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    Bureaucratically Efficient Senior Member TinCow's Avatar
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    Default Re: The Godfather, Part 3 (IN PLAY)

    The first death writeup does not seem like GH's writing to me. Note the grammar and spelling errors (bolded):

    Quote Originally Posted by GeneralHankerchief View Post
    Tratorix was driving home after the election results when he noticed a poster featuring a particularly attractive girl calling for change we can believe him.

    ...

    After a while, though, Tratorix started getting bored and was going to get back into his car when he noticed another poster across the street also calling for change we can believe him, but featuring another attractive girl.

    ...

    When he first reached the dusty poster, he couldn’t see anything. Only after brushing off all of the dust did he realize that it was actually a picture of some unknown masked man eating a baby, just like Tincown had accused shlin28 of.

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    As Tratorix lied on the ground, gasping for air and slowly bleeding to death, he heard a rustling noise. He wasn’t able to turn his head very fast on account of his knife wound, but he managed to see a dark figure running out of the alley.
    The second write-up does not seem to make the same errors. They seem to be written by two separate people to me, probably one by each mafia killer, though the second one could be GH. Despite the grammar and spelling errors in the first write-up, it is well written well and employs interesting and diverse vocabulary. This seems to indicate that it's either a person for whom English is not a first language, or an experienced writer that was careless and didn't proofread.

    Based on a quick perusal of the alive list, I'll go with the first person that strikes me as fitting one of those profiles:

    Vote: 187Beefyz
    Last edited by TinCow; 02-04-2009 at 21:54.


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