All luck gone!

I am relatively new and I have read a few threads which have been quite good and now I'm going to do my own on a tail called ' luck's running out! '


Once upon a time there was a little boy named Jak, he was about to have his his 9th birthday when all of his luck ran out.
Anyways Jak was just going to bed the night before his birthday when his mum and dad came up to his room and said ' Jak , honey I"m sorry to tell you this but we can't afford to buy you birthday presents'.' WHAT!? ' said Jak. ' Actually honey where so poor we are going to sell all of your stuff for money and rent your room for money to live on. ' said Jaks mum. ' OH MY GOD! ' said Jak , ' so where am I going to sleep? '. Well, you know our old doggy house, ' Jak nods, ' well I'm afraid thats the only place. But don't worry honey it will only be for a year and a half. ' Jak just stares at his mum and then starts swearing really loudly (:furious3:). After jak had been swearing for half an hour he lost his voice and stopped. His mum gave him a pillow and he went to the old run down dog house where he said to him self ' I thought I was going to have a great birthday but I guess it isn't going to turn out so good. But the worst had yet to come. The next morning he woke up to everyone acting like it was a normal day. But that is when his mum and dad told him that everybody in his class was coming over to his house that afternoon......... he was shocked. Later that day the people were arriving and no-one brought presents. He was having a shower and getting ready and when he tried to get out it wouldnt let him and worse even, the water didn't stop running. Eventually the shower got to 3/4 way full and he still couldn't get out, so he tried to go out of the fan. He took off the cover, pulled out the fan and climed into the ventellation. He was crawling ... still naked trying to find a way out, when the ventellation tube broke and he fell onto the table, where everyone was sitting around and saw him fall from the roof ... naked.

Jak realised his luck truly had run out.

How could they afford the party? Also, it would be nice if you could join our writing group,

Nice and simple :thumbsup:

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