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    Default Re: On guard sah!

    Upon further and closer inspection
    You'll find that my rhyme reaches perfection.
    Speak with accent if you may,
    Pronounce "see" like it's "say";
    Plus, your gaffe earns your charge a rejection!

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    Default Re: On guard sah!

    That rhyme was as forced as 'twas weak,
    Your defense was quite tired (nay, peaked).
    "Reaches" untied
    The scan of your line,
    Replace it with "is" and it's tweaked.
    Last edited by Lemur; 02-17-2009 at 19:44.

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    Now this my friends is true sport,
    And with company true,
    I'll craft speech above the common sort,
    As I have seen you do.
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    Oh, so that's how it is; now I see.
    But I feel that I must inform thee
    That your style I denounce,
    And your verses I'll trounce;
    At your own risk do you challenge me.

    PS: It's called syllable count, biatch! :D
    Last edited by desert; 02-17-2009 at 20:48.

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    Our thread that Glenn wrote was once tame....
    But now it's turned itself to flame,
    A battle it is, and my comment on this:
    "Relax, dudes! It's only a game!"
    Last edited by Novellus; 02-17-2009 at 22:20.
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    Default Re: On guard sah!

    Lemur is right good Des',
    You're without luck I guess,
    Be not dismayed,
    'Tis how it's played,
    And of my gaffe I confess.


    Do you think, Lemur, that you,
    Can simply edit the few,
    Who do come in,
    And do begin,
    To bravely fight anew?

    I wouldn't mean to spite,
    But something isn't right,
    With Vukie's part,
    It hasn't art,
    Nor has it Irish might.


    I will take this last as commentary,
    As one not in the pit,
    But it would be complementary,
    If you limericked here with wit.

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    Default Re: On guard sah!

    Glenn, I must confess, I do wonder
    if you haven't commited a blunder.
    I had always believed
    Any lim'rick conceived
    Must also be a double entendre.

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    Where is my blunder then?
    When succeded you, when?
    You haven't found,
    The syllable count,
    So smoothly as young Glenn!

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