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Caius
12-02-2007, 05:00
(Inspirated in the campaign of the same name in Empire Earth)

When this history started, I wasn't born yet, as this happened in the year 2018 and I was born in the year 2087.

Well, this history started in the suburbs of Voronetz. In this city, a group of people, who have revolutionary ideas, formed a new Party. This Party have a central idea in which those actions are centrated to: See a Nova Russia. This idea was impulsed by Grigor Stoyanovich, who was the leader of the Party, called the Ushi Party.

This party has been considerated illegal. Members had to leave the Party, they were followed and kidnapped. The government started to make this kind of actions one year ago. They need to shut up that Party, forever.

And they had the key. There is an intensive search for Grigor Stoyanovic, the ruler of the Party. He wasn't aware of the danger. He is one target of the police and the army.

Pyotr, friend of Gregor since they went to school togehter, smell the problems. He had some doubt about it. But no, all happened to be true. They are going for Grigor.

RoadKill
12-05-2007, 01:23
Good to see you hear Caius, there isn't enough to read to give critique on but one thing I have to complain about is how choppy it is. I understand you are doing it to build drama by doing that, but i think it is effecting your story.

Caius
12-05-2007, 16:28
Good to see you hear Caius, there isn't enough to read to give critique on but one thing I have to complain about is how choppy it is. I understand you are doing it to build drama by doing that, but i think it is effecting your story.
I will have that when I write my next chapter. Thank you.

Caius
12-05-2007, 23:16
Chapter I:The Crocodrile
In an alley of Voronetz...

-Grigor, Grigor! Your life is in danger! Pyotr said to Grigor when he saw him.
-I always have been in danger, Pyotr. What's going on? Do we have an spy in our Party?
-No. Your life is in danger. The Government wants to kill you. They have alerted the local forces. They are looking for 'The Crocodrile', I mean, you.
-I know, now I have to be outside the city. Since I'm in danger, the Party awaits me in Volvograd. We need to destroy the city, unless their guards kill me!
-I brought my car. Its full of petrol, so we can go to Volvograd... Also, we can use...
-Wait! Don't tell me you are going to use the back part. Isnt that the part that guards look at first? Unless we don't find a solution, little are the things we can do.
-What about if we look around the city? I mean, look for some vehicle we can use just to fool the guards.
-I don't like the idea at all, knowing that I could be seen by guards. But I see no other option, so we are going to do it.
-Dont worry about guards, I know where they are, so I'm going to drive carefully and stay away from they.

The car started to make noise. Pyotr drived that car, slowly but safe. Both were scared.


-Look there! A truck with potatoes! Pyotr said faster.
-Great, we could use it! Drive slow, but get there.
-As you want, Grigor.

That truck didn't give any problem to cooperate with Pyotr and Grigor. Grigor had to travel hidden with the potatoes, but it worked. They had to pass the final check-up, where a Russian Officer was there. If he said everything is ok, then everything is ok, and if he gave Pyotr the ok to leave the town, he would made such a big mistake. The mistake that would let Grigor alive.

-Hello sir, where are you going? A Russian Soldier said.
After that, the Russian officer came from the tent he was inside.
-Excuse me, citizen, I understand you are working, but we are looking for a terrible murderer, and he is in this city. Thats why we are doing this kind of inspections. Where are you going?
-Well, in that case, I would be grateful if I could do something, but now, I am only transportating potatoes to Rostov. I won't be bothered if you check I'm saying the truth.
-Please, Dmitri, check if there are potatoes.
-Sir, Yes, Sir! A soldier yield.
He checked. There were potatoes. And Grigor hidden.
-Sir, there isnt another thing that potatoes here.
-I'm sorry we made you lost time, we thank you, and now, you can leave the city. The Russian Officer said. He gave an order, and the gates were opened.
-Now, I have to go. Goodbye.

Pyotr started to drive. They made it. They are free now, and now, its time to start to go to Volvograd. In that city, the members of the Party are waiting for Grigor, and they had good news. News that could destroy the local Government palace.

Thirty minutes later, they were finally in Volvograd. Pyotr told Grigor to come out.
Grigor could not believe it. He finally met Vasili. Vasili is an expert strategist. He was expulsated from the Russian Army. He had meeting with Grigor before. Vasili thought that Grigor's idea were very good ones. He now is with Grigor, and they are planning the assault to Voronetz.

-Such a good idea, isnt it? Vasili told to Grigor, who understood a good plan to achieve their aim.
-Yes, it is.
One Marine, member of the Ushi Party, came running to the local Government. He had bad news.
Excuse me, sir. I need to give you bad news. I'm afraid we had an spy amongst our lines, and he is running right now to Voronetz.
-Indeed those are bad news! We don't have all the time of the world, since this spy have made such a good work fooling us. What can we do, Vasili? After all, we can't wait for a long time.-
-I know they are going to send a massive attack to kill you, sir. I suggest we prepare all the units we have, and I hope they will fight for your life. Not only your life is in danger, the Party's life also.
-That's right.
-I have an idea. Since Rostov, Saratov and a local Ucranian cities could help us. Well, this idea is not recent, and we have some talented diplomats...If we convice them, then we will have more chances.

This have to continue soon...

Ayachuco
12-08-2007, 23:13
I loved this campaign on Empire Earth (although I didn't care much for the ending), I love how Grigor uses plots from the old spy movies as a reason why they search the trunk of the car. I remember bringing a squadron of tanks back to Volograd and shot the captain guard person.