West to East AAR

[Emperor of Graal]

New AAR about Makedon on Vanilla RTW
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I made a new map.

[Emperor of Graal]

The First Years
The Family tree
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Antiginos of Thessalonica was a well known General in Thessalia.
He helped Macedon with financing and maintaining his armies.
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Euenus Of Thessalia was a man who helped Antiginos on his rise to power supporting his claim to Macedon when
King Kleomenes died. His son Kleomenes 2nd is leader of Sparta.
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Gyras was the Military commander in Central Makedon.
He lived a relitivly peaceful carreer.
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Damasos was the begginer. Antiginous never trusted him. Nethier did any of the men.
He had a tendancy to Win a battle but lose so many men, that it was a defeat at heart.

[Emperor of Graal]

Posts please!
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[Olaf Blackeyes]

First chapter plz:laugh4::laugh4::laugh4:

[Monk]

Details, details, details!

Gotta have more of them details!

You have a very basic start knight, but you are just stating things like they were in a textbook. Very bland, very dry. Try to spice up your prose by adding details about the world, the man/woman in question, the strategic situation. Anything really, you'd be surprised what it can do. :yes:

Since you have labeled this an AAR, maybe consider using screenshots too. :2thumbsup:

[Emperor of Graal]

Details, details, details!

Gotta have more of them details!

You have a very basic start knight, but you are just stating things like they were in a textbook. Very bland, very dry. Try to spice up your prose by adding details about the world, the man/woman in question, the strategic situation. Anything really, you'd be surprised what it can do. :yes:

Since you have labeled this an AAR, maybe consider using screenshots too. :2thumbsup:
Thanks Monk, all I needed to start me off was feedback
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The Macedon Kingdom at 269BCE was quite Mediocre.But with Antiginos' wise rule would help make an
Empire. Antiginos Hated Spartans He knew they were Dangerous, But he hated their guts.
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By the End of 269BCE he had rallied all of Iliriya to his cause.
But the War on Sparta was about to begin....


December 269BCE.
The meeting.
"So my loyal friends and family, what news for my Kingdom?" Antiginos stated as he drunk his wine.
"Well, we have a large treasury this year..." Euenus Said
"No we don't!" Damasos Shouted "At around 6000 denarii is hardly enough to defeat those Spartan
dogs!"
"If I may continue Damasos.." interrupted Euenus "Who said we would attack now? Gyras surely knows when to attack,not a drunk idiot like you"
Antiginos slammed his fist on the table. "Stop, I will not tolerate such insolence, now apolagise
and stop acting like a fool." Antiginos' continued, showing his distaste to the two.
"Sorry Damasos"
"Sorry Euenus, I've had too much to drink."
"Now to you Gyras, how is our Millitary?" Antiginos asked
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"Its not what I hope. The men are restless. At least while there are Spartans still on this green Earth"
Antiginos sighed
"So?"
"We need to kill the Spartans"
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Aloeus went to War
That year he rallied 100's of Men and Said to prepare to shake the world.
Not since the Persians had Sparta been in danger.
Aloeus died when he attacked the Spartans
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His men where vengeful and destroyed them
While the fighting continued Kleomenes of Sparta died trying to run. With this in mind everyone
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Chased them down and run through Sparta
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Sparta fell in the afternoon when the men stormed through