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    Quote Originally Posted by Aaldaemon View Post
    the only suggestion I would make - and this is JUST a minor personal preference - don't take it as criticism - is to add a few more spaces to delimitate paragraphs some more - like for example the second part of the first entry is one big wall of text - a good one though.
    You mean the part with the battle? I had put it in one block to make it less easy to read to enhance the effect of those sentence fragments, but i'll think about what can be done about it.
    Read about glory and decline of the Seleucid Empire... (EB 1.1 AAR)

    from Satalexton from I of the Storm from Vasiliyi

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    Default Re: The Legacy of Megas Alexandros - a seleucid AAR

    Quote Originally Posted by Lysimachos View Post
    You mean the part with the battle? I had put it in one block to make it less easy to read to enhance the effect of those sentence fragments, but i'll think about what can be done about it.
    Ah, I see, it makes sense now. Ignore my suggestion then in that case - I guess it's well thought out that way and works well.

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    Great AAR, finally Arche Seleukeia! Though I prefer the original Makedones, I sincerely hope you manage to reconquer Alexandros' Empire and even beyond that! Would do with some battle pics, though;)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Maion Maroneios View Post
    Great AAR, finally Arche Seleukeia! Though I prefer the original Makedones, I sincerely hope you manage to reconquer Alexandros' Empire and even beyond that! Would do with some battle pics, though;)
    I'll see what i can do, but it will take some chapters until i can show battlepics, as i have played a while ahead of the story.
    Last edited by Lysimachos; 06-06-2008 at 18:54.
    Read about glory and decline of the Seleucid Empire... (EB 1.1 AAR)

    from Satalexton from I of the Storm from Vasiliyi

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