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    Great chapter, MAA! Do you mean Ktesiphon?

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    YEAH
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    Seems the first rounds went to the Macedonians
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    Yep, first year of combat goes to the Arche. The next year is a bit slow, I may cover the whole thing in one entry.

    I purposely avoided the Ktesiphon spelling so as not to draw a direct comparison between the historic city and the one in my AAR. In my campaign, the Parthians never expanded to Mesopotamia and built the Cteisphon of history. This was a city built by the Median army when they besieged Seleukeia. Since I'm terrible at coming up with names on my own, I used a alternate spelling of Ktesiphon, though it may not be an accurate spelling of anything.


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    Haha!

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    Winter Snows

    Our general, Antigonos, son and heir to the King of all the Hellenes, had
    taken his army to the mountains that separated the lands of the Hellenes and
    the lands of the Persians. We had not moved all the way up the pass, but
    had set up our camp to block any Persian armies just on the western side.

    We waited in the pass for an expected counterattack, but it did not come.
    Our scouts reported Persian armies moving in the valley in on the other side
    of the mountains, but we never saw them. Our army waited in the pass but
    saw no combat. Back down at the rivers, the other armies of the kingdom of
    the Hellenes besieged all of the Persian garrisons that had not escaped and
    no longer could escape.

    The army that we had twice fought and twice defeated down by the river Tigris
    had still not given up. From our camp, we received word that the army
    barracaded within the city of Seleukeia had joined up with the army outside the
    walls when they attacked Antigonos' brother's army.

    They say the army had to move away from the city and made it's battlefield
    along a roadway. Antigonos' brother had in his army many elephants. These
    were not the same type of elephant that the kingdom of Meroe had fielded
    against us. These were elephants from Syria. I was told that those beasts live
    only within the city of Demetreia. Since the army had never entered the city
    when we were in Syria, I hadn't seen these elephants and cannot say how they
    differed from those I have seen.



    It is safe to assume that the battle began with a Persian cavalry charge. That
    seems to be the main tactic of the Persians. It does work at times, but usually
    only costs the lives of many Persian horsemen.



    They say the elephants were the heroes of the battle. They tore through the
    Persian troops and scarred them from the field. I have seen what elephants can
    do and wish that I could have seen the sight from the other side just once.



    Once the battle was over, both Persian armies were ready to surrender. The
    city of Seleukeia fell back into the hands of the kingdom of the Hellenes and
    the Persian armies disbanded. During that winter, the city of Babylon was
    taken by mercenary forces and the remaining Persians to our west
    surrendered.

    The Hellenes I knew in the army said that this pushed the borders back to
    their previous point before the war with the Persians. For a time I thought the
    war was going to end and I would be free to go home. I had mixed emotions
    at this thought. I had grown tired of warfare, but there was only poverty awaiting
    me back on the shores of the river where I was born. All confusion over the
    subject was dispelled when General Antigonos announced that the war would
    continue and the Persians would be punished. His speech to the men was
    quite inspiring. For a man who seemed so separate and different from his
    men, he still had the ability to get them to follow him.

    We spent that winter in our camp, halfway up the mountains. When the first
    cold came, I saw my first snow. By the height of winter, I not longer enjoyed the
    sight of snow. There was so much of it. It covered the grown and refused to go
    away. I would often volunteer to assist the scouts just to get the chance to ride
    down into the dry lands below. Most of the time we would actually go up over
    the mountians into Persian territory. Even in the valley on the far side of the
    mountains, snow covered the ground.

    It was around the time when the winter was drawing to a close and the snows
    were beginning to melt that my life once again changed. We had set up our
    camp back in the end days of the hottest season and it was now the end of the
    cold season. We had been in the area for almost half a year without a battle.
    Many locals and traders from the cities down below came to our camp to sell
    things to us. Some of them brought food for the army to purchase, some
    brought simple items or games for the soldiers to buy, and some brought
    women. At first, the traders were not allowed to enter the camp, but as the
    months passed, the guards at the gates relaxed.

    On this particular day, I had just returned from a mission with the scouts.
    General Antigonos was busy with something so he came to meet us at the
    camp's gate. There, the scout leader gave his report, which was nothing
    significant, while the rest of us stood and waited.

    While we waited, a small man came around trying to sell some worthless
    trinkets to us. We just ignored him and he moved around to each of us. He
    seemed out of his mind and his items were all worthless. But this, as it
    turns out, was just an act. Each time he pestered a man, he moved closer
    to Antigonos. He was right next to the commander of the scouts when I
    noticed him draw a knife from his pile of junk. I screemed, I believe it was
    something in my native tongue, and ran forward. The lone guard that was
    with Antigonos lunged at the man, but the man was quick with his knife and
    it was in the throat of the guard before he could even draw his sword. The
    attacker then turn towards Antigonos.

    Everything was a blur to me, I acted without thinking. Before I knew what had
    happened, I had jumped on top of the man. He turned around and struck his
    knife at my throat. I dodged it to save my life, but it landed in my upper right
    arm. A managed to grab his knife arm with my right hand and grabbed for
    something with my left hand. I did not remember at the time that there was a
    knife strapped to my belt. Instead I found a rock on the ground and swung it
    with full speed at the side of the man's head. He went still.

    I slowly sat up and looked around me. Only Antigonos had drawn his sword.
    Everyone else just stared in disbelief. In a moment a huge group of
    Antiogonos' companions had arrived. They surrounded the general, the
    attacker, and me. One of them helped me to my feet while another inspected
    the attacker. He was still alive and they carried him off. The remaining
    companions escorted Antigonos back to his tent.

    I dropped the rock, picked up my bow, and walked slowly toward my own tent.
    I noticed there was blood coming down my right arm and turned to head for
    the medical tent.


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    Nice! Did you have an assasin try to kill him or is that something you just added to the story? Nice touch by the way. Reminds me of Theodotus a bit :)

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    Nice twist! I see a great career before our Nile dweller.

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    Yeah, great chapter again
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    Thanks.

    The assassination attempt and failure actually happened. In fact, just about every turn since that time there has been one or two assassins doing their animation toward the army. Fortunately, they must not be very good assassins.


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    In that case you really ought to stick a couple assassins/spies in your armies to be safe. You never know when one will get lucky.

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    Awesome job, MAA, keep it up!
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    Be careful with those assassins or the heir to the Arche Makedonia might go mad with paranoia. Although that could be very interesting to role-play.

    And of course excellent update as always

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    Looks like the archer might get special treatment soon.


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    Thanks for the comments.

    I did immediately move a spy to the army after the first attempt. I thought about not sending a spy and letting them try their best to kill him for roleplaying. I decided not to do that since it would probably lead to another civil war and I didn't feel like doing that again so soon. With a very old Philippos and an infant Hippostratus (Alypios' son), there would be a power vaccuum that would probably lead to civil war.

    I'm having dental problems right now, so I haven't been in the right mood to write, so the next chapter is delayed a bit.

    EDIT : Dang! I played about three years worth today, including two crucial battles that were both very close. I just checked and it turns out that none of my screenshots were saved. I don't know why either. FRAPS was on and it said it was saving, but no new pics in the folder.

    EDIT 2 : Scratch that. I found them. My computer had crashed and reset the date to 2007. The pictures were thus dated wrong and back near the beginning of my AAR pictures.
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    finally caught up with this, great AAR

    its my favourite AAR of the moment

    here, have a balloon for the full AAR (including the two previous threads)

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    Thanks, Roka.

    Next chapter soon. Although it is mostly story and little gameplay. I started writing and got on a roll.


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    The Basilikon Agema

    The gash in my arm was stitched back together like a torn robe. The old
    veteran Hellene who had done it told me that too much use of the arm would
    probably tear it open and should be avoided. He alsos said to watch it and
    make sure it didn't change color or start releasing puss. I was then sent out.
    I headed to the other side of the camp. I knew drawing my bow would
    impossible in my condition. For the first time in months, I hoped that things
    would remain quite for a while so as to give me time to heal.

    I took my time and walked very slowly. It was just passed midday when the
    merchant had tried to attack on Antigonos. It was by that time approaching
    dusk. When came within sight of my tent, I noticed several of Antigonos'
    "companions" talking to some of my fellow archers. As I approached, one of
    my friends pointed at me and the Hellenic nobles ran up to me. My first
    instinct was to turn and run from them, fearing I was to be punished for going
    beyond my role as a soldier. I did not run. If I had crossed some line and
    done something I should not have, I would accept the fate they had for me.

    "Come with us," one of them said in the Hellenes' language. They said some
    name or title I did not recognize, "...demands you appear before him." I knew
    they spoke of General Antigonos. He went by many names and titles. Most
    of the titles I never bothered to remember.

    I nodded and we walked back across the camp once more. The men said
    nothing more to me as we walked.

    I had thought we were headed to the general's tent but instead we came to an
    area near the center of the camp. In a large open area, guarded by Antigonos'
    companions and royal guards, I saw the man I had fougth with earlier that day.
    He was on an upright beam, tied there above the ground. He was much more
    bloodied than the last time I had seen him. I do not know what happened
    before I got to the open area but as we entered the area, I noticed General
    Antigonos. He waved his arm to a Hellene standing just below the suspended
    assassin. That Hellene swiftly trust a spear upward and into the assassin.
    The man screamed and then fell limp.

    General Antigonos turned and for the first time noticed I had walked up. He
    smiled, in his way, and drew near to me. "What is your name, soldier?" he
    said, demanding more than asking.

    "I am called Tabriqo, I am from Nubia," I responded softly, in the language of
    the Hellenes. I was still unsure of my fate. Nubia is the name given by the
    Hellenes to the province in which I was trained and the answer to the second
    question often asked of me by officers. This time, I volunteered the answer
    before it was asked.

    "My father likes to say 'Every good barbarian is a Hellene, and every bad
    Hellene a barbarian'," the general said without a pause, as though I had not
    even spoken. "I like to believe that this is true as well. By that statement, you
    proved yourself to be a true Hellene today." I stood silently. I did not know if
    that was a complement, an insult, or just his way of thanking me. He
    continued, "Today I lost a good man who loyaly stood by my side and defended
    me for many years. You have proven that you are capible of that job, and it is
    unlikely you have connections or sympathies to the Persians." General
    Antigonos made his aristocratic smile once more, turned, and walked away.

    The captain of Antigonos' guard walked up to me as the general and the majority
    of the Hellenes walked out of the great open area at the center of the camp.
    This man was very old but still looked as though he could easily fight off any man
    half his age. "He's taken a liking to you," he began. "You didn't even think, did
    you? You just jumped that guy and saved the prince?" His manner of speech
    was much less formal than most of the Hellene nobles I had spoken to. In fact,
    he seemed almost less formal than the basic Hellene soldiers with whom I had
    spoken and befriended in the army over the years. "My name is Damatrios and
    I'll be in charge of you from here. Thanks to the prince, that is." He seemed
    annoyed to have to talk to me. "I am captain of the prince's division of the Royal
    Guard, which you are now a part of." He paused for a second then abruptly
    added, "Follow me," before turning and walking across the opening. I followed,
    quietly. As we were leaving the open area, I turned and looked back one last
    time at the man whom I had helped capture and was now hanging lifeless in the
    center of the camp.

    I had not been asked if I wanted this new position, and I assume I could not have
    turned it down. I thought Antigonos may have given me this position as a reward,
    but at that moment it was all overwhelming to me.

    We walked to the collection of tents that made up the command area of the camp.
    We entered one of the side tents, Damatrios' tent. I stood near the entrance while
    Damatrios sat down next to a table covered in maps and letters. He began to
    speak once more in his very informal manner, "The man you killed was just an
    agent. He told us that he was working for a man named Mitrozaban. This
    Mitrozaban works directly for the Persian king and is nicknamed 'the killer' in their l
    anguage. Apparently he is very good. And he is still out there! Since you were
    able to handle the last assassin, part of your job will be to look out for and stop
    future assassins. The prince has sent for an expert of sorts. You'll be working with
    him. That's all." Damatrios called for another guard and I was taken to my new
    living space.



    General Antigonos had two kinds of men who guarded him. His companions were
    nobles from Hellas that rode with him into battle, while the royal guards where those
    responsible for his protection outside of battle. The companions would often serve
    as guards in time of trouble, such as eariler that day or when meeting with enemy
    diplomats, but they were not the ones responsible for his life. Captain Damatrios
    lead the royal guards and we were tasked with keeping our general alive.

    It was from my fellow guards that I learned most of what I needed to know about my
    new job. Some of the Hellenes in the guards did not like me, but many became my
    new friends. One of the guards, a man named Duratios, came up to me on the
    second day and asked me about my ring. I told him where I had found it and what I
    knew about it. I thought the man a Hellene, but he told me his father had come
    from Thraikia and that he recognized the design on the ring as from his homeland.
    Duratios and I became friends and he helped me greatly in adjusting to all that was
    new. For my first week, my friends in the guards showed me what I needed to
    know and gave me some training.

    I was given a new robe, shoes, and cloak. They were all well made and worth more
    than I could have ever been able to purchase on my own. Along with them, I was
    given a sword. It was one of the Hellenes' sword, a "kopis" they called it. Since I
    could not use my bow until my wound healed, this would be my primary weapon. I
    was not given armor, like many of the other royal guards wore, but I would not have
    wanted it. Armor would just weight me down and restrict my movements. Months
    later, I was given a bow made by the Syrians and taught myself how to use it. Armor
    surely would have gotten in the way of drawing my bow.



    About a week after being assigned to the royal guards, a man arrived in camp and I
    was told to meet with him. Captain Damatrios, my friend Duratios, and I meet with
    this old man in Captain Damatrios' tent. His name was Alys Iolkios and he was the
    expert who had been sent to catch the assassins. In this first meeting with him,
    Captain Damatrios told him all he knew of the assassins and the situation. Alys
    remained silent.

    In all the time I knew him, Alys Iolkios spoke very little, and when he spoke it was
    always and order or about the mission. I did learn, much later, that he had been
    the "spymaster" of the city of Edessa and had been assigned there by the king of
    the Hellenes. His job had been not only to protect the city but also to watch over
    Antigonos' cousin, who the Hellenes feared would betray their king. About a year
    after first meeting him, Alys expressed to me, in an way that was very unlike him,
    his anger that his warnings of Antigonos' cousin building up an army had been
    ignored several years prior.

    Captain Damatrios told Alys that Duratios and myself would be under his command
    and left the mission to us. Over the next month, the three of us spent most of our
    time visiting local villages and collecting information. In all this time, Alys never
    opened up to us and always seemed very distant and mysterious.

    Just when we were beginning to assume that Mitrozaban "the Killer" had left the
    region, another merchant was caught with a weapon at the gates of the camp. This
    time, he killed himself before he could be captured.

    By this time, winter long over and the hot season was quickly approaching. Since
    the the Persians would not come over the mountains and fight us, General Antigonos
    decided to take the fight to them. The camp was torn down and we began our march
    over the mountains and into their homeland. Since Antigonos was more volunerable
    while we marched, the entire guard was tasked with protecting him, forcing Duratios
    and I to do a double duty. I spent many days inside or just outside of Antignos' tent
    as he planned his actions and meet with his generals.

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    I had planned this to be the intro to the next chapter, but I wrote too much and never managed to get to the bulk of the chapter. That gameplay content will be in the next chapter. If you don't feel like reading the story and are only interesting in how my campaign is progressing, don't read this chapter.


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    I found it very entertaining. Oddly, I like the seemingly "tedious" parts best.

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    Same here. This little story about the assassins might not be in the game but it makes the whole AAR much much more interesting. All AAR's have gameplay in them but only the best go beyond that. So congratulations on another very interesting update

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    Great update!
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    Great update
    i loved it!


    Italians do it better! Chi dice donna dice guai. Abbi donna di te minore, se vuoi essere signore. Donne e buoi dei paesi tuoi. Fiume, grondaia e donna parlatora mandano l'uomo di casa fuora.
    And my personal favorite: "Non rimuovere il confine antico fissato dai tuoi padri". In english: "Do not remove the anchent border placed by your fathers". It looses something in the translation......

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    Thank you.


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    Great update, The story is just as interesting as the gameplay, if not more so!

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    A Wasted Year

    It happened when the army was over the mountains and nearly
    down to the valley floor below. I was riding near General
    Antigonos, and we were near the center of the army's marching
    column. It was actually Duratios who first noticed them. He
    yelled something and pointed up at a ridge to the south, our right.
    There were several men up alone the edge. I was unsure of what
    they were doing at first, but one of the older guardsmen must have
    immediately recognized what they were doing. He was near
    Antigonos and quickly jumped from his own horse to knock
    General Antigonos from his. Just as he did it, several lead bullets
    came flying down, just over the top of the general's horse.

    Once again, I took to action without thinking. I turned the horse I
    riding and raced back toward an area where it looked as though I
    could get up the ridge, all while grabbing my new bow and stringing
    it. I caught my thoughts for a moment and looked back. I saw
    Captain Damatrios looking my way, but he gave no signal for me to
    return, so I rushed on ahead.

    The ridge to our south was mostly a shear cliff, but I backtracked a
    bit to the west and found an area I thought I could use to get up.
    The area I came to was a steep but dry stream bed that had cut a
    groove in the ridge that was quite deep. The horse stumbled on the
    loose rocks, but it had been trained to carry soldiers and equipment
    over rough terrain and soon found its footing.

    When I came to the top of the draw, I saw that the area atop the ridge
    was flat and had no large trees, though there were many rock and
    boulders scattered around. I looked to where I had seen the men with
    slings earlier. There I saw five men standing. Three had slings and
    were still trying to attack the men in the valley down below, one stood
    near a couple horses, and the fifth, armed with a shield and
    shortsword, was running towards me.

    I galloped the horse forward, drew my new sword, and lept from the
    horse and towards the man coming at me. I wish I could say I landing
    on top of him and heroically slew him without much effort. I cannot.
    The horse was not trained for battle and my leg was tangled in the
    baggage I had opened to get to my bow. The horse was scared and
    slowed just as I lept, and my leg tried to stay with the horse. The
    baggage and my leg were easily freed from the horse, but I missed the
    man I lept for. I landed on some rocks, just short of the Persian, but
    fortunately had managed to knock him from his feet as well.

    My horse ran off, and left me alone to face this Persian. Both me and
    the Persian rose to our feet and raises our swords at eachother. He
    stabbed his sword at me, which missed its mark. The dramatic lunge
    forward left him open and I stabbed at him, hitting him in the chest and
    ending his life right there.

    As he fell, I moved to rush forward and toward the other four men.
    Once again was tripped by the baggage still tied to my foot. I was
    fortunate of this event, for the men with slings had turned and released
    their shots at me. Because I had unexpectively fallen, them missed.

    I rolled sideways and hid myself behind a large boulder. It was a size
    about large enough to hide a lying horse. While behind this rock, I
    noticed my new bow, which I had already strung up, was still attached
    to the baggage at my feet. I untied the baggage from the bow and my
    foot and pulled out the arrows which were still in the case at my belt.
    I found three undamaged.

    I heard the remaining Persians slowly moving forward and could hear
    the sound of a sling being swung through the air. I drew my bow and
    stood quickly. It would take a while for a slinger to release his shot,
    but I could release my arrow as soon as I aimed. As I rose, I saw three
    of the men had drawn nearer. Two had drawns swords, but one still
    swung his sling above his head. I let my first arrow fly and it hit its mark.
    The Persian with the sling fell. I quickly strung a second arrow and hit
    the sword-bearing Persian closest to me. The last man with a sword
    turned and fled towards the Persian man near the horses. I aimed low
    and hit the fleeing man in the leg, for I knew Captain Damatrios and Alys
    would want a prisoner. I was now out of arrows.

    I turned to look at the final man who had been near the horses. He was
    now atop one of them and had scared the others away. He drew a sword
    and raced towards me. I reached for the sword at my belt, but realized I
    had left it behind the rock when I had picked up my bow. The man with
    the arrow in his leg was still standing, screaming in pain, between me
    and the man on the horse. As the horseman rode passed the man I had
    shot, he swung his sword, freeing the injured man's head from his body.
    Before the head had hit the ground, the Persian was riding passed me.
    I looked up into his eyes and he swung his sword once more. Rather
    than killing me, he simply hit me atop my head with the flat side of the
    blade and rode off.

    I was frozen. I thought I was dead, but I had been spared. My mind
    repeated that last moment over in my head many times. I continued to
    see the face of that Persian. He was an old man. He looked battle worn
    but still had the appearance of a noble about him. He wore a cloak over
    his head and shoulders, but I remember seeing an elaberate armor under
    his cloak. As it will turn out, this man was the very Mitrozaban "the killer"
    that we had been seeking for months.

    I do not know how long I stood there, but it must have only been a moment,
    for Mitrozaban was still in sight when I came to my senses. By then, a
    group of Antigonos' companions had ridden up to the site of the battle.
    They had come up an easier area and from the opposite direction as me in
    the east. They paused a moment, looked at me and the dead. They saw
    also Mitrozaban escaping. I pointed toward him without saying a word, and
    they rushed off after him.

    As I was gathering my weapons and baggage, the stupid horse I had been
    riding came back. It just stood there and watched me. Had it not run off, I
    may have been able to chase after Mitrozaban. I cursed the horse and
    retied my baggage and weapons to it before tying it to a small tree.

    By this time, both Duratios and Alys Iolkios had arrived and were
    inspecting the dead. Captain Damatrios had ordered them to figure out
    who the attackers were and interegate any survivors. The three of us
    inspected the dead but found nothing of importance. Alys told us that the
    fact each of the men carried the same exact amount of Median coins
    amoungst their Hellenic coins showed that they were most likely hired
    mercenaries and not Persian soldiers. There was nothing of great value
    that would help us predict the movement of or stop any assassins.

    When we returned to the army, everything had returned to normal and the
    army was once again moving forward. We reported everything to Captain
    Damatrios, while General Antigonos listened. Captain Damatrios
    complimented me for my actions, but General Antigonos remained silent.
    After Captain Damatrios and Antigonos spoke for a moment, all of us
    were back on our horses and rushing to retake our position near the
    center of the column. That night, the companion horsemen returned.
    They had found Mitrozaban's horse abandoned, but there was no sign of
    the expert assassin. Alys said that he had mostly likely had a fresh
    horse ready and had switched horses at some point.

    The army moved down from the hills and to a river valley. We moved up
    the valley, looting villages, attacking towns, and burning bridges, but the
    Persians refused to meet us in open battle. Slowly we moved upriver, but
    there was little resistance. If we had continued up the river, we would have
    come to one of the Persian capitals. Although we could not have taken it,
    for we still lacked the equipment to attack walls. After several weeks of
    this, we halted and moved uphill and away from the river. General
    Antigonos had the army set up a temporary camp so that they could
    gather together and rest.



    Finally, while resting at this camp, a Persian army attacked us. It was
    a very insignificant force, less than ten thousand.

    The Persians divided into two groups. Their armored cavalry, lead by
    their general, attacked from out of a forest, while the rest of their forces
    came up along an open ridge. Antigonos divided our army similarly, so
    that cavarly would fight cavalry and infantry would fight infantry.

    Antigonos waited with his cavalary on top of a hill for the Persian cavlary to
    come out from the forest. Once they were in the open, he ordered a charge.



    A division of lighter Persian cavalry charge into the infantry line around the
    same time, followed by the Persian infantry.



    Both Persian cavalry and Persian infantry fought for only a short time. Soon
    they were panicing and running from the battlefield. The infantry gave pursuit
    and the majority of the Persians were killed or captured.

    We waited for another month in that camp and saw no signs of Persian attack.
    In Antigonos' tent, his generals urged him to push forward and take the nearby
    Persian capital, but Antigonos knew he had no chance of taking the city and
    pushing that far into Persian territory was too dangerous. Antigonos ordered
    the army to go out on larger raiding missions, trying to devastate trade and
    draw the Persians into a fight, but still there was silence from our enemy.

    Alys Iolkios once again heard rumors that Mitrozaban was nearby. Alys,
    Duratios, and myself once again tried to gather information from the locals.
    Due to the raiding mission we were only met with hostility and we came no
    closer to finding him. We do not know if he made any attempts on General
    Antigonos at this camp site, but nothing came close enough to succeeding so
    that we would have noticed it.

    After more than two months in that location, Antigonos once again moved the
    army. This time we moved downriver. Along the way we destroyed as many
    bridges as we could and tried to block all trade. Near the base of the pass we
    had come over, we took control of the few remaining bridges and blocked all trade
    from the area called Media to the area called Elymais. Still the Persians refused
    to face us.



    While we waited at those bridges, Antigonos received word from his uncle.
    Antigonos' uncle [Laandros, youngest brother of Basileus Philippos V] had taken
    an army down the two desert rivers around the same time we had crossed over
    the mountains. He had taken control of all the regions along those rivers and
    had cornered one last Persian garrison inside a city near the sea. The Persians
    had sent forces to lift this siege and Antigonos uncle had fought a large battle.

    This army of the Hellenes had been armed in the old fashion. Duratios explained
    that this was in the style of carrying huge spears, much as the way the Aigyptoi
    had fought during the time of my grandfather. I have never seen this kind of army
    fight, so I can only imagine what it looked like. I wonder though, if the style was
    so effective, why the Hellenes had almost entirely abandoned it?

    I was guarding Antigonos when the messenger arrived and delivered the
    report of the battle. The report given to General Antigonos said the his
    uncle had lined up his troops and taken the first attack. Their lines held.



    Once the battle was underway, Antigonos' uncle lead the cavalry around
    the flanks and disorganized the enemy reserves. During this attack, the
    cavalry confronted the men under the command of a relative to the king of
    Persia. He and his men fell to the Hellenes.




    A second wave attacked from the city, but when the Hellenes in the line
    began to give, Antigonos' uncle sent in his reserves and pushed the enemy
    back.



    From that point onward, the line of spearmen slowly marched forward and
    pushed the Persians back across the battlefield. During the fight another
    relative to the king of Persia fell dead and his army was destroyed.



    Antigonos was quite happy to hear this news. The city had surrendered
    and his uncle had managed to gain access to the sea. Now, both river
    valleys, from source to sea were back in the hands of the Hellenes. Once
    again the soldiers of the army began to wonder if the war was drawing to
    a close.

    These assumptions only grew when rumors began to spread that Antigonos
    was getting depressed. It was true. He had expected to cross the
    mountains, approach the Persians' regional capital, fight a large battle, and
    end the war on his terms. This had not happened and we had wasted a
    year wander up and down this valley. Antigonos was tired and fustrated.
    As the cold season once again seemed to settle into Persia, Antigonos
    ordered the army to burn the last bridges and raise the camp.

    Once again, we crossed over the mountain pass. This time, however, we did
    not set up camp on either side. Once over the mountains, Antigonos ordered
    the army to continue marching until we came to the river Tigris and the city of
    Seleukeia. Antigonos orderd the army to set up camp just outside the walls
    and gave permission to all men to do as they please during the winter months.
    Antigonos spent his time with his family at the great palace in the center of
    the town.



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    fantastic keep up the good work xd
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    great work, btw, when are you going to reopen your old thread.

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    I just found this and read it through. I really like how you are doing this from the point of view of a single soldier. I was thinking about doing something like that from the point of view of a Roman legionary. I hope you wouldn't mind if I used your idea? Anyway, excellent story!
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    Thanks.

    I've been busy with Spring Break, but classes have started again. I started the next chapter about a week ago then didn't get back to it. I'll probably start working on the next chapter tonight, if I feel like it.

    There's probably about three to five chapters left in this story (though I could extend it), then I'll get back to my old thread an old AAR overview style.

    The style isn't my invention. It would be cool if you did an AAR with a similar style. I get alot of my inspiration for this AAR sidestory from the AARs of "Count Arach", who did a series of Romani AARs from the point of view of a common soldier (through letters to his family) about a year or two ago. (For those of you who like AARs, if you can find them in the backlog, they are a nice read.)


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    Beginning Again, Fresh

    My days during the cold season of that year were spent within the
    walls of the city of Seleukeia. This city was named for a long
    dead Hellene whose family had been friends then enemies to the
    current kingdom of the Hellenes. It was a large city, similar to
    Alexandreia in Aigyptos or Demetreia in Syria. It was not as
    clean or orderly as Demetreia and there were still many signs of
    the Persian occupation within the city.

    Antigonos was forced to spent his much of his time dealing with
    the complex issues of management and government. I stood
    guard over many meetings but I rarely knew what his advisors
    were talking about. There were many mentions of Antigonos'
    father, the king of the Hellenes, and his building projects back in
    the Hellenes' homeland. Antigonos did not enjoy these matters
    of management. He left most of the minor tasks to his advisors
    or his sister's husband.

    Many members of Antigonos' family were in the city or came to
    visit him there. When we arrived, his sister and her husband, the
    man who had taken the city from the Persians, were in the city.
    They had taken to the task managing the newly conquered city.
    After only a few days in the city, General Antigonos was joined by
    his wife and young son, whom he had written to telling of his
    intent of wintering the army at Seleukeia. When the war had
    started, his son had just been born. By this time he was already
    two years of age and had spent little time with his father.

    Antigonos spent as much of his time he could with this wife and
    son. He preferred privacy when with his family and often order all
    of the royal guards out of his private quarters. When I did see him
    with his family, he was like a completely different man from the
    one I had known. While campaigning, he was a strong leader who
    seemed almost unbreakable. He rarely spoke with the men of the
    army or even his guard. He had no friends and spoke only of
    business. He seemed to be at all times a soldier and a leader,
    who would do whatever was necessary to win no matter the cost.

    When he was with his family, he acted entirely different. He was
    still the vain nobleman, but he seemed much softer and weaker.
    He was like any other man that loved his family and wanted to
    spend his time with them. He played with this child, spoke at
    length with his wife, and spent his time relaxing and avoiding the
    problems that were often just outside his door.

    I was reminded of my father, back when I was a child and my
    mother still lived. Antigonos had the same look in his eyes I had
    seen in my father's when he and my mother had watched me play
    along the banks of the great river back at my village. With all the
    marching, suffering, death, and war I had seen over the
    preceeding years, it was nice to be reminded of the peaceful
    times in this world.

    When I saw General Antigonos' weaker side when with his family,
    I did not loose respect for him. I felt that this man was even more
    worth defending.

    When I was not working for Captain Damatrios and the royal guards,
    or doing my fair share of relaxing, I spent my time with Alys and
    Duratios looking for signs of spies and assassins in the city. Alys
    had heard from his contacts within the city that Mitrozaban himself
    had entered the city and was making another plan against Antigonos'
    life.

    The city had its own network of spies that had been set up when the
    city fell to the Hellenes, but Alys prefered not to rely on them. We
    worked independant of them and did all our own work. Alys insisted
    on avoiding contact with the spy network or sharing information. I
    wondered if this was due to some kind of rivalry Alys had with
    Seleukeia's spymaster? It did not matter. We were always several
    steps ahead of the spy network, though alway one or two behind
    Mitrozaban.

    Everyday we searched the city, from the palace to the slums, from
    the desert to the river. For the first month, we found very little, only
    whispers and rumors. From what we heard, Mitrozaban and his
    agents were within the city but we knew not where.

    Mitrozaban had taken to hiding somewhere within the Persian quarter
    of the city, where he was hidden by the locals. With this information,
    Captain Damatrios advised sending in troops and harshly punishing
    those who helped any Persian spies or assassins. Antigonos was did
    not wish to be disturbed during this time. His sister's husband was
    convinced that such an act would only cause greater troubles for the
    Hellenes from the Persian settlers and locals peoples.

    It was the deep of winter but we saw no snow here. Around this
    time, Duratios got a lead of an assassin plot against Antigonos.
    With much effort and initiative, Duratios had found a location where
    a Persian agent was said to be hiding within the city. Once again
    we took this information to Antigonos' brother-in-law. We requested
    additional guards to take the man by force but instead the
    information was passed on to the city's spymaster. He sent one of
    his own men into the Persian quarter and quietly had the man killed
    without even questioning him.

    The body was brought to us. Though angry over not being able to
    deal with the situation ourselves, we inspected the body. He was a
    young man, and I did not recognize him. Alys was able to identify
    him as an agent of the Persian army, though he was not Mitrozaban.
    This was a younger, inexperienced assassin who may not have
    even been connected to the man we sought. Still, a man who
    wished harm on our leader was dead, and that is a victory. However,
    the local city spies got all of the credit for the kill.

    There were continued rumors of Mitrozaban and his agents, but they
    made no visable move. Once a servant of the palace was found to
    be plotting to poison the food, but failed. Other than the "normal"
    security problem a "prince" has, there were no major attempts on
    Antigonos' life made that winter. Rumors were building that
    Mitrozaban had a plan and would strike some time in the spring
    or summer.

    As that spring came, Antigonos made a short trip north. He visited
    his rebellious cousin [Euktimenos Idomeneus] in the city of Arbela.
    There, he recognized the coming of age of his cousin's son.
    Rumors were that this cousin's son was more like his grandfather
    [Pefkolaos Idomeneus, the man who had started the Makedonian
    Civil War] than his father. They said he sought power and had
    claimed that he was the rightful king. I do not know any of the men
    in that family, so I cannot judge. Duratios was convinced there
    would be another war amoungst the Hellenes if this young man
    came to power. Although Duratios jumps at any shadow and sees
    trouble where there is none. Perhaps this fear... or should it be
    called insight? Perhaps this insight of his was why he was
    assigned to work with Alys and I hunting assassins.



    While we were in Arbela, we encountered no problems with
    Persian agents. Antigonos' cousin had his own spies and royal
    guards protecting him and the city was quite secure. I found it
    odd that the general's cousin had more royal guards around him
    then he had.

    We recieved word, in Arbela, that the Persians were starting the
    campaign season early. After defending for two years, the
    Persians finally made a effort to attack. An army lead personally,
    by the Persian king, Koyroun, attacked the Hellenic garrison,
    commanded by Antigonos' uncle, down by the coast where the
    two rivers met the sea.



    So far, this war had been fought by the sons of the Persian king
    and the son of the Hellenic king. The old king of Persia [in the west]
    now was personally leading his men into battle against us. From
    what I overheard from Antigonos' advisors, the Persian king was not
    a great fighter and was best left to administration. They said this
    was a symbolic act and if placed in a test of wits, he would make
    mistakes. Soon we would see if this was true.



    Since spring had arrived, the army was already preparing for
    campaign. Antigonos sent word to Seleukeia to prepar the army.
    By the time we had returned to the city, his generals had prepared
    the army to march.

    Because of the losses the army had taken in the first two years,
    this spring saw fresh replacements in the ranks. Some of the new
    soldiers were loyalist troops from the fallen Kingdom of Babylon
    and some mercenary archers from Persia. I was unsure if foreign
    troops would fight well alongside the Hellenes, but my old unit was
    still in the army and we had been quite successful.

    I do not know what happened to the plans of Mitrozaban within the
    city of Seleukeia. Antigonos only spent a couple days in the city
    before marching out with the army. Had there been any plans, there
    was now know target for them.

    The army marched eastward along the far bank of the river Tigris then
    crossed over to the old royal roadway. News came to us that a
    Persian army was on the royal road to our east. Antigonos ordered
    the army to slow its march and to wait and see what the Persians
    would do.



    With us delayed, the garrison to the south would have to hold out on
    their own. Only one other army was in the area and it was an army of
    veterans from Aigyptos and new recruits from Arabia. As the dry
    season approached, this army would have to fight a battle with
    Persians trying to reinforce their king.

    News arrived of their battle while we were still marching eastward.
    The Persian army nearer to us had retreated back into their own
    lands and we pushed forward slowly. But our delay meant that the
    Aigyptoi and Arabians would have to fight without us. The report said
    that they had choosen to attack the Persian reinforcements as they
    tried to cross a river ford.



    They held their ground and used the river to prevent the Persians
    from flanking them or overwhelming them with greater numbers. As
    the Persians crossed, they were there to meet them on the banks.



    The result of the battle was a complete success. The Aigyptoi and
    Arabians held back the Persians. Those Persians who survived the
    battle either drown in the river or surrendered.

    With his reinforcements wiped out, the Persian king broke his siege
    down by the sea and retreated back into Persia. Antigonos
    considered giving chase to the Persian king and his army, but the
    Persians retreated into the mountains. Antigonos did not wish to
    wander the mountains for a second year and instead chose to head
    northwards.



    We headed north. Before we crossed into enemy territory,
    Antigonos received another messenger. This time he was from the
    far south. A kingdom in Arabia had fought a battle against another
    one. The friendly kingdom had won but lost most of its army. The
    messenger requested aid from Antigonos. The Arabians wanted
    troops to defend their city. Antigonos gave them only money to raise
    a new army of their own. The messenger was unhappy but took the
    money and returned to his home. I recall Antigonos' advisors telling
    him that the friendly kingdom was doomed to fall, but Antigonos
    chose not to divert troops from the war against the Persians.



    By the time the hottest part of the year was over, we were at the
    walls of a Persian city. We still did not have the equipment to take
    a city, but Antigonos was convinced he could get the Persians to
    come out and fight him. Our army surrounded the city and we
    began the siege. All around us there were Persian armies, but
    Antigonos was confident of a victory. His vigor and strength had
    truely returned. The army saw his confidence and morale grew. We
    would be marching toward victory once again.


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