Quote Originally Posted by Fragony View Post
If you are going for the 'god' narrative (being the observer)I would go for " As the silver-haired man addressed the audience, their gazes focused on him" Think John Hurt telling the story with that awesome deep voice.
actually, only the fist chapter is 3rd person. the rest is being narrated solely by Alexandre. the first chapter is narrated is narrated by a cameraman, just saying what was happening.