Quote Originally Posted by Uesugi Kenshin View Post
You could always try substituting ticks or some other nasty critter for mosquitoes, I don't know if that will affect your grammar as I have no knowledge of Japanese grammar, but it's worth thinking about.
Grammatically it doesn't affect it. However I have more knowledge and love for the mosquitoes while I only have bitter memories for ticks..

I have half the story in English done. Ill do the other half sometime today or tomorrow

Thanks for the advice Kenshin dono