Need some imput...

**Tratorix** · 02-09-2009, 02:35

That is too true. Ill ignore the facts and stick to what I originally planned. Cheers

That what Dan Brown does and now he's a millionaire.

**Beefy187** · 02-09-2009, 03:30

Originally Posted by Tratorix

That what Dan Brown does and now he's a millionaire.

That is soo true

I reckon Angel and demon is a master piece though

**Uesugi Kenshin** · 02-09-2009, 04:55

You could always try substituting ticks or some other nasty critter for mosquitoes, I don't know if that will affect your grammar as I have no knowledge of Japanese grammar, but it's worth thinking about.

**Beefy187** · 02-09-2009, 07:14

Originally Posted by Uesugi Kenshin

You could always try substituting ticks or some other nasty critter for mosquitoes, I don't know if that will affect your grammar as I have no knowledge of Japanese grammar, but it's worth thinking about.

Grammatically it doesn't affect it. However I have more knowledge and love for the mosquitoes while I only have bitter memories for ticks..

I have half the story in English done. Ill do the other half sometime today or tomorrow

Thanks for the advice Kenshin dono

**Somebody Else** · 02-09-2009, 10:19

Make it Jane's husband and children who are ill, and she has to go off and do whatever...

**Beefy187** · 02-09-2009, 11:53

Originally Posted by Somebody Else

Make it Jane's husband and children who are ill, and she has to go off and do whatever...

I thought of that, except male mossys never drinks blood (maybe they do but only for fun) normally they live on other vegetablish things.

Only female mossys drinks blood as with blood they are able to produce about ten times more eggs compared to when they dont have blood. so its not life or death.

**pevergreen** · 02-10-2009, 03:10

Make it Jane is infertile and decides to get the blood of a god (or whatever it was) as a cure so she can deliver children to her husband? She could also be of a "high standing" like a princess or something in human terms. Don't think that would relate, but it makes more scientific sense?