Contest comments thread.

**naut** · 10-27-2008, 13:43

Nice story AoM. Good read.

**Monk** · 10-27-2008, 17:29

Hey all.

Unsticking the thread to tidy up around here. This place has gotten so dusty.

Continue to post all comments/critiques you have on the entries! With luck we'll have more before the week is up.

**Prince Cobra** · 10-27-2008, 17:38

I hope another onew would be added to the collection of contest stories

Edited : Soon

**Decker** · 10-27-2008, 17:58

Nice story AoM. Liking the imagery you used.

**The Stranger** · 10-29-2008, 11:25

i might be able to get a story in... not a chance for a 1 or 2 day delay? since this week im working 60 hours and you happened to deny my entry on invalid reasons!!!!

;)

**Monk** · 10-30-2008, 01:11

Rythmic's entry is up.

**Decker** · 10-30-2008, 01:44

Interesting story Rythmic. The parts with the "()" were you own commentary??

Was a little distracting. But other than that. It was an interesting read. Was the guy schizophrenic? That was one of my first thoughts lol. I liked watching him with this "shadowy figure" haunting him on his walk home.

And I just wish everyone was allowed to flesh out their entire stories

Some look to be really good