Well, ive been going back over this for about two weeks now. And ive realized something. The format and writing style of this AAR is heavily flawed. The dairy style past view, while it has taught me a LOT, this being my very first AAR and all, has for me, simply reached its limit and i cant express this story the way i want to anymore. Azathoth has pointed out some MAJOR flaws to me and i thank him for it. These flaws are:
1. My AAR has very poor characterization and descriptions.
2. It has made me do forced time-skips all over the place due to its book-like format, something i originally did not want to do.
3. I have been forced to go with a repeating story line and i have also been unable to adequately describe, in story, the skipped periods.
So for these reasons and a few more, i am ending this AAR. Do not worry, if you enjoyed it, i fully intend to write another, much more professional one in the future.