Nice! contrasting the tears with the wind, I like it a lot....He burst into tears, but the remorseless wind...
Do you mind if I run the revised version past my helper?
Nice! contrasting the tears with the wind, I like it a lot....He burst into tears, but the remorseless wind...
Do you mind if I run the revised version past my helper?
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