as strong as they had ever been. It seemed there was no force in the world that could bend her.

    Thucydides was talking, “A rider arrived from Karkathiokerta an hour ago, they have received word of your victory in Adiabene. The army there is celebrating even now. Added to your part in the Battle of Lake Tuz, you are fast becoming a hero among the men.”
    A frown spread on Milkyaton's face, “The soldiers with Bodashtart haven't seen real combat yet, just a few skirmishes. I wouldn't trust their opinions.”
    “It is not just the men in Karkathiokerta my lord,” Thucydides continued.

    Roxanne interrupted him, “Every soldier in the camp is talking about you as a saviour. The story of your charge against the Persian Kinsmen and Judean levies grows with each new telling, and the length of your duel with Eumenes leaves little time for you to have fought in the rest of the battle.”

    A snort escaped Lydia, “The talk of soldiers is as fleeting as the leaves in autumn. We may be able to get away with falling back to Sophene, but the Xenophanes are aiming at Babylon, and whoever wins will not forgive you if their flank in Adiabene is unprotected.”

    With the death of the King and the realization that power could be gained through military prowess, new players were emerging out of the generals in the Asian invasion force. The two most powerful were Xenophanes of Gadir and Xenophanes Barca. The first came from a proud old family, his father was governor of Lilibeo and his grandfather had been a commander in Iberia. The second was from an even prouder family. While his brother was a fool sent to govern the isolated island of Crete, his father was the governor of Rhodes, guardian of the Colossus. Barca's grandfather, Himilcar, had been the most powerful man in Carthage in his day.

    And then there was the young Briareus, nephew of Germelqart, to consider. The boy had recovered from his illness and was on his way to Babylon as well. The Xenophanes had a headstart, but there was no telling what would happen once all three armies were in Mesopotamia.

    Milkyaton knew he was in no position to make a bid for power himself, yet he had to be careful who he supported. Not securing Arbela, even in spite of his injury, might be mistaken for a deliberate move to support Briareus, or worse, be mistaken for a foolish personal bid for power.

    Finally, Milkyaton reached a decision, he grabbed the wooden crutch that lay nearby and forced himself up off his cushions. Roxanne gasped and rushed to support her husband. He let her, for all his bravado he knew he could not support himself for long.

    Holding his chin up high and looking as regal as he could, pale and drenched in sweat from this effort, Milkyaton spoke, “Send word to Bodashtart, we are returning to Arbela.”

    Roxanne withdrew from him a little, “You are in no fit state to travel, let alone make war my husband, and the army bleeds as much as you do.”

    Nodding, Milkyaton spoke over any further protestations, “I will not have my actions mistaken for some form of treason or cowardice. Under normal circumstances I would stop to heal in friendly territory, but these are not normal times. I will capture Arbela if I have to crawl up the siege ladders myself!”

    Battle of Lake Tuz: 193 BC



    Ramona: Kart-Hadast: Zeugitania

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    Ramona climbed out of bed and picked up a towel, sponge and water pitcher off the table. Dipping the sponge in the water, Ramona began to wash the sweat off her body. When she had finished washing she used the towel to dry herself. The manor was well situated on a hill just outside of Kart-Hadast and the cool evening breeze felt good against her bare skin.

    Carpophorus rose from the bed and came over to where she stood. He put his sweaty arms around her and held her close. She let him, even though she had just washed. She could always wash again, and there was no point in insulting Carpophorus now.

    “Will you stay the night?” he asked in his deep, smooth voice. The feel of his muscles rippling against her back made his offer tempting, but it was important not to mistake business for pleasure, even if the other party didn't know which it was.

    “My husband will get suspicious lover, I must return home.” She looked over her shoulder at Carpophorus and summoned every ounce of affection she could place in her eyes. Her hand caressed his cheek, and then she slipped out of his grip gently to wash herself again.

    “I leave within the fortnight.” The words were intended to distress her, to make her stay. Words to sway a secret lover. She already knew he was leaving, of course, but it was never a good idea to let others know what you did.

    Looking saddened by the news, Ramona glanced back at her lover, “Will you be back before I go to Gaul?” The planned invasion of Gaul was still a year away at best, but Ramona was not supposed to know that.

    Carpophorus smiled, “That is the good news, I too am being given a command to go to Gaul. I am leaving to acquire troops from Kirtan and Siga.”
    This was almost too easy, Ramona thought. The invasion of Gaul was still being called a preventative measure, yet more and more troops were being levied for the cause and Ramona knew from her father's deeds how preventative measures could turn out. It didn't help that the barbarian client, Gelon Dertosa, had responded to the Gallic raids and military buildup by marching into their lands in Cantabria and daring them to face him in battle.

    For a long time the Gauls, Aedui and Arverni both, had been good trading partners, and even allies. But in the last couple years the number of Gallic spies caught in Qarthadastim cities and the number troops in their border towns had increased to the point where it couldn't be ignored.
    Carthage had no more fear for barbarians though. Iberia had been conquered long ago and Ramona's father, leading an expedition of only thirty thousand, intended to secure tin trade routes lost in the fall of the Lusotannon, had secured the whole of Albion and Iuerion.

    Germelqart of Alalia had already been an impressive man before the invasion, having liberated the old Phoenician homeland and restored its independence. After he conquered Albion he became a legend. He returned to Kart-Hadast, riding through the streets in a gilded chariot with loving crowds throwing flowers from the rooftops. The people had given him a power never truly achieved in Kart-Hadast before, they made him king.

    Old man Bomilkar had been less than pleased of course, but there was little the senate could do about it. Germelqart had taken his glory and his fame and gone out east to join the invasion of Asia. But it was his last moment of glory. Age finally claimed Ramona's father and she was left with few prospects and no friends.

    Zamolxis was from a family that had moved to Kirtan for the rich prospects there. He was a good man, loyal, charismatic, as much a politician as a soldier. His proposal had been what Ramona needed to climb back up the social ladder that her father's death had cast her down.

    She was not a young woman anymore. Her prime years had passed her by as her father denied so many suitors that he deemed unworthy. Still, Ramona had kept herself in good shape and was still regarded as one of the beauties of Kart-Hadast. Which was how she found herself in Carpophorus' bedchamber.

    The man may be strong, and popular with the rank and file, but he was an imbecile. Still, Ramona had learned from her contacts within the senate that Carpophorus was to lead the second detachment to Gaul alongside her husband. She needed his support to ensure that her husband would reap the lion's share of the glory in Gaul. It could take years, but Ramona would come back to Kart-Hadast alongside her husband as a queen, and reclaim the glory that rightfully belonged to her father's house.

    Looking deep into her lover's eyes, Ramona began to talk of the future.



    Gelon Dertosa: Cantabria

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    Fate was a strange thing. Gelon could remember the time when he was a rebel, passionately opposing the Qarthadastim in Bastetania; rumour had it a new group of bandits had recently sprouted up there. Yet the Qarthadastim's silver was persuasive, and now Gelon was the commander of their regional army in Iberia. There was no going back now. Many of the nobles and country folk who had supported him, both secretly and openly, as a rebel, now wished him dead for his betrayal.

    With any luck, Gelon would soon be far away from them. A year back, news had reached him in Edetania, where he was with the army patrolling, that the Gauls in Cantabria were massing forces. Having taken the army north, Gelon discovered it was true. The uneasy peace, as the armies stared at each other across a border that was marked in no way, had gone on for two seasons before Gelon had sickened of it. When the winter snows had melted and spring had come Gelon marched into the Aedui controlled lands and sat himself on the river that supplied Vellika with fresh water.

    No move to pollute or divert the river had been made yet, but that was because Gelon was hoping to lure the Gauls into attacking his position. Gelon was no fool, and he knew that if he could take Vellika intact, all of Cantabria would be his. History had proven that Kart-Hadast was happy to let generals sit in a territory they had conquered as long as they kept the peace and supplied taxes. The story of Akbar at Kyrene was proof enough of that.

    Gelon had few ambitions left, with no friends but the money in his paychest. Capturing Cantabria and settling there, far away from the men who wanted to kill him, would be a fair enough retirement.

    There was also the larger picture to consider. The threat from the Gauls spread along more borders than just the one he had crossed, and he knew Kart-Hadast was mustering its armies for war. Even Bodashtart Adys had been recalled from Greece to bring his army to Massalia. The man was not particularly remarkable, but he was a good soldier from what Gelon had heard.

    When the invasion occurred, and it would occur, it would leave Gelon well within friendly territory and he would not have to worry about angry, vengeful Gauls descending upon him



    Abydos Rusucuru: Mikra Skythia

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    Abydos set down the reed stylus and rubbed his sore eyes. It had been a very long day and paperwork was not something he wanted to do right now, especially not by candlelight aboard a rocking ship, anchored in a bay in Skythia. He had been dispatched here to delay the Pontic king, Intraphrenes Herakleotes.

    Pontus had decided to declare war on the Empire of Kart-Hadast, and Intrephrenes had taken the royal army north to attempt a conquest of the Bosphoran Chersonese. Although Pantikapaion remained under the protection of the Sarmatian horselords, Chersonesos had been a ward of Kart-Hadast for over a decade now.
    Word had also come in Chersonesos that Intraphrenes' son had attempted to besiege Mazaka, but had fled at the coming of Bodashtart Tunis and Theopropides, a Sidonian and a Galatian, both of equal ill-repute, yet they commanded a large enough army to press on and reverse the siege onto Amaseia.

    Intraphrenes had abandoned his northern campaign and set out to save his homeland, yet with no ships he had to take the land route. Abydos had taken ships and sailed his army into the delta north of Kallatis, from which he marched to the nearest major river and blocked the fords and bridges.

    The move had worked as planned and Intraphrenes had been forced to take an even more circuitous route than before. With no hope of reaching his home in time, and lost within barbarian lands, Intraphrenes was not much of a threat. Now Abydos merely had to wait with his ships and his army in the delta and observe what Intraphrenes did.

    Ancient Chrysippos Solios looked up from his own set of papers and regarded Abydos with curiosity. The Stoic philospher was ninety years old and still writing more in a day than Abydos ever could. The old man was a valued counsellor and tutor.

    “What are you writing old man?” Abydos had a good relationship with his mentor and teased him oft about his age.

    “I am in the process of writing the truth about the downfall of the King.” His voice was perhaps a bit wheezy, but it was still strong, and carried authority and wisdom with it.

    Abydos scoffed at his mentor's statement, “How can you write the truth of his downfall if you are to be yourself? You are ever poised between hypotheses, an arguer of both points of view.”

    Chrysippos chuckled dryly, “True, true. And Karneades will never let me forget that. Yet it is a question that must be addressed. The King's death is currently disputed to be from one of four causes, yet which is true?”

    Stylus went to table and hands folded together as Chrysippos settled in to lecture his pupil. “That the King passed away of illness is undisputed, but the source of this illness is the mystery, for he was always a lion of a man, as full of strength and vigour when he arrived in Anatolia as he was when he departed for Albion.

    'There are some who say an assassin poisoned him, others who say the illness was contracted in some manner from his nephew Briareus, even though they were leagues apart at the time, and still others who say it was a result of his sacrilege at Troia, when he plucked the Doru of Achilles himself from its resting place.

    'Yet there remains the possibility that none of these theories are correct, and that Germelqart succumbed, as many of us must, to the passage of time.”

    Silence stretched for a moment as the ship rocked slightly in the waters of the bay. “And which do you think it is old man? Why did our King die?”

    Chyrsippos smiled at his pupil, “The truth is that our real world is sometimes more boring or more exciting than that we create in our minds. In this particular case I do not believe that gods struck the King down for picking up a rusty old spear, but rather that he drove himself too hard to maintain his glory, and the victory he forced himself to win at Side would always have been his last.”



    Karneades the Academic: Atiqa

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    Bomilkar was ranting again. He often did these days. Whether it was about the ruin Germelqart's invasion of Asia had put upon the Empire, or about that upstart daughter of his, or about how Gelon Dertosa was going to start a war soon, it was always quite the rant to hear.

    At only twenty-three years of age Karneades was honoured to be heading the Academy at Atiqa, as well as paying visits to the one in Kart-Hadast. He had been encouraged to come over from Athens to instruct Bomilkar's son-in-law, Carthalo Ebusus, in the manner of rhetoric and Stoic philosophy. He had made a good enough impression since then to be given rule over the whole school.

    Ever since the Qarthadastim had taken Greece from the Antigonids they had been dragging Greek instructors, philosophers and even soldiers over to Kart-Hadast and Atiqa to improve the education of their youth and their social status in the Hellenic world.

    Although Karneades was tutoring Carthalo, Bomilkar often invited him to his manor, on what passed for an Akropolis in this town, to discuss matters of state. Two days ago it had been about the looming war with Gaul. Today it was about politics in the east.

    Roughly ten years past the Qarthadastim had cornered the last Antigonid in Bithynia, and shortly thereafter the Seleukids had declared war. It was a clash of empires on a titanic scale. The Qarthadastim controlled Greece, Egypt, Italy, Iberia, Africa and even distant Albion. The Seleukids ruled an empire stretching from Anatolia to India. In recent years the Seleukids had crushed two major revolts on their eastern fringe. The first had been from the horsemen known as the Parni, or Pahlava, the second from the Baktrian satrapy. Both revolts had failed and the Seleukid's control of their empire had solidified immensely.

    Word had arrived that day that an army levied in Egypt had been sent against the last Ptolemaic stronghold, Petra. While three armies, all bent on power and glory, rushed to seize Mesopotamia. The armies were led by the two Xenophanes and the young Briareus.

    Bomilkar was furious about this course of events. Not only was the invasion of the Sinai unsanctioned, a direct insult to his control of the realm, but the armies in Mesopotamia were bound to cause problems. Whoever seized Babylon would try to make themselves king, just like Germelqart did eight years before.

    It was a day Bomilkar often reminisced about, how Germelqart had strolled into the Hall of Judges as if he owned the whole world, and how the world had proven him right. The whole time Bomilkar had sat silent, brooding among his colleagues in the senate, unable to make a move against the mighty King. Yet time had determined the winner.

    Nowadays Bomilkar was the most powerful man in the Qarthadastim Empire, and his son Hasdrubal looked set to succeed him, assuming he wasn't forced to submit to one of the three generals vying for power in the east, or even worse, to Ramona, the daughter of the late King.

    Expansion was all that held the realm together now. If the wars stopped, if the armies stopped moving outward, then they would come back in, and civil war would ensue. Karneades hoped that didn't happen, civil war would likely lead to his death since he was with Bomilkar, and Bomilkar ruled through force of law, not force of arms.

    For now he was content to listen to Bomilkar rant about the situation in the east. Soon enough an army would be departing for Gaul, and then the subject would change again.



    Menestheus the Crippled: Sinai

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    The desert heat beat down on Menestheus as he lay bleeding in the sun. What a strange day it had been. Word had already come that Damaskos had fallen, and the revolt in Marmarike had failed to oust the governor, Yutpan Gisgo, from his seat for long. The army that had marched into Edom from Egypt had been made up of Egyptian and Nubian levies, hardly a worthy army, but it had outnumbered Menestheus' forces by a decent margin. Menestheus and his father had taken to the field against the enemy, confident of victory, even if over half their army was levies like the enemy's, the Ptolemaioi still had a crack centre of Phalangites and a devastating wing of heavy cavalry.

    He had never expected the enemy to hold, but they had, and then the Arabian levies under Menestheus had broken and run, like sheep! The enemy's right flank had folded around the phalanx and cut it off from retreat. That was about when the spear of the levy, a stupid barbarian savage from the lands of Aigyptoi, had gutted his horse. He struggled to his feat and looked for his father's familiar crested helm, but it was nowhere to be seen.

    There was no way Menestheus could have fought them all off, there were too many savages and too few bodyguards around him. They stabbed him, and stabbed him, over and over; and then they left.

    It was with a dim awareness that Menestheus saw the eagle land on his chest. The bird looked quizzically at him, as if surprised to find him here. It was as if the spirit of his ancestor Ptolemy was looking down in disappointment at him. With a final breath Menestheus closed his eyes and went to join his ancestors in the afterlife.


    The King, Germelqart Alalia, and his second in-command on the Asian invasion, Abascantus Haedus, also deceased in 192 BC.
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    I am not usually one for big wordy AAR's but that was a damn fine read. I really hope you keep it in the chapter style you seem to be doing here; a chapter for each character. Its much easier to follow because honestly these names mean very little to me; your presentation has made them come to life though.
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    Sons of Elissa


    Chapter 1

    A Time for War:
    Part I: The East



    Fall, 190 BC

    Abydos Rusucuru: Mikra Skythia


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    Abydos couldn't remember a more hectic morning than the one he had just gone through, he thought as he glanced at the roll of papyrus clutched in his right hand. He had been woken in his cabin by a scout telling him that Intraphrenes had marched through the night and was no more than a few miles from the delta. More than that, Intraphrenes had sent an advance party ahead that had slipped past Abydos' scouts and was all the way to the Thracian Chersonese by now.

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    It was a bold move, Intraphrenes was making strait for Abydos and his fleet. He knew that if he could take the ships he could be home and saving his sons in Amaseia within the month, while if he continued to march by land, harassed by Abydos, he may never make it home in time.

    Intraphrenes had a large contingent of Pontic heavy cavalry, headed by some of the best generals Asia had to offer, the cream of Pontic nobility. There was Hystaspis, Artabazos, Gobryas and the renowned Mithridates Kianos, a veteran of many battles. Abydos' own cavalry was equally numerous, but it was largely made up of untested Skythians who had been allowed to settle around Chersonesos.

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    With the Pontic King only a few miles out, and the sea to their backs, there was little choice but to move to face Intraphrenes in battle. Certainly Abydos could have run away, but it was contrary to his orders, and he would never live it down.

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    The battle deployment had been simple, The core of Abydos' line was comprised of hoplites and Getian mercenaries. They faced a sizeable Phalanx contingent on the Pontic side. Supporting the heavy infantry were Chersonese levies on the left, and Skythian light infantry on the right, and of course a wide variety of skirmishers and archers ranging ahead of the infantry. The right flank was where Abydos placed his Skythian cavalry, all four thousand of them. The left flank was composed of the Qarthadastim cavalry accompanying Abydos, only around five hundred strong.

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    The battle plan was simple. Engage, try to win through on the flanks and surround the enemy. Abydos himself was no soldier, he was a philosopher, a scholar, a man of books and rhetoric. Yet he was also a nobleman, and things were expected of noblemen.

    Never had Abydos expected the battle to go so well, the Skythians routed an almost equal number of heavy cavalry from the field and slew both the mighty Mithridates and the King, Intraphrenes. Artabazos was pulled from his saddle as he fled the battle. Only Histaspes and a little over three hundred of the once five thousand strong Pontic cavalry had survived.

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    Abydos' own Qarthadastim cavalry has suffered terrible losses in the battle, which was how he found himself here. Histaspis and three hundred fifty Pontic nobles sat, guarded, on the ground before him. It was time to address them.

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    “Your King is dead.” The words were blunt, but they were deep inside Getic territory and they needed to move soon. “And I have just received word,” Abydos held up the piece of papyrus clutched in his hand, “That his son, Asklepiodoros, died trying to break the siege of Amaseia.”

    In truth all three sons had died that day according to the letter from Nikaia. Bodashtart Tunis and Theopropides had been attacked by a force of five hundred Pontic cavalrymen under Alkimos Kianos, a foolish act of desperation, and they had sent their full three thousand Galatian cavalry under Bodashtart to throw them back. Asklepiodoros had seized the opportunity to attempt a sally from Amaseia, and charged the infantry under Theopropides. He had broken through on his right flank, and the left was giving way, when Bodashtart reappeared with the cavalry and rode down the majority of the Pontic army. A handful of survivors had made it back to Amaseia, but the city would likely not last long now.

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    “Your army is gone, your capitol will fall, and where will you be then?” There were gaps in Abydos' bodyguards that needed to be filled. “Will you be outlaws? Running from one Getic town to the next? Taking to the Steppe perhaps? I doubt it. You have seen first hand today what Getians and Skythians are capable of.”

    The persona of barbarism wasn't really what his men deserved, but it was an edge in getting through to these men. “If you come with me, of your own accord, and swear an oath of loyalty, I will take you home. From there, you will have a choice, to retire to your estates, and live out peaceful lives under the protection of Kart-Hadast, or to stay with me, and have a shot at glory, have a shot at something more than you have ever been offered before.”

    There was a stirring among the captives. They weren't convinced yet, but they were listening. “I will take you to lands of riches, to gold, and incense and precious jewels. You will be gods among men.” Could he fulfil any of his promises? He hoped so. With the Ptolemaioi destroyed and the Seleukids pushed back into Mesopotamia, Chrysippos figured war the Sab'yn empire of Arabia was only a matter of time. Likewise, once Pontus fell there was a good chance Hayasdan would declare war. And if neither of those scenarios came true, there was always the east, pursuing the damned Seleukids until they had nowhere to run. Oh yes, the world was a big place, and glory was to be found in so many places, even for a man more comfortable with books than swords.

    Had not Eumenes, little Eumenes, Alexander Megas' scribe and then Companion, proved that much so many years ago? Eumenes had been nothing when he started, yet for a time he had been regent of the empire, with power to disburse funds as he liked, command of the Silver Shields and general of Asia.

    “So what do you say? Will you stay here? Forgotten and forsaken in a cold and miserable land. Or will you ride with me?”

    Three hundred and fifty men rose to their knees, placed hand on heart, and swore to Abydos Rusucuru, the little scribe from Mastia.
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    Briareus Berenice: Syria

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    The men were getting unruly. Briareus had been marching them hard to make up for the time he lost when he was taken ill. They were a days ride past Antiocheia now and catching up on Xenophanes Gades, but word had it that Barca had left Palmyra and was well into Mesopotamia by now.

    In all respects Briareus was an unremarkable man. He was not well educated, he was not quick or witty, charismatic or well liked, not even particularly fit. If not for his uncle, Briareus would be no one. Yet now it seemed the fate of a dynasty had landed in his lap.

    Old Agrippa, a Roman retainer who had been attached to his father, was now Briareus' chief adviser. The man would never shut up about how much Briareus needed to become famous, how much Briareus needed to hold up his family's legacy, how much Briareus needed to take a shit.

    The man infuriated him to no end, always lording over him like a child, even though he was twenty-eight, and all because Agrippa had been through Albion with Germelqart. As if somehow being a soldier through one campaign made him so much better than everyone else.

    Yet it was old Agrippa, or become a pawn in someone else's game. Briareus may not have been that bright, but he understood that much. Agrippa's weight with the rank and file was all that held the green army together, and without the army, Briareus could be used as a figurehead by someone else, the Xenophanes, old man Bomilkar, or his cousin, Ramona. As figurehead he would only stay alive so long as they needed him, then he would be tossed aside.

    There was a time when Briareus didn't want much out of the world, just to eat, sleep, fuck and go about his business. But things had changed now. The other generals in the Asian force would never forget who Briareus had been related to, neither would Ramona or Bomilkar. The only way to survive now was to beat them at their own game, and win the glory they all aspired to.

    Agrippa entered the tent in a hurry, the morning sun blazing around him like an aura. The man was harder than anyone else Briareus had ever known. Even at seventy-three he was muscled, lean and quick. He could take any five, no, any ten of the best swords in the army and come out on top. His angular jaw and the scar that ran from cheek to jowl made other men look away and made enemies flee before him on the battlefield, or so the stories said, Briareus had yet to see it himself.

    Walking over to Briareus' desk, his every movement emphasizing how deadly and confident he was, Agrippa laid a papyrus scroll on the desk and stood back with a smile that made Briareus want to shudder. Unrolling the sheet, Briareus read the message. It was short and to the point, a letter from the independent king of Sidon, Abydos Corduba, explaining that his kingdom was under attack by the armies of Sab'yn.

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    So why was Agrippa smiling? “Tell me Agrippa, how is this good news?” Briareus asked with scorn in his voice.

    Agrippa didn't take kindly to that, but then Briareus had not meant to be kind. The old man scowled at him and leaned forward, placing his hands on the desk, his face even more menacing this close, “Don't get short with me boy. I've gutted men twice your size who had more balls and brains than you'll ever get.”

    The veteran took a moment to calm himself before continuing, “Now pay attention boy, this attack on one of our allies can't be ignored, and yours is the closest army at hand. The other idiots are rushing off to seize Babylon, but they'll get stuck there I'm sure. The Seleukids must know this is coming by now, they have to. And once our armies hold Babylon, they'll have to keep holding it.

    'But if you answer this summons from Sidon and save them from those Arabian bastards, you'll be a genuine hero. Abydos Corduba will give you his full backing politically. And if you take it one step further, annihilate the whole fucking peninsula, just like you're uncle did in Albion, then the politicians will kiss your feet, the crowds will cheer your name and the whores will refuse your coin.”

    Agrippa paused and stared straight into Briareus' eyes, Briareus could have sworn those eyes were boring right through him, stripping away his skin to see straight into his soul.

    “So how does that sound to you boy?”

    “I'm not a boy.” Briareus had had enough of being bullied, of being told what he may or may not do by an indecent, cantankerous, foul-mouthed old goat of a soldier.

    The old soldier actually looked taken aback for a moment, or perhaps it was only wishful thinking. That moment passed and Agrippa's vicious smile appeared again. “There's fire in your voice. That's good, you'll need it.” Agrippa leaned in closer than before, his face inches from Briareus'. When he spoke his voice was low, little more than a whisper, “When you kill a man for the first time, when you see the life drain from his eyes, feel the warmth go out of his flesh. When you see the blood on your hands and know for the first time what that's like . . .” He stopped, stood up and stepped back, “Then you'll be a man.”

    Agrippa turned to go and halted just before the tent flaps, “We're going south, have that slave of yours pack your things.”

    With that Agrippa was gone and Briareus collapsed back into his chair, completely drained. It was going to be a hard march south and then men weren't going to like it. Briareus knew how they felt.



    Xenophanes Barca: Mesopotamia

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    Horns blared in the early morning air as Elissa, Barca's black Iberian steed, tossed her head and danced a little, spouts of dust rising into the air as her hooves hit the dry sand. Across the field, gleaming in the harsh desert sun, sat the Seleukid army, arrayed in all its glory.

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    Xenophanes had been in the middle of crossing the Euphrates on his march for Babylon when his scouts reported that the Seleukid army had gotten round behind them, coming out of the desert where no one expected them to be. But their commander had fouled his plan. Without enough water and supplies to last them through the march, the army had been forced to stop at an oasis to resupply. They had lost their momentum and the element of surprise, now Xenophanes was going to make them pay for it.

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    Other horses whinnied and danced around Xenophanes, fifteen hundred Phoenician and Latin cavalry. Around him were heroes of the Anatolian campaign, men who had saved his life countless times during the first battles with the Seleukids. There was Oudysseos the Thessalian, Metrodorus the Thracian and Diogenes the Ionian.

    Xenophanes knew that Timasion, the Campanian oaf who had come to Anatolia with Germelqart, was on the other flank with a full two thousand Campanian and Latin cavalry. Timasion was generally useless, but his connection to the old king made him a valuable tool and piece of propaganda.

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    With any luck this battle would be the beginning of a glorious entry into Babylon. Like Alexander before before him, Xenophanes would march into the city and become more famous than his father or even his grandfather Himilcar. It wasn't Gaugamela, but then Gaugamela had been of little note before Alexander won his great victory there. Perhaps one day men would speak of this battle and of Xenophanes just as they now did of Alexander and Gaugamela.

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    The enemy were closing and the time had come for the battle. Words had been spoken, orders had been given and the battle was about to commence. Xenophanes made a quick prayer to Melqart, that he might have strength this day, that his enemies might flee before him. With a final check of his sword, Xenophanes raised his lance and spurred Elissa forward.

    Fifteen hundred cavalry followed him forward. Like a flock of birds, coordinated, of one mind and one purpose, the cavalry increased their speed. The enemy was coming into view now, a flank comprised of mercenaries from Galatia and Kappadokia. The cavalrymen lowered their lances as one, the horn blast echoing over the plains above the thunder of hooves.

    The distance closed and Xenophanes aimed at his first target, an ugly Kappadokian screaming and waving an axe above his head. The lance plunged into the man's chest, a fountain of blood erupting out of him. The lance was let go as the Kappadokian's dead weight carried it to the ground. Xenophanes pulled out his kopis and prepared to lay into the enemy when he saw them routing before him.

    This was going to be an easy battle.

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    Theodekles the Killer: Sophene: Karkathiokerta

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    The manner hall where Theodekles was being entertained was an impressive one to be sure, but nothing like the hall back in Sidon. This place had only recently come under Qarthadastim control and had not yet been upgraded to the standards that befitted such.

    Across the table sat Bodashtart Phameas, an arrogant Qarthadastim general. “Why won't you do it?” Phameas asked. They had been discussing the same subject for some time now, but Bodashtart Phameas refused to give up.

    “I have told you before,” Theodekles continued, “I am not a spy to go snooping about for you. I am a soldier. I fought on the walls of Sidon with Abydos Corduba to repel Menestheus and I marched with Abdeshmun to capture Damaskos, the last Ptolemaic stronghold in the north.”

    Theodekles sniffed, “Besides, I am not sworn to obey any Qarthadastim, only my king in Sidon.”

    “And who do you think payed for your king's little rebellion? Or helped him pay for his armies and his public works? And who was it that fought to get the Ptolemaioi off your back, spilling our blood for your freedom?” Phameas was looking at Theodekles intently, the rhetorical questions hanging ominously in the air.

    “Its not like I'm asking much of you,” Phameas continued, sitting back in his plush chair, “I just want you to take a little trip, travel through the Hayasdan lands and then come back. All you have to do is look, and then tell me what you see.”

    A servant came over and handed a cup of wine to the general. He accepted it, his fifth since the meeting started, and proceeded to take a very long drink. When he stopped the mug was empty and he was sighing with satisfaction. Placing the mug back on the tray, he proceeded to slap the serving girl's ass before returning to the conversation.

    “Now where was I?” The question was once again rhetorical, Phameas was a sharp man, even if he drank too much, “Ah yes, my cousin Xenophanes, the Barcid one,” he made the correction as if it needed to be said, but Theodekles was not ignorant, he knew who was related to who, “Is entering hostile lands to the south even as we speak, and I just want to make sure the north stays safe. There have been a lot of Hayasdan spies swarming about lately, and yes they are spies, not just traders and dignitaries,” Theodekles raised an eyebrow at the man's need to defend his opinion about the spies, “and I want to know what they are up to down here.”

    “Perhaps they are doing exactly what you are sending me to do?”

    That comment produced a stream of laughter out of Phameas. When he could finally breath again he rose from his seat and motioned for Theodekles to rise as well as he came over. Clapping a hand on Theodekles' back, Phameas produced a coin purse from his robes, “I knew you were the right man for the job Theodekles. Now you shouldn't be gone for long, and this coin should more than keep you while you're away.” Phameas began to walk away, not allowing Theodekles to object again, “And you'll get the rest when you return.”

    ***

    It was getting dark as Theodekles began taking the road out of Karkathiokerta. He was not more than two miles out of town when he spotted a shape lying on the side of the road. Rushing over to the prone form, Theodekles began to check him out. The man was Asian, clearly, and he looked like he had taken a bad fall. Theodekles took out his water bag and splashed some on the man's face.

    The man awoke with a start and glanced about him warily. “Its alright, my name is Theodekles. Who are you, and how did you get here?”

    “My name is Hayk of Manavazian,” The man said, Theodekles grunted as he felt something pierce his side and slip between his ribs, “And I came here to kill you.”

    Theodekles' body toppled to the side of the road as Hayk stood up, brushed himself off, and began walking to Karkathiokerta, humming a childhood tune as he went.
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    I am not usually one for big wordy AAR's but that was a damn fine read. I really hope you keep it in the chapter style you seem to be doing here; a chapter for each character. Its much easier to follow because honestly these names mean very little to me; your presentation has made them come to life though.
    Thanks Blxz! I really appreciate the compliment. Yeah it is a bit wordy, but I've had this story in mind for a while and the writing bug caught me. I intend to keep it in this style due to the number of characters and the huge distances involved, to prevent confusion as you suggested.



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    Wait, what? your top level assassin (who was on a spying mission) got assassinated by a spy who was on an assassination mission.....? I am so confused.

    Also do you plan on taking this story somewhere or are you literally just playing the game and writing where the game follows? It certainly seems like there is potential for things to go somewhere but if you keep playing as well as you are I can see this becoming a world conquest in a while.

    Still, very nice. Keep it up!
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    Partially playing, partially have a story in mind, possibly planning on having a civil war but I'm not sure what all units can become eleutheroi from the Carthaginian roster, have to look into that. Mostly I am practicing my writing since I am writing a novel right now but am stuck at a spot.

    As for the assassin, I ordered him to kill the spy, and he died, I was very surprised, but I decided to try and spin as a fun little story.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Tanit View Post
    As for the assassin, I ordered him to kill the spy, and he died, I was very surprised, but I decided to try and spin as a fun little story.
    Suspected as much. Poor bloke.
    Also....civil war. Nice. But such a pity to pull that empire apart.... =(
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    nice roman empire, if you know what i mean

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    Next update is going up later tonight or tomorrow morning. Been busy with few projects and setting up a new computer which slows down writing. Also been further developing my direction for this story. Thanks for the comments guys!



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    Cool stuff. I was worried that you had abandoned it.

    EDIT: Also 300 views but only 2 people commenting. Seems like you have a few readers even though it doesn't appear that way at first.
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    Sons of Elissa


    Chapter 2

    A Time for War:
    Part II: The West



    Fall, 190 BC

    Gelon Dertosa: Cantabria


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    The wind that blew in from the sea, rising up against the foot of the mountain like a wave crashing against a cliff, was chill that morning. Winter was fast approaching and the snows would hit here, up in the high passes where the army was camped, first and hardest. The thick wolf-skin cloak Gelon had adopted would not be enough to keep him warm when that time came.

    Two options were open to him, for there was no way the army would survive camping on the river in the foothills of the mountains through the winter. On the one hand he could retreat back to Pallantia for the winter, his challenge unanswered, and the uneasy peace would continue, and the Gauls would muster more men. On the other, he could push forward, engage the army camped outside Vellika and make a push for the town itself.

    Both options presented their own difficulties, their pros and cons, but only one offered any reward. Thus was the course set. Gelon felt the warm muzzle and wet nose of his hound nuzzle up under his hand and he let himself pet the dog as he wrestled with his conscience one last time, the cool wind that heralded winter stirring his hair.

    What did he owe Kart-Hadast? Nothing surely, they had paid him to give up his rebellion and he had accepted. Then they had offered him the command of an army, and how could he refuse? Taking the bribe had been a foolish choice, but it was one he had to live with now. At the time it had seemed so simple. He was tired, he hadn't bathed in a month, nor slept in days. The men with him had been starving and the much larger loyalist army had been closing in.

    Yet at least life had been simple then. Kart-Hadast was the enemy, blank, the governor in Mastia, was the enemy. Now his old supporters were his enemies, the Gauls were enemies, and the Qarthadastim could never be sure of him.

    A few leagues away, down in the lowlands, was the prize that might solve everything for him. Vellika had good walls, good cropland, a good supply of water, and was guarded to the north by the Pyrenees.

    The only problem with that was the war it would start. Right now it was something of a cold war. No battles were fought, trading ships still sailed, yet spies crossed borders, armies massed, and the men walked lightly, their voices quiet and subdued. Every one of them felt the weight of what was coming, the bones were still rolling, but however they landed, it would not be good.

    Better to get it over with. All of this manoeuvring, all of the shows of force and subtle gestures was enough to make a man sick to the stomach. Better a straight up fight, over and done with.

    With his mind made up, Gelon gave his dog a final pet and went to collect his spear from that young squire with the funny left eye before meeting his master of horse. There was a battle to plan.

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    Carpophorus Phameas: Zeugitania

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    Smoke from incense burners drifted lazily into the air, giving the whole room a hazy appearance. Chanting reverberated off the walls and echoed back from the rafters. Only a few candles lit the little room.

    All around Carpophorus, men in robes walked in circles, stopped, and then continued, reciting all the while. The rites were ancient, an initiation into a following much older than Kart-Hadast. And that initiation, that honour, was being bestowed on Carpophorus.

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    The priests told Carpophorus that they had received a sign, and that he was blessed with the gods' favour in his new role as a general of Carthage. It was difficult to get a straight answer from them about what the sign was, but it had clearly been convincing.

    All the while Carpophorus could only think of Ramona. The woman was more than twice his age, but she was exquisite. The woman had captured her, and likely didn't even know it. Or perhaps she did. There were times in their relationship where she seemed and acted . . . odd.

    In any case, he was leaving Kart-Hadast after the ceremony, and it would be months, or even years before he saw Ramona again. The thought made him sad, and angry. He wanted to weep, he wanted to scream, but he didn't. His chest felt tight.

    The priests had an ox for the offering and Carpophorus cringed a little as they slaughtered the beast, blood flowing freely out its neck. A small bowl was used to collect some of the blood and it was brought over to him. He was instructed to put his hands in the blood and recite the words they had taught him.

    The words came easily enough, they had been drilled into him in the hours beforehand, but his heart wasn't really in it.

    It was not long before the ceremony was over and Carpophorus was on his way, boarding ship for West Africa to pick up the troops that would form his army. They would be in Gaul within the year if all went well.

    Carpophorus wondered what would happen on the campaign, how he would fair, what he would gain. His cousins were already famous generals in the east, Bodashtart Phameas and Xenophanes Barca. They were reaping in the glory already, but Carpophorus was still young and full of vigour. He had an army that would soon be his and a campaign that could make him as much of a hero as either of his cousins.


    Ramona: Zeugitania: Kart-Hadast

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    There was no where in the city as crowded, noisy and busy as the market complex near the harbour and the council hall. People from every walk of life and every country in the world, or so it seemed, filled the bustling marketplace with their shouts, their laughter and their conversation. Children ran between groups of adults, off to play games and explore the city, or to see what and who had come in on the ships today.

    A group of merchants from Capua were haggling with a fat Qarthadastim over the price of Samnite bronze work. A group of surly Gallic warriors, their weapons left behind wherever they were staying, were talking to a recruiter hunting for mercenaries. There were Greeks, Sidonians, Iberians, Egyptians, Numidians, Romans, Gauls and even men from Albion plying tin.

    People at market talked, they gossiped and gave their opinions on any topic you could want. It was a good place to get a feel for the mood of the city, to hear the latest rumour, or start one if you wanted.

    Ramona liked coming to the market for that very reason. Certainly it was nice to get pottery from Athenai, or dyes from Tyre, or exotic foreign jewelry, but the real treasure was to be found in conversation.

    These days the people were abuzz with talk of the mighty generals in the east, or of how their loved ones, or those of people they knew, were off to join the army headed for Gaul. Mostly the merchants were upset with that prospect. A war with Gaul would hurt trade and make it hard to find good iron.

    That was something Ramona found particularly ironic. A good portion of the iron arming the soldiers who would be setting out soon had come from Gaul originally. So had some of the gold jewelry Ramona had in a box back home, but that hardly mattered. That Gallic iron would soon vanquish Gaul was an example of just how cruel the Gods could be in their ways.

    The priests said the possible invasion of Gaul would be blessed if it happened. Birds had flown a certain way and Carpophorus was said to have been sanctioned by Baal. Not her husband Zamolxis, the senior general on the expedition, no, foolish young Carpophorus.

    As far as Ramona could tell this move had old Bomilkar written all over it. He was on to her and this was likely a move to curb to her ambitions. But she had more tricks up her sleeve than the old man knew of, and she would see her husband seated on a throne yet.

    A sigh escaped Ramona as she saw one woman in particular coming towards her through the throng. Actaee was the wife of Hasdrubal, Bomilkar's promising son. The two women had never gotten along, particularly when Ramona's father had been at the height of his power and it had looked like Hasdrubal would never be more than a simple politician and governor.

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    It was possible that Ramona had lorded the fact over Actaee a little, and it was something she regretted now, for Actaee lost no opportunity to revel in the change of fate.

    The insufferable woman had closed the distance and as she spoke up to get Ramona's attention, Ramona was resigned to the fact that she would not be able to ignore the woman. “Good afternoon Ramona. How are the wares today?”

    “Nothing new or interesting today I'm afraid.” Ramona replied with a smile.

    “Really?” Actaee responded with mock disappointment and surprise, “That is truly a pity, since your last purchase is being shipped away today.”

    The woman knew too much, or at least thought she did. How she had found out about Carpophorus, Ramona didn't know, but she planned to find out. Still, there were things Ramona knew as well.

    “It is a pity isn't it?” Ramona's voice was as sweet as honey, “And as much for your husband, I hear he has tired of his latest trinket already.”

    Actaee stiffened with anger, her cheeks flushed red. The woman didn't know how to control herself, and that was why she would never get the better of Ramona. That Hasdrubal was less than faithful to his wife was the worst kept secret in the city.

    Leaving Actaee sputtering with indignation, Ramona slipped away through the crowds and headed to her estates. The estates belonged to her, as the sole heir of her father's possessions, and she had convinced Zamolxis to move there with her instead of joining him at his family's estates in Kirtan.

    The large building complex was situated halfway up the fortified akropolis at the heart of the city and easily dominated the surrounding structures. Her father had ensured that everyone in Kart-Hadast knew where they lived, and just how powerful they were.

    Zamolxis was waiting for her when she arrived in the entrance hall, sitting on the bench beside the pool in the centre of the room, the sun shining down on him through the opening in the ceiling. The light shining on him made him look particularly handsome today. The thought seemed odd when Ramona considered it. The marriage had been a purely political move, yet over the last few months she had found herself becoming . . . fond of the man.

    He had a fiery personality that often put him in awkward situations, for he was not the brightest of men, but he was strong, loyal and devout. At this particular moment he was studying what looked like a piece of correspondence. Seeing her come in, Zamolxis set the letter down and stood up, unusually distant today, and came to greet her.

    “Welcome home Ramona. How was the marketplace?” He smiled, but there was a curious look in his eyes.

    “It was less than satisfactory today. Is something wrong my husband?” He looked away at some distant spot on the floor, his brows lowering and his lips forming a frown, “You seem troubled.”

    Ramona waited patiently while she watched him mull over what he wanted to say in his head, finally he spoke, “I was in the council today, discussing the organization of our troops for the journey to Gaul, when I was presented with the ugliest of speculation from Eshmunkhilletz, Hasdrubal's puppet amongst the Judges.” Zamolxis turned back to look Ramona in the eyes, “He seems to think that you are keeping secrets from me.”

    Whoever had found out, however they had found out, it went well beyond Actaee it seemed. Ramona could feel herself backed into the corner. There was no recourse now, she had to tell her husband the truth, or at least enough of it to allay his suspicions. She cast her eyes down and made her voice soft and meek, “It is true that I have not been entirely honest with you husband.” She could see anger growing in his eyes, “I have been, without your consent, securing the loyalty of officers in the Gallic Expedition to ensure your command reigns supreme, and that credit for our victories goes to you.”

    It was not necessary to tell him how those loyalties had been obtained, bribery, blackmail, extortion, and the occasional romance, but she could no longer hide her intentions from him.

    Anger went out of his face, its place quickly taken by confusion. He sputtered for a moment, trying to find the words he wanted. “Why?”

    Sooner or later old Bomilkar, or his son, would get to Zamolxis and try to turn him against her. Her only choice was to be forthcoming with him, and hope she could keep him on her side. Ramona shrugged and sighed, “Because I want back what I lost, because my father's death made me a pariah in upper society, because I'd like to see Hasdrubal and Actaee's bodies swinging from the walls one day.”

    Zamolxis was completely taken aback, his face was pale and he looked like he had taken a shot to the gut. Backing up to where the bench was, Zamolxis sat down hard. He tried to form a question, his mouth opening and closing, yet nothing intelligible came out.

    “Am I using you for my ambitions as well?” Ramona tilted her head in thought, “I suppose I was, initially.” The hurt that appeared on her husband's face stung more than Ramona had expected it would. “But my affection for you has grown since we were wed, I could even say I love you.” The words hung in the air for a moment, there seemed to be no sound, no world, nothing except the conversation between the two of them.

    Ramona knelt down in front of her husband and bowed her head, “I want my revenge, I will not deny it. But I do not want to lose you. If you ask it of me, I will stop.”

    Time seemed to stretch into an eternity as she awaited his answer. After what seemed a lifetime she felt his hand gently cup her chin, the fingers sliding over her skin lightly. Very slowly, he raised her head until their eyes met, “I love you Ramona, and I would give you anything you want in the whole world. If you ask me for a throne, I shall give you a throne. If you want Hasdrubal's head, then I will give it to you.”


    Karneades Akademaikos: Atiqa

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    “Bodashtart Adys has passed Messana and is likely halfway up Italy by now.” Hasdrubal's smooth voice carried through the chamber they were in, sequestered away in the estates of Bomilkar's family.

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    “And your point brother?” Carthalo was as bright as his brother-in-law, but was growing tired of waiting for their father to arrive while listening to Hasdrubal's complaints.

    “My point, brother, is that Adys will most likely be engaging the Gauls in just a few weeks time, and he has no support.” Hasdrubal stalked around the table in the centre of the room and gestured to the map of the empire sprawled out in front of them. “The levying of troops is taking longer than we expected, we should have dispatched troops from Albion and Italy already.”

    “I ordered their dispatch before I called on Adys.” Bomilkar stood in the doorway, wreathed in shadows, looking broad, powerful and menacing. “By now the Italians should be approaching Mediolanum, and the troops from Albion should have already landed in northern Gaul.”

    Hasdrubal dropped his head, “My apologies father.”

    Bomilkar waved his hand dismissively as he entered the room and approached the table, “Don't apologize for suggesting the correct course of action. I'm glad you have a grasp of the situation.”

    “Why didn't you tell us father?” Carthalo was up from his seat to greet his father-in-law.

    Karneades threw in his voice from his seat to the right of the table, “An excellent question my lord Bomilkar.” His choice of words was somewhat mocking, but it was why Bomilkar liked having him around, he was never afraid to voice his opinion. Karneades had more than once voiced his disregard for Bomilkar's new 'reign' in Kart-Hadast, his hypocrisy in the aftermath of Germelqart's death.

    Bomilkar sneered at the Stoic, “I keep my counsel closer than my undergarments, and its a lesson I want my sons to take to heart. Conveniently, it also gave me a chance to see if they were paying attention to the situation,” Bomilkar smiled at his sons, “which they were.”

    “More important, however, is this.” Bomilkar tossed a scroll on the table, his face serious once again.

    Hasdrubal and Carthalo read it over quickly before passing it to Karneades. It was from Yutpan Gisgo, the governor in Paraitonion. Menestheus, the last Ptolemy, was dead.

    “That will make our south-eastern flank much more secure.” Carthalo smiled and surveyed the relevant portion of the map.

    “Perhaps,” Karneades replied, “perhaps not.”

    “Why wouldn't it be Karneades?” Hasdrubal crossed his arms and regarded the philosopher. He was a little older than the Greek, which made him competitive and confrontational at times. He did not regard Karneades' advice as keenly as his father did.

    “It is only this,” Karneades began as he approached the map himself, “The Arabs have a very large build-up of military forces in Nabateia, and their peace with us is conditional only upon our mutual struggle with the Ptolemies.”

    Karneades' hand brushed the coastline of Arabia from Gerrha in the east, round the promontory and the incense coast, across the capital of Maryab and up to Bostra. “With no mutual enemies, and our armies busy fighting against the Seleukids and Gauls, what is to stop the Arabs invading the Sidonian Kingdom?” The Stoic's hand came to rest on Sidon, seat of King Abydos.

    “He is an ally, not a subject, in spite of everything Kart-Hadast has done for him, and his conquests have put him in command of Hierosolyma and Damascus, making him border the Arabs and their armies.

    'They may think,” Karneades gestured with a raised finger and eyebrow, “that since we are distracted, and have been friends for so long, we may overlook the fall of Abydos.”

    Hasdrubal scoffed at the Philosopher, “They wouldn't dare. Even if they could call on their allies in Meroe, they wouldn't dare.”

    Karneades was about to rebuke Hasdrubal when Bomilkar's hand waved for silence, “You should pay more attention to Karneades son, he has a quick mind. Still, we can hope for now that the Sabeans will not attack yet, and deal with it in due course if they do. We have armies and governors in the region for a reason, and they should be able to hold out for now if we are betrayed.

    'In the meantime we must attend to the matters at hand, have you done as I instructed Hasdrubal?”

    Hasdrubal smiled viciously, “Yes father, Carpophorus is now a priest of Ba'al, and he had some most interesting sins to be cleansed of. It seems our lioness, Ramona, has been seducing the poor young man. With Carpophorus aboard a ship for Ippone that has stopped, and I had Eshmunkhilletz bring the matter subtly before Zamolxis, we shall see what he does about his unfaithful wife.”

    Bomilkar nodded satisfactorally, “Very good news son. I'd be happier if we could just kill the woman, but the people would be in uproar if anything happened to Germelqart's daughter. Still, we may yet put a curb on her ambitions.”

    All this talk of murder, political manoeuvring and abuse of the sacred priesthood was most upsetting for Karneades. Of course it was the priesthood of Ba'al, not his own gods, but if Bomilkar would disrespect his own gods, how much more so the gods of another people?

    There were days when Karneades wondered if he had thrown his lot in with the wrong man.


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    An old man sat alone on a log in the woods, skinning the rabbit he had snared. His right leg was bent, supporting the weight of the rabbit on his knee while his left leg stuck out straight, a thick wooden crutch laying alongside it. His hair was as grey as a cloudy morning, and his beard and moustache were full. Deep lines clung under the eyes of a man who had seen much in his life.

    The leader of the Noricae scouting party signalled for his men to spread out through the bush and surround the old man. Beyond him lay the Sweboz encampment, the army the Noricae had been tracking since it withdrew from their territory.

    With the men in place the Noricae leader charged out of the bushes and swung his sword at the old man. The sword cut only air as the old man ducked and rolled to the left, coming up with knife in one hand and crutch in the other.

    Another Noricae came out of the brush on the left, to the lone man's right, thrusting a spear at him. The old man leaned back, almost casually, letting the spear pass in front of him. Hooking the spear under his left arm, the old man pulled, bringing his adversary close enough to plunge the dagger into the Noricae's throat. The scout dropped to his knees, eyes full of shock and blood bubbling out of his mouth and throat.

    The Noricae leader advanced cautiously, shield raised, trying to hold the old man's attention while two more of his party came at him from behind. The old man wasn't fooled. Picking his crutch up in his left hand like a spear, he thrust forward against the leader's shield with surprising strength, knocking him back.

    Spinning on his right leg, his left following almost uselessly, the old man met his other two attackers. The one on the right took a backhanded swing with a longsword, and the Noricae on the left came at him with a downward axe stroke at the same time. The old man met the sword swing with his knife, his whole arm quivering from the effort, and thrust his crutch into the axeman's throat, causing the axe to sail harmlessly over his shoulder to the sickening crunch of the man's windpipe colapsing.

    The thrust with the crutch had put him off balance however, and the old man tumbled to the ground. Seizing the opportunity, longsword hacked downwards, but the sword severed crutch instead of arm. The old man plunged his dagger into longsword's foot and the man fell backwards with a shout.

    All of this happened in only seconds, and the old man was already struggling to one knee as the Noricae leader returned to the fray. He thrust at the old man's side, but the man twisted enough that the sword only scratched his skin, a thin line of blood welling up along the line. Grasping the leader's sword wrist, the old man brought his left arm down hard on the Noricae's arm, snapping the bone.

    Longsword was on his feet and trying to hobble back into the woods at this point, moving faster than the old man could without his crutch. Reaching down, the old man picked up the leader's fallen sword and chucked it at longsword's retreating form, the sword piercing the Noricae's back.

    The leader couldn't believe what had happened. One lame old man had killed all three of his men and broken his arm. The pain was overwhelming and the Noricae leader watched, black closing in around his vision, as the old man picked the fallen spear up off the ground and put the scouting leader out of his misery.

    It was getting dark when the old man re-entered the Sweboz camp, using a bloody spear as a crutch to help his lame leg. After ordering that the men who were on patrol be put on half-rations for a week, and that someone make him a new crutch, Wilagastiz, chieftain of the Sweboz confederacy, and of all Germans, made his way to his tent to have his wound looked at and to get a drink.

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    Some Notes:
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    1: There are no battle pictures, my apologies, I went through what I had taken and none looked good, either way I want to push on to the next chapter
    2: Its still the same year, again sorry, but there was some buildup to do storywise. Things should start moving a little faster now
    3: Why Wilagastiz? I have been watching this guy kick ass in central europe for decades now, from before he was even faction heir, he is getting old and I wanted some part of his awesomeness to be known, besides, it may be hinting at story still to come :)
    4: Why the priesthood thing with carpo? Well, being a priest did not preclude being a general back then, and in one turn the guy got three priest ancilliaries and 'favour of the gods', besides, gave me the chance for some political nastiness
    5: Tearing the empire apart, I don't feel quite so bad about that now . . .
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    Wow, Wilagastiz is a champion! I love it when you find an awesome little general running around, its such a shame when they sometimes try and attack the player faction though.

    Also, the story seems to be getting better. Maybe I just know who the characters are now; either way, I like the writing very much.
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    Only read a few pieces so far, but it looks like you're a gifted writer, Tanit. It reads like a book. Very nice.
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    Wait, the Arche actually still lives? I always dies in my playthroughs, even if I'm on the other side of the world
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    Yeah, not only did they survive, but they also killed Pahalava and Baktria.



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    Although its only been a few days I am still hoping you haven't given up. I can be patient though. Best of luck with the writing.
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    Thanks Blxz, just been busy with RL. Should be back to this by the weekend.



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    Looks like a very entertaining read. Will read it in the next couple of days in its entirety. Hope you can keep up with this :).

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    I understand that you are busy with real life, but just a friendly bump to show that I am still checking back here every day or so. Wishing you some free time in the near future.
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    Yes, had a fever the past five days, doesn't encourage writing. As soon as I am better I will return to this. Thanks Blxz!



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    Very nice Tanit! Always nice to see quality AAR's for EB.
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    Presently writing chapter 3. Should be up in a day or 2, tomorrow is a busy day for me.



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    That is great news. Looking forward to Chapter 3.

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    I'm giddy with both caffeine and anticipation. Can't wait.
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    Sad face.
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    Sorry, been kind of a hellish week and not much time for writing, still alive and determined though!



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    Hope real life improves for you Tanit. We, readers of the AAR can wait.

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    Yeah, happy to wait. I don't mean to hurry you. I just want you to be aware that I have not forgotten about your thread and still check it occasionally.

    In fact, I will be away on pilgrimage for the next 2 months so won't be checking back. That should be ample time to get out an update or 2 for me =) Can't wait!
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    Back from my pilgrimage, its update time.....
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