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    Pretty darn good IMO

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    People's Padishah Emperor Member Emperor Burakuku's Avatar
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    Same here :). I demand more dude!
    "The more people I meet, the more I like my dog"

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    Now you've gone and bloody done it. They'll be on you like a pack of harpies.
    More, more, more...

    and more.
    quae res et cibi genere et cotidiana exercitatione et libertate vitae

    Herein events and rations daily birth the labors of freedom.

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    Is just that we like poetry. I wish I could compose in english but I know my limits. So when I will conquer Earth and all will speak romanian, I will reveal my work. Till then... I can only admire the ones who can.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Emperor Burakuku
    Is just that we like poetry. I wish I could compose in english but I know my limits. So when I will conquer Earth and all will speak romanian, I will reveal my work. Till then... I can only admire the ones who can.
    Whom does this remind me of???

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4o7f-eu_c7E
    quae res et cibi genere et cotidiana exercitatione et libertate vitae

    Herein events and rations daily birth the labors of freedom.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Emperor Burakuku
    Is just that we like poetry. I wish I could compose in english but I know my limits. So when I will conquer Earth and all will speak romanian, I will reveal my work. Till then... I can only admire the ones who can.
    It is easy when you have spoken English for most of your life. If I were you Burakuku, I'd show us the stuff you have in Romanian. There may be Romanian speakers here who will appreciate it. And for the rest of us- well, it is no worse than you trying to grasp English poetry.

    Nice poem Keith. I found it a bit frustrating though, since it is informed by more modern (than the EB period) ideas, but is still full of archaic dost thous and such.

    neither modern nor ancient. I am almost tempted to try some ancient meter or something more modern but using the imagery of sprites summoned into existence to fight and die for an unseen master, before both victor and vanquished are returned to oblivion as the campaign screen loads.

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