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10-23-2006, 17:51
hey,
wanted to write a Fantasy Novel (doubt it iwll happen lol)
but here what I wrote, as a SHort Story so Far, used my clan and some members for characters:
It has been a bad month for my unit, as we had be routed several times, and most recently, been ambush and nearly massacred. The Army of Medclure snuck though the forest, and attacks us on the way to the main city of Tome, to help reinforce the town, from the Medclure/Barbarian Forces. We suffer severe losses, dropping from 8,800 troops to 800 troops, in about 1 month. Worse Yet, we are close to Tome, but a Barbarian Force of 2500 are massed outside the gates, although they do not know we are coming, though my scouts told me that enemy scouts are in the area. Our Army is marching in their dirty red and blue uniforms, with I and the Flag bearer at the front of the line marching.
“Warman”
I gave the Solider a Look,
“I mean General W, we need to rest”
He said, in a tiresome voice.
“Can’t now, need to get to Tome, if not there, at least on the Hills outside of it. Now go get Second Sergeant Rayn,” I said, in an angry voice. I been Called Warman, or Warman8 by some, because of my brutal ways on the battlefield, and the obsession I have of keeping the number “8” is every. Supplies, and in Troops Numbers. A lot of the members in this unit, called BHC brigade, don’t need to know what I did early on in my military career.
“Warman, you requested me sir?” Rayn Asked.
“Yes, I did, I need some stuff done”
“As What” He asked, looking at our troops, in their red and blue uniforms, marching in a disorganized manner.
“First off, how many available weapons do we have, we are walking around this damn place with these men, who are not equip with weapons” I spoke, as some men turned and look at us.
“Warman, you need to understand—“
“I understand these men went though a ambush yes, but if we go though another one, they will be killed without putting up a good fight”
“Ok, Here what we got” he explained, as we walk side by side, by the Flag Bearer, in the front of the army.
“We have 567 spears, 333 swords, and 100 Grey guns, but only can give the guys who carry the guys 4 shots per man”.
“Damn it, though, this can do well, against the bariabin force”.
“What are they carrying?”
“2400 homemade weapons, such as wood, but sharp swords, bows and arrows and such.Other 100 have half decent swords, they put up a small fight, rest will die fast.”
I and Rayn coniute to talk about the stauts of our army. Our army approach the hillside, 4 hours later, and we saw smok,in masses,raising from the Town of Tome,about 1 hour away.
“Generals, Tome has fallen, lets avenged our brothers deaths!!” a few soldiers shouted.
“No” Said Rayn.
“We will form on that hillside” I pointed.
“We will Form there, and rest there for tonight and tomarrow, and wait for them to attack”.
Our men and I marched to the hill side,grass was dead, and trees was loosing their leaves,as fall was here. Just as Some of the troops, about 150 or so started to pick up their weapons from our small supply wagon, included myself and Rayn, who picked a pistol,2 shots each, and a Sword, we began to see movement in the distance.
“I..been….” One of the Soliders said, as Rayn shouted out “We under attacked”
Sadly,we was under attacked, and out of the 150 soliders who so far recvied their weapons, only 50 of them had their spears ready for action, against a army of 2500,which was charging at us a fast past. “Get your Weapons Now,and Pikemen,Line Up, Phalanx, Gunmen, on your knees, Swordmen, reinforce the flanks!” I shouted. In the Meantime, a couple hundred more soliders recived their weapons, and the Pikemen began to form in a Phalanx postion, with the Gunmen ready to fire,in volley,but it was to late.
“Oh Gods” Rayn said, who belived in mutiple gods.
“To Late,no Time” he reapted, as the first wave,about 500 hunderd, rush up the hill with their homemade weapons,and some half decent swords.
‘Fire at the Will,Charge!”
I screamed. The Gunmen opened fire, which took out about 60 guns, then, The Barbarians rushed into them, slashing the heads off of many of them, as the swordmen rushed in,returning the favor by wrestling them down, and chopping off serveal body parts of the Barbarians, this is the BHC Unit, we are known for this.
“Rayn,how many more men we got in reserve” I asked, as another wave,this time of 500 rushing up.
“we got 125 dead,35 injured.we got 300 left”
“Send another 100 in,Send the Swordmen in”
100 Swordmen Charge down the hill,but then stop mid way, and refuse to go.
“I’ll go” Said Rayn
“Be careful” I said
Rayn pulled out his pistol and his sabrem but I drew my pistol first, shooting and killng a Barbarian,who pointed a bow at him
“Be Careful eh?” I reapted
He Smiled weakly at me, and also shot and killed a
Barbarian behind me also. We both smiled, then he reloaded,along with me, then he charge his unit into the Right Flank of the Barbarians,the weakest one, not knowning our left flank was almost gone. The Battle was Bloody, as only 38 gunmen was left, and they only had 1 or 2 shots left. I told them to use them up, and they did,on the enemies on the left flank, killing about 60 Barbarians in no time.
As I reloaded my pistol,since the bullet fell out, A Barbarian hit me in my back with a metal club. Since I was wearing silver part army, I did not get hurt badly. I Shot at him, and missed, while he crushed my pistol. He was the Enemy Leader, I could tell, because he wore Good Armour “only Hiigh Ranking Barbarians did, or highly trained armies of them did anyhow”, then,before I could get him, he ran into the mass of troops, and started attacking my troops also. Then,the rest of the Barbarian army, the 3rd wave, also known as the “Death Wave” came flying down. The Rest of my soilders came up the hill,falling back to the hilly postion I was on,standing on. I told them to stand where I was standing, and the reserves follow to.
“Where is Rayn?!” I asked a bloody soliders, he pointed, then, a arrow went though his chest. I found two more bullets and a grey musket from the now broken Suppliy train on the ground. So I picked it up,reloaded it, and shot the Bowmen, who was standing about 10 meters away, I know how to use a good gun. Then I reloaded, and look in the Direction of Rayn, which the now dead Soliders pointed out. I stood there, in Awe, as Barbarian troops was beaten him to death,tearing his body to pieces. Anger, I told my Men, about half with no weapons, or broken weapons.
“Boys, See, they killng us, they killng one of us” then I pointed “Look, they killing all of your bothers and sisters, and look, they killng Rayn also!”. Then I handed the gun to a New Solider next to me “use it well Kid, I will manage with my Sword’. Then I draw my Sword, and Screamed
“For BHC, or Death!!” I recived the same response, and we, in our Red and Blue Uniforms, charged down the hill, where Rayn was getting teared to shears. The “Death wave” was close by to. At the way it was looking, we will “hit” at the same time. I was right, as Both Armies swung their weapons at the save time. Body parts and Blood flew everywhere, as I and 7 other soilders fought our way, killing Barbarians like crazy in order to get to Rayn, We Did. Then, One of my Soliders fell, and the Barbarian Leader came with the grey Musket. He Killed the Private I given the Musket to.
“you die now, Master Warman” as he pulled out his Metal Spiked Club, I got my sworded ready, and picked a Shield up,from off the ground, as my other 6 guys charged into the masses of Barbarians like I told them to. Me and the Barbarian Leader fought it out, both hitting each other’s Flesh with 1 good hit from both of our weapons. Then, He tackled me to the ground, while I piece his nose with my sword,but then, he almost knocked me out, by hiting me in the head with his huge fist. Then, As He was about to kill me, I heared a Big Ban, and saw his Hand was blowed off. The Private got enough strengh to get up one more time, and follow the gun to save me, before a Barbarian sliced his arm off. I got up, got my sword, and killed the Barbarian with a stab to the chest. I then turned around, killing the Barbarian Leader, and Leaving my Golden Sword in his Chest.
After the Battle, we and the rest of my army went back up to the hill. We sat down, and talked. Out of our 800 troops we had now, we only had 60 left total.the ground at the base of the hill is actually red,from all the blood from the bodies, which a lot of heads and bodies parts lay at the bottom of the hill rotting. Out of the Barbarian, they lost 2460, Plus the Barbarian Leader.
All the Soliders kept weapons in their hands,including me, just in case we had to make a last stand. One of the Soliders asked me what we going to do now.
wanted to write a Fantasy Novel (doubt it iwll happen lol)
but here what I wrote, as a SHort Story so Far, used my clan and some members for characters:
It has been a bad month for my unit, as we had be routed several times, and most recently, been ambush and nearly massacred. The Army of Medclure snuck though the forest, and attacks us on the way to the main city of Tome, to help reinforce the town, from the Medclure/Barbarian Forces. We suffer severe losses, dropping from 8,800 troops to 800 troops, in about 1 month. Worse Yet, we are close to Tome, but a Barbarian Force of 2500 are massed outside the gates, although they do not know we are coming, though my scouts told me that enemy scouts are in the area. Our Army is marching in their dirty red and blue uniforms, with I and the Flag bearer at the front of the line marching.
“Warman”
I gave the Solider a Look,
“I mean General W, we need to rest”
He said, in a tiresome voice.
“Can’t now, need to get to Tome, if not there, at least on the Hills outside of it. Now go get Second Sergeant Rayn,” I said, in an angry voice. I been Called Warman, or Warman8 by some, because of my brutal ways on the battlefield, and the obsession I have of keeping the number “8” is every. Supplies, and in Troops Numbers. A lot of the members in this unit, called BHC brigade, don’t need to know what I did early on in my military career.
“Warman, you requested me sir?” Rayn Asked.
“Yes, I did, I need some stuff done”
“As What” He asked, looking at our troops, in their red and blue uniforms, marching in a disorganized manner.
“First off, how many available weapons do we have, we are walking around this damn place with these men, who are not equip with weapons” I spoke, as some men turned and look at us.
“Warman, you need to understand—“
“I understand these men went though a ambush yes, but if we go though another one, they will be killed without putting up a good fight”
“Ok, Here what we got” he explained, as we walk side by side, by the Flag Bearer, in the front of the army.
“We have 567 spears, 333 swords, and 100 Grey guns, but only can give the guys who carry the guys 4 shots per man”.
“Damn it, though, this can do well, against the bariabin force”.
“What are they carrying?”
“2400 homemade weapons, such as wood, but sharp swords, bows and arrows and such.Other 100 have half decent swords, they put up a small fight, rest will die fast.”
I and Rayn coniute to talk about the stauts of our army. Our army approach the hillside, 4 hours later, and we saw smok,in masses,raising from the Town of Tome,about 1 hour away.
“Generals, Tome has fallen, lets avenged our brothers deaths!!” a few soldiers shouted.
“No” Said Rayn.
“We will form on that hillside” I pointed.
“We will Form there, and rest there for tonight and tomarrow, and wait for them to attack”.
Our men and I marched to the hill side,grass was dead, and trees was loosing their leaves,as fall was here. Just as Some of the troops, about 150 or so started to pick up their weapons from our small supply wagon, included myself and Rayn, who picked a pistol,2 shots each, and a Sword, we began to see movement in the distance.
“I..been….” One of the Soliders said, as Rayn shouted out “We under attacked”
Sadly,we was under attacked, and out of the 150 soliders who so far recvied their weapons, only 50 of them had their spears ready for action, against a army of 2500,which was charging at us a fast past. “Get your Weapons Now,and Pikemen,Line Up, Phalanx, Gunmen, on your knees, Swordmen, reinforce the flanks!” I shouted. In the Meantime, a couple hundred more soliders recived their weapons, and the Pikemen began to form in a Phalanx postion, with the Gunmen ready to fire,in volley,but it was to late.
“Oh Gods” Rayn said, who belived in mutiple gods.
“To Late,no Time” he reapted, as the first wave,about 500 hunderd, rush up the hill with their homemade weapons,and some half decent swords.
‘Fire at the Will,Charge!”
I screamed. The Gunmen opened fire, which took out about 60 guns, then, The Barbarians rushed into them, slashing the heads off of many of them, as the swordmen rushed in,returning the favor by wrestling them down, and chopping off serveal body parts of the Barbarians, this is the BHC Unit, we are known for this.
“Rayn,how many more men we got in reserve” I asked, as another wave,this time of 500 rushing up.
“we got 125 dead,35 injured.we got 300 left”
“Send another 100 in,Send the Swordmen in”
100 Swordmen Charge down the hill,but then stop mid way, and refuse to go.
“I’ll go” Said Rayn
“Be careful” I said
Rayn pulled out his pistol and his sabrem but I drew my pistol first, shooting and killng a Barbarian,who pointed a bow at him
“Be Careful eh?” I reapted
He Smiled weakly at me, and also shot and killed a
Barbarian behind me also. We both smiled, then he reloaded,along with me, then he charge his unit into the Right Flank of the Barbarians,the weakest one, not knowning our left flank was almost gone. The Battle was Bloody, as only 38 gunmen was left, and they only had 1 or 2 shots left. I told them to use them up, and they did,on the enemies on the left flank, killing about 60 Barbarians in no time.
As I reloaded my pistol,since the bullet fell out, A Barbarian hit me in my back with a metal club. Since I was wearing silver part army, I did not get hurt badly. I Shot at him, and missed, while he crushed my pistol. He was the Enemy Leader, I could tell, because he wore Good Armour “only Hiigh Ranking Barbarians did, or highly trained armies of them did anyhow”, then,before I could get him, he ran into the mass of troops, and started attacking my troops also. Then,the rest of the Barbarian army, the 3rd wave, also known as the “Death Wave” came flying down. The Rest of my soilders came up the hill,falling back to the hilly postion I was on,standing on. I told them to stand where I was standing, and the reserves follow to.
“Where is Rayn?!” I asked a bloody soliders, he pointed, then, a arrow went though his chest. I found two more bullets and a grey musket from the now broken Suppliy train on the ground. So I picked it up,reloaded it, and shot the Bowmen, who was standing about 10 meters away, I know how to use a good gun. Then I reloaded, and look in the Direction of Rayn, which the now dead Soliders pointed out. I stood there, in Awe, as Barbarian troops was beaten him to death,tearing his body to pieces. Anger, I told my Men, about half with no weapons, or broken weapons.
“Boys, See, they killng us, they killng one of us” then I pointed “Look, they killing all of your bothers and sisters, and look, they killng Rayn also!”. Then I handed the gun to a New Solider next to me “use it well Kid, I will manage with my Sword’. Then I draw my Sword, and Screamed
“For BHC, or Death!!” I recived the same response, and we, in our Red and Blue Uniforms, charged down the hill, where Rayn was getting teared to shears. The “Death wave” was close by to. At the way it was looking, we will “hit” at the same time. I was right, as Both Armies swung their weapons at the save time. Body parts and Blood flew everywhere, as I and 7 other soilders fought our way, killing Barbarians like crazy in order to get to Rayn, We Did. Then, One of my Soliders fell, and the Barbarian Leader came with the grey Musket. He Killed the Private I given the Musket to.
“you die now, Master Warman” as he pulled out his Metal Spiked Club, I got my sworded ready, and picked a Shield up,from off the ground, as my other 6 guys charged into the masses of Barbarians like I told them to. Me and the Barbarian Leader fought it out, both hitting each other’s Flesh with 1 good hit from both of our weapons. Then, He tackled me to the ground, while I piece his nose with my sword,but then, he almost knocked me out, by hiting me in the head with his huge fist. Then, As He was about to kill me, I heared a Big Ban, and saw his Hand was blowed off. The Private got enough strengh to get up one more time, and follow the gun to save me, before a Barbarian sliced his arm off. I got up, got my sword, and killed the Barbarian with a stab to the chest. I then turned around, killing the Barbarian Leader, and Leaving my Golden Sword in his Chest.
After the Battle, we and the rest of my army went back up to the hill. We sat down, and talked. Out of our 800 troops we had now, we only had 60 left total.the ground at the base of the hill is actually red,from all the blood from the bodies, which a lot of heads and bodies parts lay at the bottom of the hill rotting. Out of the Barbarian, they lost 2460, Plus the Barbarian Leader.
All the Soliders kept weapons in their hands,including me, just in case we had to make a last stand. One of the Soliders asked me what we going to do now.