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    (Insert innuendo here) Member Balloon Bomber Champion DemonArchangel's Avatar
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    Default Flight

    In a deep corner of your mind, you know what is to come.
    The burning tension, searing a hole clear through your conscious.
    Your senses sharpen as bundles of muscle, hard as iron, tense up under your skin
    Sun beating down on your back as you survey the vista before you.
    Miles of nothing but concrete jungle
    Instincts displace reason, instincts displace fear.
    Instincts make your moves.
    You smile as your grind the balls of your feet against the roof tiles
    You sling yourself into a crouch, sniffing the air, feral, alert
    Now or never, you tell yourself as you break into a dead sprint
    The wind runs through your hair, fire sears your lungs.
    Sailing through the air, your soul is freed from earthly bondage.
    Liberation.
    Flight.

    Note: This was my aborted .org writing contest entry, which I couldn't condense to under 1,500 words. So I turned it into a poem.
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    China is not a world power. China is the world, and it's surrounded by a ring of tiny and short-lived civilisations like the Americas, Europeans, Mongols, Moghuls, Indians, Franks, Romans, Japanese, Koreans.

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    Default Re: Flight

    I was disappointed you didn't make the deadline, but I can see you went the poetry way. Solves the writer's block that's for sure

    I really like it, it's personal and your wording conveys your imagery perfectly. Well done DA

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