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    mine so far, ive set up a serene scene and i just cant bring myself to making it decay

    The Day Life Vanished


    Amongst the cobalt of an aquatic surf silver scaled Capelin fish relish and splash in a crimson burnt sun. Fossilized shell occupies the under bank of some shallow waters accompanied with vibrant vitalized lily pads. Marshland surrounds the gentle sea with cotton grass dancing in a violent gust, while sparse rabbits hop tentatively and patiently while adapting to manoeuvre in the passive ground beneath them. The marsh is saturated with age more primarily than liquid. But soon everything hides and waits for reincarnation after sunset cloaks the vast terrain and a seemingly perfect scenery evaporates into the essence of heinous darkness.

    Vitality was assumed to continue as it always did, only no light came on the next subsequent day, vegetation shrivelled

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    Then some crazy, psycho, ******* came along and nuked said serene local. And before long zombie and creepy **** started appearing everywhere eating the survivors and consuming all living things. Then a Crazed Rabbit came along with some nutty friends and pulled the hero trick by killing them all and saving the world... only to find out that he himself was infected. He would later come back ala Kerrigan style.

    You can also add in a love story or something to make it more dramatic.


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    All us men suffer in equal parts, it's our lot in life, and no man goes without a broken heart or a lost love. Like holding your dog as he takes his last breath and dies in your arms, it's a rite of passage. Unavoidable. And honestly, I can't imagine life without that depth of feeling.-Bierut

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    Quote Originally Posted by Decker View Post
    Then some crazy, psycho, ******* came along and nuked said serene local. And before long zombie and creepy **** started appearing everywhere eating the survivors and consuming all living things. Then a Crazed Rabbit came along with some nutty friends and pulled the hero trick by killing them all and saving the world... only to find out that he himself was infected. He would later come back ala Kerrigan style.

    You can also add in a love story or something to make it more dramatic.


    thanks on the advice!


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    on what to avoid.....
    Last edited by Thermal; 10-29-2008 at 01:22.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aries777777 View Post
    thanks on the advice!


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    on what to avoid.....
    IIIIII still personally think that it's a great idea and will land you some mulah ala Fallout 3 if ya know what I mean
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    Quote Originally Posted by Decker View Post
    IIIIII still personally think that it's a great idea and will land you some mulah ala Fallout 3 if ya know what I mean
    fallout 3? so i base my writing on an up coming game? anyway i havent enough time or inspiration left to meet the deadline, so good day writing competition

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    So I was writing, (last part luckily), did a word count. Ten, (10), words available! Editing time.

    Who else has a piece but hasn't submitted it yet?
    #Hillary4prism

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    I got a piece I'm trying to get finished up today, since I have some free time.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Monk View Post
    The next person to suggest something like this is getting their writing license revoked! Love stories don't need to be shoveled into everything!



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    I realize Decker's post was tongue in cheek. I feel this needs to be said. Seriously, I'll revoke your license!
    Yeah they do. SOmeone needs to write in those graphic love scenes ya know!


    Quote Originally Posted by Aries777777 View Post
    fallout 3? so i base my writing on an up coming game? anyway i havent enough time or inspiration left to meet the deadline, so good day writing competition
    IE the world getting nuked like in Fallout 3 haha
    "No one said it was gonna be easy! If it was, everyone would do it..that's who you know who really wants it."

    All us men suffer in equal parts, it's our lot in life, and no man goes without a broken heart or a lost love. Like holding your dog as he takes his last breath and dies in your arms, it's a rite of passage. Unavoidable. And honestly, I can't imagine life without that depth of feeling.-Bierut

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    Remember, if your story ever starts to feel like it's slow, just type the words "while running from the mob." That will set you right.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Decker View Post
    Then some crazy, psycho, ******* came along and nuked said serene local. And before long zombie and creepy **** started appearing everywhere eating the survivors and consuming all living things. Then a Crazed Rabbit came along with some nutty friends and pulled the hero trick by killing them all and saving the world... only to find out that he himself was infected. He would later come back ala Kerrigan style.

    You can also add in a love story or something to make it more dramatic.


    The next person to suggest something like this is getting their writing license revoked! Love stories don't need to be shoveled into everything!



    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 
    I realize Decker's post was tongue in cheek. I feel this needs to be said. Seriously, I'll revoke your license!
    Last edited by Monk; 10-29-2008 at 09:24.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Monk View Post
    The next person to suggest something like this is getting their writing license revoked! Love stories don't need to be shoveled into everything!



    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 
    I realize Decker's post was tongue in cheek. I feel this needs to be said. Seriously, I'll revoke your license!
    No love stories? What. Damn.

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 
    #Hillary4prism

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    Then I'm sure you loved mine Monk!


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