I've been reading this for the past few days, and been enjoying it immensely. Theodotos, you are a great writer! Great fun to read about my near namesake. I must admit that I'm a little suspicious about the premature monotheism, but I can understand how you would want it in. Also, I think that Belerios' murder seemed a bit strange. Why didn't he make an attempt to hide it, when he must have known how Tancogeistla would take it?

In addition, I'd like to ask you what to "sup" means. Cadwalador tells Diedre that they will sup together. Does it mean to have supper, or or is it a slang word for sexual intercorse which has evaded me?