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    Default A Spartan Future

    Prelude:
    "My name is Eukleides Nikias Apollon. I born of Eugenios Nikiandros and Andromeda. My father fought to unite the hellas, and I fought to defend it against its most powerful foe yet. I write this history from accounts of the elders of Sparte, and my father's own accounts before his passing. In 275 BC, 3 great hellenic cities united to face the threat of Makedon. Her imperial ambitions still hounded against us even after the death of Alexandros! Athenai, Rhodes. These were the only free states willing to risk joining Sparte on her defiance of the evil tyranny of Makedonian rule. One king! Who will keep that single king from corrupting?! Our King Kleonomos went to Athenai by ship to ask for assistance in fighting back the Hounds of Hades as they were then known. Reluctantly the Attike's accepted, and prepared their citizen warriors to face the coming war. Rhodes had already begged Sparte to aid them if Makedon decided to attempt a second invasion of their island. Perhaps the warning of the Collosus was not enough? That statue was built with the money gained from Makedon's abandoned seige equipment after all. Sparte agreed to send aid if such an invasion occurred, but not unless Rhodes sent economic support. Our great state could not stand alone, dispite our military prowess.. We had but 700 Homoi left. Our old barracks were falling apart with the economic crisis, we could not afford to continue to train young men in the old ways like before. In 272 BC The new King Areus Agiados went to Crete to find mercenaries willing to help our plight. Most of our army accompanied our king incase the King of Crete decided to attack our forces despite our prior notice of our true intentions on the island. Such actions were prudent in the perilous times..."

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    I decided to follow you AAR after the debates we had about Spartan history and the possibility of a hellenistic Spartan Hegemony, mainly because I would like to make up for being too strict with things. This is EB after all, we make history! Plus, I am a fan of Sparta

    So good luck with the AAR, I guess!

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    I am following this AAR, but I am going to hold my comments until you put up more stuff. Can't really judge you now.

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    Well my current KH campaign will be taking a backseat for once, and I'll be starting this new one today.
    Screenshots will be Raw, with minimal UI, since im retarded at computer stuff.

    This IS MY FIRST AAR so bear with me I hope you guys like it. Its gunna be somewhat of a blood bath haha. The main enemies will be Epirots, Makedon, Athens and Carthage or Rome (whom ever is the largest and moves into the Hellas)
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    So it begins. Good to see you on board, Maion. Hopefully our heated but educational debate will keep C_P here to a feasible story -- or at least keep him on his toes ;)

    I look forward to seeing this come to fruition.

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    Good thing I checked the AAR section for once... wouldn't wanna miss this
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    Default FIRST UPDATE!!!!

    "To keep from going into debt, Areus borrowed 5000 mnai from Ptolemaic Egypt under the condition that it would be paid back in full as soon as the Spartan League could, and if the Ptolemaic Pharaoh ever needed military aid, it would be sent with haste. The League put this money to use immediately. Agathokles, King of Rhodes, designed a completely new port to support the new flow of trade from Egypt. In Athens the council decided to do the same, and also fixed the drainage problem below the Acropolis. Sparta herself invested in a larger market with the Ptolemaic gold.

    Areus Agiados of Lakedaimonios was met by King Ainesidemos to discuss his possible admittance to the Spartan led alliance. Unfortunately for the late Ainesidemos, he declined, giving Areus the remainder of the day to leave Crete or he would lead his men to the field to face the Spartan.
    Fearing a trap set by Makedon, Areus declined, and challenged the young King. "We will meet you, at your city!" He replied, asking for the island's surrender. The Cretan also declined the Hedgemon's generous offer of joining the alliance as a full member, and returned to Kydonia. Later in the week all 242 men from Ainesidemos' Phalangites and 320 of his best archers defected to Areus. Feeling he had the upperhand, Areus now laid seige to the city.

    Once finished the rams in early Theros, Areus now pleaded to the young King to join the Alliance, and that his life would be spared, and he'd retain his position as king. A single volley of arrows was the only reply from the city. Areus now had no choice... His words before his men were remembered and recorded. 'Today fellow Hellens we fight for honour! We fight that so one day, all the Hellas may be at peace with eachother, and a see a new age of Greek prosperity! The Cretan King has made an enemy of Sparta! Let us show him what happened to Persia when they became our enemies! NIKE SHINES HER GLORY ON US TODAY!"


    Using his 320 cretan archers to cover the ram's advance, the 162 Athenian Hoplites advanced.
    The ram did its job, and the Athenians found a suitable standoff point to hold back the counter attack. The constant bombardmant from the turncoat archers kept the enemy off the Athenians just long enough to set in formation

    Areus began moving his unit of Spartan hoplites into the city, seeing the Athenians being pushed back by the shear weight of the Cretans he ordered them to withdraw and the Spartans now took the fight with deadly efficiency.

    After several hours of fighting, most of the Cretans lay dead, and when Ainesidemos took flight himself the rest of his army was not long in following! The Hedgemon took this fatal error to heart and charged his men home, butchering the straglers, and setting up next to the intersection before the town square. He sent his second in command to order the Cretan Phalangites and Rhodesian hoplites to deploy within the walls. It was during this crucial phase at the intersection where Ainesidemos made a final heroic charge and was killed by a Spartan named Eukleides, My father's father. Areus fought wave after wave, cutting any and all resistance to pieces with his blade, till they reached the square.

    'A LAST PITIFUL CHARGE BOYS! TO HOME! CHARGE!' Cried Areus upon seeing 30 odd hoplites charging from the otherside of the intersection. But before the lines clashed, the Cretans turned and fled!

    Mere metres from the town square a hundred or so Peltastai tried to hold the spartans off but to no avail, they broke in a matter of minutes. Leading his men by example Areus charged again, cutting deep into the Cretans and he was the first to reach the square, cut off from his men Areus fought like a lion and defended himself till the rest of the hoplites reached him. The Cretan turncoat Phalangites moved up to the intersection to cover the Spartans backs.

    Seeing this Areus called out to his men 'REFORM! WE MUST REFORM! FALLBACK!' But in truth this was no rout, but a cleverly guised, and old, Spartan trick! they lead the Cretans into their own Phalangites and allowed the Spartans some well deserved rest.

    The Phalangites moved forward and butchered the cretans till they got to the square, Spartans tagging behind closely. The cretans fought tooth and nail, but it all eventually perished. The final Cretan fell to a Spartan named Achiaos.


    Despite most Cretans welcoming direct Spartan control and a Hedgemon Areus decided to expel all Cretans still loyal to their dead King's dynasty, even though the Queen decided to accept the Spartan King's offers. Once settling the Athenian hoplites in the newest addition to the Spartan League, and setting up the new government, Areus took the rest of his warriors and set sail for Athens to help defend her from the coming attack from Makedon."



    Too many screens? or what? should i put them in spoiler tags?
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    Default Re: FIRST UPDATE!!!!

    Good update, but I think you're making things too easy by giving yourself 15.000 mnai to be honest... Also takes the fun out of the game, if you get me. I've always found it fun to fight myself into a considerable power against all odds as the Koinon.

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    Chapter 3: An Uneasy Peace
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    I appologize for not updating in a while, and the lack of screens, I lost them all in a cpu crash after I exited the game on Friday. luckily I write my AAR by hand first, then I make the 2nd draft changes here on the forum.

    Autumn! Sinope is attacked by hordes of Pontic barbarians! Agathokles sent 100mnai in grain, bows, arrows, and bowstrings, 4 catapults, and 150 men to permanently join the sinope defence force. Rhodes also had finished the docks and began construction of a new naval dock which only cost the League 1600 mnai. Sparta began clearing out a harbour and fixed their drainage issue in the main quarter. Admiral Nikandros said back to Athens to avoid Poseidon's angry storms of winter. He left Athenai in 272 aged 36, a fresh sailor. He returned a triumphant hero, a wiley captain, with only 89 ships of the original 172 under his command. The extra hands returning from sea pushed the construction of the new docks to late winter. My father joined his father that summer at the age of 19. He noticed the King Areus had gained an affinity with Athenia, perhaps it was her acting through him in our war against the Makedonian Hegemon. Areus sent word to Sparta he was planning a raid on Thessalia, but the Euphors prohibited it. Till we were attacked on the Peloponnese any aggressiveness would be uncalled for they said. The oracle of Delphi told us the Euphors cared not for Greece but only Sparta. When Areus returned from Delphi he decided to obey the Euphors and Spartan law and waited at Athens expecting Makedon. The year ended with no attack however, and scouts were sent to Thessalia to watch for any strike coming in Spring and after. Agathokles' second son was born 2nd week of spring. Named Otos of Rhodos. King Akrotatos of Sparta began construction on some simple docks for Sparta now that there was a suitable harbour cleared. Korinth started digging sewers seeing a possible problem in the future. Early summer of 270, Eudamidas & Areus joined the Elusians. As areus' scribe, my father became well acquainted with the late King Areus. It was Areus who pushed for new sewers in athens. Seeing the horrendous condition the poor had to live in. It was he who commissioned the new temple to Athenai, and he who built the sanctuary of Asklepieos in Athens. It was he who sealed the alliance with Phyrros. Late summer Areus took 248 Spartans to "scout" the border area since the scouts who were dispatched in late winter did not ever send word. 1550 Athenian hoplites were sent to "patrol" the Attike, both meeting up on the border for the raid. Chremonides the League rep for Athens accepted a ceasefire with Selukeia on the condition they end hostilities with Ptolemy, and that trade between the two nations flow. He then built a colony on the isle of Mykonos, just as his naval dock was built.

    Under the excuse of chasing a thief stealing food from his camp, Areus crossed the border with his men, and recieved reinforcements of 2400 helots and the 18 100 Cretan Phalangites.
    By the end of Summer Areus' ploy did not pay off.. The field armies of Makedon retreated into Demetrias, and refused to come out to engage by the beginning of winter. Areus returned to the Peloponnese.
    Autumn 269 Areus oncovered a MAkedonina spy network in Athens, rounded them up, and publicly executed them. He left their headless corpses hanging from the gates as a warning to future enemy agents who would pass them. Korinth began updating her merchant quarter and Chalkis completed a Shrine to Poseidon. As Areus returned to Sparte with Eudamidas a festival was held to Nike to celebrate their return and many victories against the Makedones.
    That winter Agathokles died of natural causes, and a festival on the island was held everyear since on that day to commemorate his contribution to her glory. It was also to keep the minds of the populace of Rhodes off the Impending disaster in the recordbooks and budgets since Agathokles did all the bookeeping budgeting and other management things himself. Especially since it was his eldest boy, Eugenios, aged 10, who would be assuming the throne of Rhodos.
    Ptolemy demanded their money, in full, by the end of 268. Areus agreed to pay, and said he'd send
    Admiral Nikandros with the money in the summer of '68. The young Rhodesian commissioned a new public gymnasium which was schedualed for completion in 2 1/2 years.

    Hermine, daughter of Areus was married to Chlidanon Lamptraios of Attike. An Attike-born man who's family had roots in Pontos Euxeniou. He was a calm, Skilled, unflaggin cavalryman who took few luxuries in life. He knew his way around politics and government, an dhe was sent to Athens to study till he was 20 years of age.
    In Summer 268, Admiral Nikandros left the port of Athens and set sail for Alexandria. A brutal storm put him off schedual and he would arrive in early Spring 267. Akrotatos competed in the 268 Olympics. The day before his son competed, Areus had a vision of fighting in the streets of Sparte against an enemy he did not recognize in a style he had not seen before. They bore red like the hoplites of Sparte, but fought with large shields and a small sword. He assumed this dream to be a warning from Athena, and began experimenting with large rectangular shaped shields and how to defeat soldiers armed like the men he saw in his vision. He decided all League spending should for the next 4 years should be spent on the military. Sparte's new barracks would be commissioned as soon as proper funding was raised. Around 12 000 mnai! He gave a grant of 4800 mnai to the blacksmiths in Sparte so that they could band together and they were now paid and organized by the Spartan Hegemon. The grant would be paid back in full in a year and a half - Winter 267.

    Cretan boy's who were seen as hardy, and good potential were taken from their parents and shipped to Sparta to undergo the Agoge. Athens had its own Doros Aithalidos, son of Chremonides, sent for the agoge in late 268. These men would become future soldiers and fight in the ranks of the Hoplitai trained in Sparte. They were given Spartan citizenship if they completed the Agoge, and were called Companions.
    Nikandros arrived early Spring, and saw that in breech of the Ceasefire agreement with Arche Seluekia, they were blockading the port of Alexandria. He broke the ceasefire, in a surprise attack at night. He surrounded the 25 Seleukid Kerkuoi as so,

    trapping the enemy against the port. Nikandros and another ship went up the gap and forced the Seleukids to attack the belt. 2 ships were lost for 13 of the Seleukids. The others escaped and Nikandros quickly dropped off the money and sailed east to destroy the remnants of the Seleukid navy.
    Back home Athens begun Construction of a newer, larger barracks, and Areus declared in a public address that the Spartan League had secured all of the Peloponnese and asked all the Hellens to send word to the Spartan Council chambers they wished to join the League against Makedon. Our men were itching to go back to Thessalia.



    OOC What do you think of my little map of the Naval battle? I'm going to do better next time, but thats what most of the naval engagements will look like from now on. I will sometimes put more than one on, and go completely indepth, depending on how vital the battle is.
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    I'm gunna go ahead and bump this as there's not been much change in views.

    Maion what is Companion in greek?

    or is there already another word for non spartans who do the agoge?
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    since i'm a fan of hellenic history i will follow this AAR with pleasure
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    Companions = Hetairoi
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    Hmmmm... I need a new name then. What do you guys think it should be? Some details of the AAR will be decided by you guys, so I welcome any and all input, thanks!
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