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Asmodeus
01-20-2003, 17:31
The fate of an empire in the hands of a spy.


It is the year 1304 and the world is in a turbulent state.

Seventy years earlier the Great Mongol horde swept right across Asia crushing everything that stood against it. The Turks and Byzantines melted away as if they had never existed. Far to the frozen north, the Danes thought little of the rumors that came whispering across the Steppe. King Christopher I of Denmark watched closely the events unfolding with the warring western Catholic powers and had little concern for his eastern neighbor’s plight. The Danish empire had grown in the last century spreading rapidly north into Norway and Sweden then later the Viking long ships crossed the Baltic and invaded Livonia, Finland, Novgorod and Prussia. This formed a powerful bastion in the north and a very lucrative trading base; great fleets of merchant ships made the regular voyage across the North Sea to England or down the coast to France and Spain. Things looked well for the Danes.

But in 1255 the rumors from the Steppe were no more. Signal fires lit up the hills of Novgorod and Livonia and the fastest ship set sail across the Baltic to Sweden with ominous news. There was silence in the Danish King’s court as the anxious herald gave his message.

“The people of Lithuania beg assistance from the great King of Denmark and the North. A Mongol army, numbering many thousands of savage warriors are invading from the east. They have sacked several cities already and pagans show no mercy to prisoners. What remains of our army are besieged and cannot hold out long.”

The King said little and looked deeply concerned. If the Lithuanian army are defeated, what chance for the Danes? And if, or when, Lithuania falls, where next for the Mongols? Novgorod? Livonia? Even across the Baltic?

The wealth of the Danes was put to good use and new armies of Vikings, Archers, Crossbowmen and Cavalry were formed. Spies were sent to Lithuania to observe the siege but when they arrived the castle was but a smoldering ruin, its walls ringed with the bodies 600 soldiers impaled on stakes. Fear spread like the wind and the people fled.

But the Mongols had many enemies and were not in any hurry to war with the Danes. Further south they ravished the Poles and Hungarians. The French lost interest in their war with England and send a vast army of knights to guard their eastern borders, but none dared to openly defy the great Khan. Germany and Italy (greatly reduced since the last century) did their best to arm themselves and prayed to go unnoticed.

Decades passed. The Polish and Hungarian empires were destroyed. The Mongols seemed satisfied with their glorious victories and Europe let out a collective sigh of relief. The tide, it seemed, had stopped. In 1270 the great Khan died and his eldest son, if anything a more murderous and uncompromising man than his father, took control of the Horde. But still all was quiet and France resumed its relentless war with England.

Then in 1298, without any warning at all, two huge armies invaded Novgorod and Livonia. The intervening years of armament paid off when in that fateful year both attacks were repulsed – at the cost of many hundred Danish warriors. Great fires were lit, festivals, rejoicing across the empire. The Kings of France and Spain sent their warmest regards to the Danes and regarded their army with a new respect. The Danes no longer felt terror of the Mongols.

But the celebrations were to be short lived. The following year an army marched from Novgorod to fight the Mongols in Lithuania. The battle faired well at first. The Danish archers and crossbowmen kept the Mongol cavalry at bay and catapults ripped great holes in the close packed foot soldiers. The Vikings beat their shields and roared at their savage enemy. But then the Mongols unleashed their heavy Cavalry. The field thundered with hooves and then an almighty crash as they slammed into the Danish line. Panic spread, the line broke and the rest of that terrible day was marked with screams as those who fled were overtaken and cut down by Mongol riders. Only 200 men returned alive.

Every year after the Mongols returned, ruthless, fanatical and terrifying. Each time the attacks were repulsed at the loss of many Danes and with each ‘victory’ came the prospect of defeat the following year.

But this year, 1304, salvation came from a completely unexpected direction. The Danish King sent many spies into the Mongol’s territories to give good warning when attacks looked imminent. One of these spies, in a highly risky and desperate act for his country, uncovered treasonous information about the terrible Khan himself. Risking his life, he took evidence of this blackmail and treason to the Mongols chief generals and the scandal spread like wild fire.

The next year, civil war broke out. Uprisings and unrest throughout Asia. The Khan was slain in battle by his previously most senior general and when news of the Khan’s death spread, complete anarchy and infighting swept across the whole Mongol empire. Now the full fury of Catholic powers was unleashed and the Danish, French and Italian armies drove what remained of the Horde out of Europe right back into Asia – never to be seen again. Not a Mongol warrior was spared the sword as the Western powers took bloody revenge for 80 years of tyranny.

The spy that defeated the Khan now lives in luxury at his Swedish Castle with all the hand maidens he desires http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif

Stormer
01-20-2003, 17:34
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Dr_Who
01-20-2003, 19:26
I wouldn't say its short, but its good and that is all that counts. http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif

David
01-20-2003, 19:51
werent the mongols defeated by internal problems in reality?

Tyrac
01-21-2003, 07:41
posts like that are one of the things I like best about these boards. http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif

When a mongol leader died the mongol invasions historically stopped and the clans all returned to the deep steppes to chose a new ruler. Often they ended up fighting each other for leadership for years. It was a rare heir to the Khan that was able to hold power after the death of his father.

Asmodeus
01-21-2003, 12:18
Thanks Tyrac,

The rebellion could not have come at a better time for me as no one else would dare attack the Horde. And that lucky valour 1 spy had only 10% chance to reveal vices Jammy devil http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif

Basileus
01-21-2003, 14:15
nice story mate..:)

Coldstream
01-21-2003, 15:02
Quote[/b] (Stormer @ Jan. 20 2003,10:34)]http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/rolleyes.gif

You would do well to ignore Stormer's post, and any others from that...underling.

I thought it was a superlative story. It started out absolutely brilliantly, but slightly dipped in the middle and tailed off at the end.

You seemed to get less serious about it and it seems you rushed the last few paragraphs just "to end the damn thing already."

Anyhow, absolutely great effort, I think I'll read it again.

starkhorn
01-21-2003, 15:14
I have to agree with Tyrac. Post like this are exactly why I love these boards. Great story. Well done Asmodeus....

Asmodeus
01-21-2003, 17:33
Thankyou very much.

I did have to rush the end a bit, I was supposed to be working http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif I got a bit carried away with the Mongol invasion and polictal stuff when what I actually really ment to write was just how much trouble spies can cause (and for that matter how serious it can be when a King has a secret vice uncovered&#33http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif. My writing is a bit rusty though and my spelling is dreadful (thank god for spellcheck).

But seeing as you approve I will do some more when time permits. It's a shame the Naval battles are so basic in MTW as I have had some pretty viscous wars with Sicilly over exactly who owns the Med http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif

y2kBug
01-21-2003, 17:36
Quote[/b] (Asmodeus @ Jan. 21 2003,05:18)]The rebellion could not have come at a better time for me as no one else would dare attack the Horde. And that lucky valour 1 spy had only 10% chance to reveal vices Jammy devil http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif
WTG Sounds like a gambit that paid big dividends.

Did you have spearmen to assist in repelling the Heavy Cavalry?

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Asmodeus
01-21-2003, 18:02
Quote[/b] (y2kBug @ Jan. 21 2003,10:36)]
Quote[/b] (Asmodeus @ Jan. 21 2003,05:18)]The rebellion could not have come at a better time for me as no one else would dare attack the Horde. And that lucky valour 1 spy had only 10% chance to reveal vices Jammy devil http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif
WTG Sounds like a gambit that paid big dividends.

Did you have spearmen to assist in repelling the Heavy Cavalry?

GG http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wave.gif
Yeah quite a few spearmen to support the vikings but they didnt have very good morale and at the same time the Mongol horse archers were pelting me from both flanks - when the first couple of units routed, everyone routed and it was too late to bring any order back to the battle. It's horrible seeing your army cut down like that, but such things happen in war and in real life there isn't a 'reload' so I dont do it in MTW either. (Call me a Masochist if you will http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif )

Anyhow, the bitter taste of defeat makes you appreciate those 'unexpected' victories all the more.

mav3434
01-21-2003, 23:40
good story. I'm currently trying to deal with the HOrde as the Danes as well. I'll never forget that first battle when my 240 vikings guarding an outpost in backwater Khazar came up against 15,000 plus Mongol Cavalry the thundering hooves almost made me rout

I never thought to try that spy thing, I certainly will though. If it works I'll use my huge bankroll tobribe the Mongol rebels and give those boys a taste of their own medicine, the florin is mightier than the sword.

Coldstream
01-22-2003, 01:21
Unless, of course, that sword is sticking half in and half out of your abdomen.

Asmodeus
01-22-2003, 11:23
Quote[/b] (Coldstream @ Jan. 21 2003,18:21)]Unless, of course, that sword is sticking half in and half out of your abdomen.
LMAO http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/joker.gif

Bob the Insane
01-22-2003, 11:33
Nice story..

I am interested how you managed to keep track of who was who among the Horde. Did you keep notes or was it 'artistic license'??

And lastly, when I played as the Danes, Mercenaries lead by high command heirs were my armies of choice for attack, allowing you to attack without degrading your defences (in case it all goes pear shaped..). Very expensive, but effective and can pay for itself if you keep looting...

Asmodeus
01-22-2003, 12:54
Partly 'artistic license' as you say http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif But the dates are approximately right. This is the first time I have crossed swords with the Mongols and as they had some truly fearsome army's on my borders with very capable generals I was keeping a close eye on events. As for which generals were which in the horde I just made the assumption that if revealing the Kings secret blackmailing (-3 loyalty&#33http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif could create such a rebellion it must have been some of the more senior generals he was blackmailing.

One thing that I did exaggerate (and I only mention this because this campaign is still in progress and it may come into play later on) was that the Mongols were not entirely wiped off the map. I took almost all of the Russia/Asia provinces down as far as Khaza (or however you spell it) and France and Italy took the European ones. The Mongols still have two of the old Hungarian provinces which are guarded pretty well. Italy has pretty much got knocked out of the game and Sicilly has now become the dominant power in the south but I am fighting a bloody war with them and so the Mongols will have to wait for now. Who knows, maybe they'll have another go at reclaiming their empire, but I'm hoping they get wiped out fighting the Sicillians

If only there was a log of 'events' through out the game rather like the battle log, but to record births, deaths, marriages, provinces taken etc. That would be so handy for story writing.

Lord of the Isles
01-22-2003, 17:55
Great story Asmodeus. However, the trouble with spell checkers is that they don't spot mistakes when one word gets typed as another ...


Quote[/b] (Asmodeus @ Jan. 21 2003,15:33)] ... It's a shame the Naval battles are so basic in MTW as I have had some pretty viscous wars with Sicilly over exactly who owns the Med http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif

Ahha, those must be the Olive Oil Wars.
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Asmodeus
01-22-2003, 19:31
grrrrrr i know

That's not the only mistake either, there's another i spotted http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/rolleyes.gif

I just cant spell in my old age

y2kBug
01-22-2003, 20:50
Quote[/b] (Lord of the Isles @ Jan. 22 2003,10:55)]
Quote[/b] (Asmodeus @ Jan. 21 2003,15:33)] ... I have had some pretty viscous wars with Sicilly over exactly who owns the Med http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif

Ahha, those must be the Olive Oil Wars.
http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/wink.gif
Too funny http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/joker.gif

Time to make them an offer they can't refuse... http://www.totalwar.org/forum/non-cgi/emoticons/cool.gif