Interesting story Lemur. It kind of reminds me of There Will Be Blood but focusing on all the moments between the dad and the son.
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Interesting story Lemur. It kind of reminds me of There Will Be Blood but focusing on all the moments between the dad and the son.
"No one said it was gonna be easy! If it was, everyone would do it..that's who you know who really wants it."
All us men suffer in equal parts, it's our lot in life, and no man goes without a broken heart or a lost love. Like holding your dog as he takes his last breath and dies in your arms, it's a rite of passage. Unavoidable. And honestly, I can't imagine life without that depth of feeling.-Bierut
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I really enjoyed both. Very different styles, both good stories.
#Hillary4prism
BD:TW
Some piously affirm: "The truth is such and such. I know! I see!"
And hold that everything depends upon having the “right” religion.
But when one really knows, one has no need of religion. - Mahavyuha Sutra
Freedom necessarily involves risk. - Alan Watts
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Nice story AoM. Good read.
BD:TW
Some piously affirm: "The truth is such and such. I know! I see!"
And hold that everything depends upon having the “right” religion.
But when one really knows, one has no need of religion. - Mahavyuha Sutra
Freedom necessarily involves risk. - Alan Watts
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Hey all.
Unsticking the thread to tidy up around here. This place has gotten so dusty.
Continue to post all comments/critiques you have on the entries! With luck we'll have more before the week is up.
Last edited by Monk; 10-27-2008 at 17:29.
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I hope another onew would be added to the collection of contest stories
Edited : Soon
Last edited by Prince Cobra; 10-27-2008 at 20:00.
R.I.P. Tosa...
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Nice story AoM. Liking the imagery you used.
"No one said it was gonna be easy! If it was, everyone would do it..that's who you know who really wants it."
All us men suffer in equal parts, it's our lot in life, and no man goes without a broken heart or a lost love. Like holding your dog as he takes his last breath and dies in your arms, it's a rite of passage. Unavoidable. And honestly, I can't imagine life without that depth of feeling.-Bierut
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i might be able to get a story in... not a chance for a 1 or 2 day delay? since this week im working 60 hours and you happened to deny my entry on invalid reasons!!!!;)
We do not sow.
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