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Shaka_Khan
04-28-2007, 06:07
This is how it goes. Someone starts with 1 line.

Example:

Oh my love Holly,

Then someone else continues with another.
Oh my love Holly,
I have traveled over mountains and seas

Then,
Oh my love Holly,
I have traveled over mountains and seas
just to be with you only.

And so on.

Ok? Here I go:




Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali.

Julian the apostate
04-28-2007, 06:39
all my life with you i'd love to dally

CountArach
04-28-2007, 06:59
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali.
all my life with you i'd love to dally
We are the only ones in these fields

Omanes Alexandrapolites
04-28-2007, 08:09
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,
These feilds of love and passion,

edyzmedieval
04-28-2007, 14:35
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,
These feilds of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.

Shaka_Khan
05-01-2007, 01:32
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,
These feilds of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.

I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,

DemonArchangel
05-01-2007, 14:36
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
your gentle warmth at my side

naut
05-01-2007, 14:57
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,

Bijo
05-01-2007, 18:45
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.



:smash:

Ronin
05-01-2007, 22:32
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****? :laugh4:

CountArach
05-02-2007, 11:54
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly

Fragony
05-02-2007, 11:58
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly

Moros
05-02-2007, 17:55
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly
The number of times we did it, was well over twenty.

May I suggest starting over cause I think the poem is now ****** up completely.

Samurai Waki
05-02-2007, 19:43
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly
The number of times we did it, was well over twenty.
and at the end, I paid her plenty

Conradus
05-02-2007, 19:47
Your scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly
The number of times we did it, was well over twenty.
and at the end, I paid her plenty
which she, with her kind heart refused utterly

Moros
05-02-2007, 20:27
our scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly
The number of times we did it, was well over twenty.
and at the end, I paid her plenty
which she, with her kind heart refused utterly
Because I'm damn good in bed, you see.

Samurai Waki
05-02-2007, 21:10
our scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly
The number of times we did it, was well over twenty.
and at the end, I paid her plenty
which she, with her kind heart refused utterly
Because I'm damn good in bed, you see.
even though now it burns when I pee

Big King Sanctaphrax
05-03-2007, 00:43
our scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly
The number of times we did it, was well over twenty.
and at the end, I paid her plenty
which she, with her kind heart refused utterly
Because I'm damn good in bed, you see.
even though now it burns when I pee
which will teach me not to lay wantonly

This has become more of a one line dirty limerick/smutty ditty, hasn't it?

John86
05-03-2007, 02:54
our scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly
The number of times we did it, was well over twenty.
and at the end, I paid her plenty
which she, with her kind heart refused utterly
Because I'm damn good in bed, you see.
even though now it burns when I pee
which will teach me not to lay wantonly
You've given me a line unrhym-oly,

Ronin
05-03-2007, 15:24
our scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly
The number of times we did it, was well over twenty.
and at the end, I paid her plenty
which she, with her kind heart refused utterly
Because I'm damn good in bed, you see.
even though now it burns when I pee
which will teach me not to lay wantonly
You've given me a line unrhym-oly,
You´ll be sorry if I ever again lay eyes on thee


I take full bragging rights for the derailment of this poem :laugh4:

Samurai Waki
05-03-2007, 19:51
Double Post

Big King Sanctaphrax
05-03-2007, 21:18
Ok, a bit too smutty, methinks. I'm going to rewind a couple of posts.

our scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly
The number of times we did it, was well over twenty.
and at the end, I paid her plenty
which she, with her kind heart refused utterly
Because I'm damn good in bed, you see.
even though now it burns when I pee
which will teach me not to lay wantonly
You've given me a line unrhym-oly,
You´ll be sorry if I ever again lay eyes on thee

Moros
05-03-2007, 22:01
our scent and touch are like the fields of Bali,
All my life with you I'd love to dally,
We are the only ones in these fields,

These fields of love and passion,
Are like curved lines in fashion.
I feel the cool breeze and the long grass tickle me,
Your gentle warmth at my side,
That washes me daintily, like the ocean tide,
As nature plays you foul, got hit by a bee.
Nice legs, wanna ****?
I asked jokingly
But boy was she willingly
The number of times we did it, was well over twenty.
and at the end, I paid her plenty
which she, with her kind heart refused utterly
Because I'm damn good in bed, you see.
even though now it burns when I pee
which will teach me not to lay wantonly
You've given me a line unrhym-oly,
You´ll be sorry if I ever again lay eyes on thee
you're lucky that I'm blind and can't see.

Vuk
05-03-2007, 23:31
A knew start. Anyone adding filth to this will be ignored, and someone else will contribute at that place.

Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!


This has good potential, so let's make it good. Imaging that you are telling it to your gf/sweethard/wife/etc.

Vuk

Marshal Murat
05-03-2007, 23:36
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache

The Stranger
05-04-2007, 03:05
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?

DemonArchangel
05-04-2007, 06:35
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets

Samurai Waki
05-04-2007, 08:32
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew

Moros
05-04-2007, 21:48
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew
I try but yet again do not find

CountArach
05-05-2007, 06:47
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew
I try but yet again do not find
You at the end of my dreams

Csargo
05-05-2007, 06:54
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew
I try but yet again do not find
You at the end of my dreams
Though, some nights I am sleepless

Moros
05-08-2007, 16:08
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew
I try but yet again do not find
You at the end of my dreams
Though, some nights I am sleepless
living the nightmare of emptiness

Caius
05-13-2007, 03:02
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew
I try but yet again do not find
You at the end of my dreams
Though, some nights I am sleepless
living the nightmare of emptiness

In every dream

Boyar Son
05-13-2007, 03:20
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew
I try but yet again do not find
You at the end of my dreams
Though, some nights I am sleepless
living the nightmare of emptiness

In every dream
I see several women

naut
05-13-2007, 03:47
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew
I try but yet again do not find
You at the end of my dreams
Though, some nights I am sleepless
living the nightmare of emptiness

In every dream
I see several women
Yet none of them ever you

seireikhaan
05-13-2007, 04:16
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew
I try but yet again do not find
You at the end of my dreams
Though, some nights I am sleepless
living the nightmare of emptiness

In every dream
I see several women
Yet none of them ever you
feel, haunting my very soul.

Conradus
05-13-2007, 18:58
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew
I try but yet again do not find
You at the end of my dreams
Though, some nights I am sleepless
living the nightmare of emptiness

In every dream
I see several women
Yet none of them ever you
feel, haunting my very soul.
And your dream still stalks me

Rodion Romanovich
05-13-2007, 19:42
Oh, so many years I've walked this earth alone!
Bravely storming the years of heartache
My mind still wonders, did I do the right thing?
Why bother asking? No remorse, No regrets
But when I try to find love anew
I try but yet again do not find
You at the end of my dreams
Though, some nights I am sleepless
living the nightmare of emptiness

In every dream
I see several women
Yet none of them ever you
feel, haunting my very soul.
And your dream still stalks me
like the shadow stalks the tree