Quote Originally Posted by General Appo View Post
Yet again, beautiful.
Wow! Now that was a fast reply. Thanks mate, although I'm quite unhappy with it. I did a hatchet job of cutting this down to size, blowing away descriptions (a given since I have to post in short aar format), fluff dialogue and details... and most importantly the ram scene... but that one I will adapt and use elsewhere... no not in this aar, I'll steal it for other purposes.

Aar writing is still fun though, because if you want to maintain briefness, you have to stick to the essence of things... On some level I rather dislike the fact I have to renounce fluff dialogue and padding at times, because it makes the obvious even more obvious... but oh well, I assure you that even those who think they know what's going on with the Dragon King might still be _greatly_ surprised.

Shock tactics are still to come.