I'd realy like an opinion on this piece. I'd say its pretty good but I'm kinda biased.
Its from beefy's game happening in beefdom found here
Lord James Greyford - Ruler of the Iron Peak.
"Gold or Iron, it all shines."
A mine in the middle of a frozen wasteland is not exactly the stuff empires are made from, nor is a family of merchants, poor in coin and poor in prospects, the sort to
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