Kingdom of Love [Archive]

The Stranger

02-05-2006, 11:15

first my apologizes for misposting this thread but since i cant post anywhere else, i request this to be moved to the frontroom :bow:

From Alexander of Macedon
Your voice is the sweet sing of a meadowlark outside;
Your skin is soft like the softest Chinese silk;
Everything I do is with you in my thoughts;
I’ve liked you from the moment I first saw you
and now, I must let you know
I love you

I looked into your eyes
with a glance unworldly;
I touched your skin
softer then the best silk;
I kissed your sweet lips
sweeter then a bee’s honey,
and when our bodies melted,
I was in heaven

You’re like autumn when the wind blows through;
You're like winter with a voice softer than snow;
You're like spring by the way you make me feel reborn
You're like summer for you shine like the sun,
but mostly you're like the stars because I feel like I can
reach them when I see them twinkling in your eyes

These are my poems with the sharp edges of AoM. This is a tribute to him.
more poems will be coming.

Mooks

02-06-2006, 02:42

umm akward..

aw89

02-06-2006, 10:35

umm akward..

Couldn't agree more

vvv I think it is supposed to be to his (male) lover, can't remember his name at the moment though.

Samurai Waki

02-06-2006, 11:13

If you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all.(Mind you, like serious questions about the poem, such as, I disagree with your perspective, or I don't understand what your poem is about). Your poem was very well written, and captured a unique light on your perspective of Alexander the Great. :bow:

By the way: Is the Poem being written through the eyes of Alexander, or are you writing the poem ABOUT Alexander? The way I read it, it sounded more like you were trying to look through the eyes of Alexander and capture some sort of emotion he felt over something.

The Stranger

02-06-2006, 12:40

alright i see now that the words i picked are weird...but they are just love poems i wrote and which AoM sharpened. they are not about anyone or for anyone. and since AoM loves lovepoems so much (and i dont really) this thread is supposed to be a little gift for him and other lovepoemlovers.

and i still request this being moved to the FRONTROOM

Leonin Khan

02-06-2006, 13:48

alexander of macedon is a member, Wakizashi

aw89

02-06-2006, 14:45

alexander of macedon is a member, Wakizashi

Oh, scratch my comment then.

Beirut

02-06-2006, 15:03

My son the artist. ~:pat:

Mouzafphaerre

02-06-2006, 15:19

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His son the artist indeed! :yes:

More please! :2thumbsup:

PS: Mind you? Mead Hall is the correct place to move this to. ~;)
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The Stranger

02-06-2006, 19:56

nope...since the frontroom is the Kingdom of Love it belongs in the frontroom...i ratrher have it there since it has more visitors :) pleassssee

Samurai Waki

02-06-2006, 22:03

alexander of macedon is a member, Wakizashi

Oh, hahaha.Well it would've helped if he said Alexander of Macedon (The .Org Member). I'm just terrible with names.

Mouzafphaerre

02-07-2006, 07:39

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To add to your confusion Leonin Khan is The Stranger. :dizzy2:
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Dutch_guy

02-07-2006, 21:28

nope...since the frontroom is the Kingdom of Love it belongs in the frontroom...i ratrher have it there since it has more visitors :) pleassssee

Long time no see,so how long do you still get to bear the honor ( ?! ) of being the junior member with the highest postcount ?

Interesting thread by the way.

:balloon2:

Samurai Waki

02-07-2006, 21:30

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To add to your confusion Leonin Khan is The Stranger. :dizzy2:
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It's like a spy hunt.:laugh4:

Leonin Khan

02-08-2006, 19:26

ehm can this be moved...please

bamff

02-10-2006, 04:57

I'm all for more poetry in the org. Let the rich tradition of warrior poets live on I say!

Leonin Khan

02-11-2006, 19:31

im for it too...are the mods awake in this place...allright...move it 2 the meadhall then

Samurai Waki

02-12-2006, 05:09

Caesar's Judgement on moving the thread: :thumbsdown:

Ludens

02-12-2006, 14:06

May I add my voice to those requesting this thread to be moved to the Mead Hall?

Leonin Khan

02-12-2006, 20:42

yeah you can

The Stranger

02-12-2006, 21:20

can this be moved to the frontroom...if that cant be done to the meadhall then...heres another poem

when i see you, my heart stops and i skip a breath.
its like everything paused to see nature's most beautiful
your voice is softer than a nightingales twitter
and i swear i can hear the angels sing in every word
around you dances the parfume of paradise
sweeter than a thousand roses
and when you kiss me, you take my breath away

BHCWarman88

02-13-2006, 03:17

reminds me of love poems,don't know why..

Strike For The South

02-13-2006, 06:30

Um for the record Alexander of Macedon is mine any attempnts to take him away from me will be dealt with.

Craterus

02-13-2006, 14:27

The Stranger, why does it say Merry Christmas in your user title?

Leonin Khan

02-14-2006, 20:50

in my infinite wisdom i forgot the stranger cant post here :sweatdrop: :wall:

id like to invite everybody to post love poems theyve written...please no spam...yeah it sounds strange from my mouth but thats why i am the stranger for :2thumbsup:

Reverend Joe

02-14-2006, 22:38

id like to invite everybody to post love poems theyve written...please no spam...
~:eek: No spam?! But... but... but you're the Stranger!

:eeeek:

Mouzafphaerre

02-15-2006, 02:34

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Cong's on your seniorship Duth Guy!

:balloon: :balloon2: :balloon3:
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Leonin Khan

02-15-2006, 13:45

congratz 2...i still dont know how it works??? can somebody explain

Alexanderofmacedon

02-18-2006, 04:57

And the imfamous AoM is here!

Haha, this is a funny story. The Stranger had written a poem I read in an old thread. It was a love poem and I don't know why, but I like love poetry. Go figure. Anyway, I got together with him over PM's to write some more stuff. Basically he gave me some base poems, and I fancied them up, corrected them, etc.

I have a new love poem I've rescently made:

I wish I could be with you
I wish I could just hear your voice
Hear your soft, wonderful, sweet voice
I wish I could hear it forever and a day
I wish I could hold you
I just wish you were here
I want you here
I want you with me
Forever and ever
The feeling I feel when I hear your voice
It has no words this feeling
But I want to keep it forever

For the record...

SFTS is my guy...:laugh4:

LMAO:dizzy2:

Leonin Khan

02-21-2006, 11:40

alright...i dont want you anyway :P

Alexanderofmacedon

02-24-2006, 05:10

Good poem?:juggle2:

Leonin Khan

02-25-2006, 20:58

to be honest...i dont really

i did like your first..but compared to that this one is quite bad

the other was great...this is below average....but thats my opinion

i dont like the fact that you use I so much in the begining without real structure...say I in the beginning of every sentence or one with I and one without I or use it spare

it would do ass a speech...its a good speech but not really a poem...but what do other members think?

buujin

03-08-2006, 17:48

Gah, Man-Love.

Im outa here..

Alexanderofmacedon

03-09-2006, 03:13

It's not man-love...

They are called "love poems"...

think what you will though...

Strike For The South

03-09-2006, 03:21

It's not man-love...

They are called "love poems"...

think what you will though...

We need to talk :laugh4:

The Stranger

09-22-2006, 19:30

post the love poems

Csargo

09-22-2006, 20:17

I'll probably post some later on I haven't written anything in a while. It'll probably be more of a song though.

The Spartan (Returns)

09-24-2006, 03:27

oh yeah that poem!!

Orb

09-24-2006, 14:57

I'll add something distinctly not written by me:

By Thomas Carew, a 17th century (IIRC) poet - converted to use standard modern spellings

Ask me no more where Jove bestows,
When June is past, the fading rose:
For in your beauty's orient deep,
These Flowers as in their causes sleep.

Ask me no more whither do stray
The golden Atoms of the day:
For in pure love heaven did prepare
Those powders to enrich your hair.

Ask me no more whither doth haste
The Nightingale, when May is past:
For in your sweet dividing throat
She winters, and keeps warm her note.

Ask me no more where those stars light,
That downwards fall in dead of night:
For in your eyes they sit, and there,
Fixed, become as in their sphere.

Ask me no more if East or West,
The Phoenix builds her spicy nest:
For unto you at last she flies,
And in your fragrant bosom dies.

The Stranger

09-25-2006, 16:18

ahahhahq i think it is a very funny poem... a bit weird but beautiful 2

The Stranger

08-09-2008, 15:54

hehe this thread is very funny :P

Moros

08-09-2008, 17:13

Je vinger die langzaam over mijn borstkast glijdt,
terwijl je op je onderlip bijt,
Je daagt me uit, dat mag ik wel,
hopelijk kom ik niet weer te snel!

~;p

Caius

08-10-2008, 02:56

hehe this thread is very funny :P
Holy necromancing Batman!

pevergreen

08-10-2008, 08:29

Holy necromancing Batman!

Holy necromancing Batman!

Holy necromancing Batman!

Holy necromancing Batman!

Caius

08-10-2008, 15:24

Didn't you notice I am Robin?

:bounce:

The Stranger

08-10-2008, 17:06

PEVER!!!!!! I DEMAND TO BE REMOVED FROM YOUR SIG, UNLESS YOU SAY SOMETHING NICE, SUCH AS TS IS THE PRETTIEST ON THE .ORG AND HES SOOOO SMART!!!

good poem moros :)

caius, go play outside :P

Moros

08-10-2008, 18:36

You asked for it:

The Stranger

08-11-2008, 15:56

thank you, finally i get the creds i deserve... i actually also deserve a badge, for being the prettiest but because it is you, this will do!

Moros

08-11-2008, 22:27

thank you, finally i get the creds i deserve... i actually also deserve a badge, for being the prettiest but because it is you, this will do!

If I didn't have exams, I'd go nuts in photoshop. :2thumbsup: