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surprisingly keith
03-26-2008, 15:59
(deleted because insulted the forum admin)

DaCrAzYmOfO
03-26-2008, 18:54
Pretty darn good IMO

Emperor Burakuku
03-26-2008, 22:12
Same here :). I demand more dude!

cmacq
03-26-2008, 22:58
Now you've gone and bloody done it. They'll be on you like a pack of harpies.
More, more, more...

and more.

Emperor Burakuku
03-26-2008, 23:23
Is just that we like poetry. I wish I could compose in english but I know my limits. So when I will conquer Earth and all will speak romanian, I will reveal my work. Till then... I can only admire the ones who can.

cmacq
03-26-2008, 23:32
Is just that we like poetry. I wish I could compose in english but I know my limits. So when I will conquer Earth and all will speak romanian, I will reveal my work. Till then... I can only admire the ones who can.

Whom does this remind me of???

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4o7f-eu_c7E

Emperor Burakuku
03-26-2008, 23:38
Whom does this remind me of???

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4o7f-eu_c7E

And you're probably right, but this thread it's about someshing else so let's not exagerate, right? :)

General Appo
03-27-2008, 00:15
Good poem, but do you actually think of how many fathers you´ve killed after a battle? Cause if you do, get help!!! They´re fricking pixels, they don´t have babies, apart from pixel-babies, and those suckers deserve to be orphaned.

Maeran
03-27-2008, 01:53
Is just that we like poetry. I wish I could compose in english but I know my limits. So when I will conquer Earth and all will speak romanian, I will reveal my work. Till then... I can only admire the ones who can.

It is easy when you have spoken English for most of your life. If I were you Burakuku, I'd show us the stuff you have in Romanian. There may be Romanian speakers here who will appreciate it. And for the rest of us- well, it is no worse than you trying to grasp English poetry.

Nice poem Keith. I found it a bit frustrating though, since it is informed by more modern (than the EB period) ideas, but is still full of archaic dost thous and such.

neither modern nor ancient. I am almost tempted to try some ancient meter or something more modern but using the imagery of sprites summoned into existence to fight and die for an unseen master, before both victor and vanquished are returned to oblivion as the campaign screen loads.

Ibrahim
03-27-2008, 17:12
write a poem on the gaesatae!!!!:horn:

it's a poignant poem, nice one too:yes: :yes: . But their pixels you know....:laugh4:

pezhetairoi
03-28-2008, 04:58
Cmacq, why have you got a youtube video for every occasion? It's getting disturbing. XD

You could be the Council of Ten's Yeoman of the Youtube.

cmacq
03-28-2008, 05:11
Well then...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gYEf8XZKlUU&feature=related

Bleak
03-29-2008, 13:50
Nice. Very moving.

Bleak
04-12-2008, 12:47
Hang on a minute...
Anybody else realised that this poem is an acrostic?

Nice indeed....

keravnos
04-12-2008, 13:01
Bloody marvelous. :yes:
Thank you for that poem.

__WHAT THE___

Gebeleisis
04-12-2008, 13:03
well you had to post it didnt you? Now you got a hellot of fans that demand to write more,and im between them:laugh4: