General Discussion Thread

[Tamur]

Feedback on #5 is up, only a few hours late... *cough*

Thanks to each of you who participated. It is a stretch to define a character to this level.

It was interesting to see the different styles. Ironsword's was so detailed, a story in itself, while Timsup2nothin and MountainTroll went for a more loose style. Either of these work.

Also, note the differences in time focus. MountainTroll focused on the near-present, doing a complete but sketchy coverage of the long-past and middle-past. Ironsword on the other hand had significant coverage of the long-past and the near-present but the space in the middle (between the family deaths and the near-present) is left blank.