Glad to be here Monk!

Thanks for the heads up about that Monk. I personally love to write (mainly for school purposes) so any way to improve my writing is welcomed
I think I forgot to mention that I had wrote this for my English class. It is supposed to be a narrative story, so that is why I used the you in it. I think next time I post a story, I'll specify the perspective I'm writing in .

And thanks again for welcoming me here!