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    Table of Contents
    Foreward
    Chapter 1: From the Ashes, Part 1 - The Raid
    Chapter 1: From the Ashes, Part 2 - The Turduli
    Chapter 1: From the Ashes, Part 3 - A Meeting of Minds
    Chapter 1: From the Ashes, Part 4 - An Unexpected Visit





    Foreward

    Greetings and salutations. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Owen Glyndwr, although you may call me Owen if you find the Welsh language a difficult one to wrap your tongue around. This is not my first AAR, and I certainly hope it will not be my last. My first one: The Aeduic War was a sort of test for myself to see if I had the resolve, and ability to do long narrative-like fictional stories. The AAR itself was a sort of cross section of my then ongoing campaign. It followed the story of The Kingdom of Casseia as she fought the Aeduic Kingdom for control of the Belgian territories, while still trying to re-assert her sense of identity in a Kingdom which had suddenly found itself encompassing many different peoples. I enjoyed writing it very much, and, although it was not exactly the most popular story on the fora, the people who did frequent it seemed to like it enough, and as long as I was happy, that was all that really mattered. Unfortunately tragedy struck a week or two ago when I had to relocate my hard drive to another computer, resulting in the hard drive being wiped, causing me to lose all my EB data.

    Not in the least deterred, I decided that, while I did not want to re-do all my previous work, and play the Casse again, I did want to write another AAR, and after thinking about all of the factions, and looking at the distribution of AARs currently in circulation, I soon hit upon the idea to do a Lusitani AAR, and thus here we are.

    Now on to the disclaimer, similar to the one from my previous AAR. I am not a military genius, and I most likely do not play the game at an efficiency met by other players. However, this game is not about skill, it is about the story. That said, I am playing difficulty M/M. In regards to criticism on a creative or writing level, I am open to this, as this is now only my third attempt at doing any sort of fictional writing, however I do ask that you make your criticism constructive. Note that any praise is equally greatly appreciated (perhaps more so).

    Finally, while, as it says under my name, I do call myself a history buff, that does not mean that I am an expert on Pre-Latin Iberian history. While I will try my best to do research on the Lusitanii, and try as hard as I can to make the story as historically accurate (in regards to lifestyle, gov't, etc) as possible, ambiguities are going to exist, and I ask that you not nitpick them. I also will warn you now that I may take some artistic license in these regards as well, similar to how I did in my Casse AAR.

    That said, on to the story, and I hope you all enjoy:
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    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
    -Niccolo Machiavelli


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    Chapter 1: From the Ashes, Part 1 - The Raid

    Thurro and his men were huddled down on the stream bank beside the small village of Oxtraca. It was early morning and the crisp air felt invigorating to him. He took a deep breath to take it in further, and then crept up the bank to observe the town again.

    It wasn't much to look at; a collection of houses huddled together a couple hundred feet west from the stream that Thurro's party was now residing in, nothing that he hadn't seen before, however this city was more important than most. Its close proximity to two of the largest rivers in the area made it a local power in terms of trade, and trade meant money: this was what Thurro was banking on.

    Thurro had moved out with his raiding party from their homeland far to the east at the beginning of spring. Although they had managed to successfully raid a great many villages, most were very poor, and the earnings of the party were in actuality quite meager. Morale plummeted, some even talked of mutiny, they wanted to kill him and go home!

    No, Thurro could not let that happen. That was why he decided to do something never before done; he picked up and moved. He led his men west, over the hills, and down into the rich, flat lands of the west. It was not easy; his men were skeptical at first, but once they heard his promises of riches beyond their fanciest imaginations, they played along. Now all he had to do was deliver on his promises, and if he couldn't, the results would be...unthinkable.

    Thurro glanced over his shoulder, he could just make out the streaks of yellow coming out from behind the hills. Dawn was breaking, and the village began to stir, as villagers exited their houses to prepare themselves for the day’s work. He turned to his men, and nodded to his second, Ambon, to ready the men for the attack. The Sun was at their backs, the advantage theirs, this raid, it seemed to Thurro, would be almost too easy...

    ***

    Tantalos rolled over on his bed. He eased his eyes open, taking time to adjust to the now breaking dawn. His eyes fell on her and he smiled as he remembered the previous evening. That night, in view of the entire town he was wedded the beautiful Coedi.

    Tantalos's father said the match was politically favorable to both families; as the two most prominent families in Oxtraca, it was a foregone conclusion that they would be paired. However none of this truly concerned Tantalos. The advantages of the match mattered little to him, so long as he could be with her for the rest of his life. Her beautiful long brown hair, her pale white skin, and her eyes; those deep brown eyes which once peered into showed a world of emotions, and yet, none at all. Tantalos knew from the moment he saw her that he wanted to be with her for the rest of his life, and at long last he was given that chance.

    Tantalos's father told the boy of the match a few weeks ago, and Tantalos couldn't have been more thrilled. He waited with eager anticipation, counting each day up until the actual marriage. Then finally the day had come. On that day Coedi was the most stunning image of a woman he had ever seen. She wore an exquisite dress, made of a fine material, imported from the faraway lands of the East. She wore exquisite silver earrings, and a silver torque around her wrist: her father truly spared no expense for this marriage. It was the greatest day of Tantalos's young life, culminating in their union on the altar of Trebaruna.

    The day was followed by a great party, involving the entire town. A great feast was thrown, as animal after animal was brought out for the people's sampling. Wine flowed freely, taken straight from the local fields. Local bards and musicians played and sung until their voices were hoarse, and their fingers bleeding. It was a glorious event, and doubtless one that would be remembered for years to come.

    Tantalos reached out to wake his new wife, but decided against it. "Let her sleep just a while longer," he thought. He got up from his bed and walked over to a bowl of water a few feet away. He splashed his handsome face a few times, wiping the long dark hair out of his eyes, and then got dressed, ready to take on his first day as a married man.

    Tantalos´s reverie was suddenly broken by what sounded like a loud yell. Tantalos strained his ears, trying desperately to hear for anything else. He heard what sounded like the crashing of shields, and the screams of dying men. He needed no more warning than that. He quickly grabbed some javelins and his shield, attaching his iron sword to the belt at his waist, and rushed off towards the sounds he heard.

    Tantalos rushed through the convoluted streets of the town, trying his best to follow the noise. He stopped dead in his tracks as before him he saw two armored soldiers trying to bust in the door to a house. Thinking quickly, Tantalos produced one of his javelins, and, holding it aloft, flung it at the man nearest him. The javelin flew true, and struck the man in the side of his body, knocking him to the ground. The other man was then alerted to Tantalos's presence, and turned towards his aggressor. However, Tantalos was not about to give up his advantage, and soon drew his sword and began charging at the other man. The man made to thrust at Tantalos's chest, but Tantalos deflected the spear with his shield, and then plunged his sword into the weakly defended armpit of his opponent, killing him instantly. Tantalos then walked over to the other man, squirming on the ground with a javelin in his chest. Tantalos finished him off with his sword, before taking his javelin back. Those two enemies defeated, Tantalos took a moment to regain his bearings before once again heading off in the direction of the clashing forces.

    After jogging for another few minutes, Tantalos stopped himself as he was greeted by two men he recognized. It was his childhood friends Baitesir and Durato! They were armed likewise to Tantalos. He hailed them and quickly ran over. The two acknowledged his approach, and then ran to meet him. "Friends!" Tantalos said, "How good it is to see you! But, what is going on, do either of you know what has happened?"

    "Aye," replied Baitesir, "It's a raid." A band of soldiers came up from the East, attacked us about 15 or 20 minutes ago. Your father's on the edge of town with a handful of soldiers holding off the main attack, however some of the bandits managed to get around, and are in the city now. Your father sent us back here to root out and kill those men."

    "Excellent," replied Tantalos, "I believe I just killed two of those men, I shall join up with you, and together we can root them out." Baitesir and Durato nodded in agreement and the three marched off together. The three men carefully combed each street, looking for any sign of the enemy. They found and killed, by their estimates, about twenty or twenty five men, each one in small groups of no more than three or four. Some men they killed were found with jewelry and other valuables in their hands, but those men were dispatched, and the looted goods were quickly returned. Once the three were satisfied that all the stragglers were dealt with, they decided to meet up with Tantalos's father to see if they could be of assistance.

    When they finally arrived at the scene, the battle had largely ended. It was a horrifying scene, as bodies were strewn all throughout the area. The area was filled with the screams of dying and wounded men, and the stench of battle. Tantalos thought that this scene would be enough to horrify even the bravest of men. The three were then approached by Orisos, a close friend of Tantalos's father.

    "Tantalos, is that you? Thank the gods I have found you, I had just sent out runners to look for you. We won the battle, the cowards took off as soon as their leader was killed. However your father was wounded during the fighting, and it's not looking to good. Your father wanted to see you before he left."

    Tantalos was horrified. He had always thought his father invincible, he, who had fought in many battles, and carried on many successful raids. For him to die was...impossible. And yet it had happened. Tantalos wiped a tear from his cheek and then followed Orisos to a nearby house on the edge of town. He could already see a throng of people huddled around the door, hoping for good news about their beloved chieftain. Orisos pushed his way through the crowd and then opened the door, allowing himself and Tantalos in.

    Without being in the room for more than a few moments, Tantalos could already tell it was bad. He saw his father lying on a bed, his long brown hair flecked with spots of gray was splayed out helter-skelter beneath him. He was silent, although Tantalos could tell by the expression in his eyes, and the grimace on his lips that his father was in extreme pain. The man's armor had been removed, and was lying neatly stacked beside the bed, and based on the red-dyed tunic lying beside the armor, Tantalos guessed that the wound must have been in the chest. Tantalos's suspicion was confirmed when he saw a bloody cloth, surrounded by dried blood place on his father's abdomen.

    Tantalos's father at last saw his son come in, and beckoned him over. Tantalos approached, and took his father’s hand, dyed red from the blood. "Father," was all Tantalos could manage, as tears began to stream down his face. Tantalos's father ordered the rest of the men in the room out, which they did in short order.

    Tantalos's father tried to smile, but even smiling, Tantalos could stills see the pain in his father's face. "My son," he said, "do not be saddened, for if I die, I shall at least have died bravely, defending my people. Now, dry your eyes for what I am about to tell you is extremely important." Tantalos wiped his eyes, and his father continued. "I am going to die, I can already feel death closing in upon me. Now, when I do die, there will be a conflict for power within the tribe. Many will try to claim my position, but it is important that you are the one who earns it. However, a lot of the bloodshed can be avoided if I name you as my heir. Due the power of our family, and the power of Coedi's family, a lot of the people who might have vied for the throne before, will be dissuaded. I will convince my guard to protect you, and help you in any way possible, however you must be strong. When you go out to that crowd out there, you must act as a leader. Be bold, and confident. Assuage the people's fears, and shall soon be chieftain. Now call my guards back in so that I may tell them the same"

    Tantalos did as he was told, and let the guards back in, before going outside with the rest of the people. Tantalos's father talked with them for a long while, and soon Orisos walked up to Tantalos once more. "It's time, your father is now about to die, come with me." Tantalos once again did as he was told, a priest following behind him. Tantalos came once again to his father's bed, where his father formally named Tantalos as his successor. The priest blessed his father, and then he was gone. Tantalos watched as the life fled from his father's eyes, but he did not cry. He told the guards to follow him outside, and they followed orders without question.

    Tantalos exited the house and raised his hands to silence the crowd. Trying his best to sound powerful and commanding, Tantalos addressed the crowd: "People of Oxtraca, I deeply regret having to tell you this, but my father, our chieftain has passed on. Before he died he named me as his successor, and commanded me to lead you all on in lieu of his passing. I know some of you may feel nervous due to my young age, but know this: I can and will lead you on as well as my father did before me. And, once I am chief, I will ensure that nothing like what just happened today will ever happen again. No longer will we live in fear of the raids of outsiders, for we will form a power so great, that none would dare attack us. Once I am chief, I shall go to the surrounding tribes, the Vettones, the Turduli, the Elbocori, and the Tapori. I will speak to them all, and ask them to join us. If they will not, then we shall make the join us. Soon we will be a force to be reckoned with! Are you with me?"

    The crowd cheered in support, as Tantalos suddenly noticed his wife among the onlookers. He stepped into the crowd, trying to make his way towards her. It was a difficult task to do; suddenly everyone wanted to touch Tantalos, to thank him, to even talk to him. However he eventually made it, and the two walked, now escorted by guards, back to their house.
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    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
    -Niccolo Machiavelli


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    Will be following this one Iberes have always been an interesting faction to me. Barbaroi still, but interesting nonetheless.

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    I will defidently be following this. Sounds intresting. *Lurking*





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    Your initial post sounds promising. However, I am a touch disappointed for reading the title "The Kings of Land's End" made be get the impression it might have been a Cornish AAR, but then I saw which faction you were playing and my hopes were dashed.

    Nevertheless, I'll follow this one.

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    Its about time you decided to post your intro. Looking forward to it. I will be following this.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scud View Post
    Your initial post sounds promising. However, I am a touch disappointed for reading the title "The Kings of Land's End" made be get the impression it might have been a Cornish AAR, but then I saw which faction you were playing and my hopes were dashed.

    Nevertheless, I'll follow this one.

    Yes, I had anticipated this, as the term "land's end" is typically associated with England. As you may or may not have guessed, I had a bit of trouble coming up with a title, but that is the one I settled on. Besides, Spain would technically have been the edge of the world at that time, and land's end sounds slightly more poetic than the edge of the world (had a better ring to it).
    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
    -Niccolo Machiavelli


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    Excellent update Owen. I like how descriptive you are of everything, it makes a pictureless story colorful and full of life. I actually really liked how you made it seem impossible that Tantalos could ever convince the king to submit, and yet at the end it all fit into place. That kept me on the edge of my seat. Nice job. Keep this up.

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    Finally i get to see this again after my long computer failure. Congradulations! This new forum is wierd though.
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    By the looks of it, the Org just experienced a minor hiccup, and will be back to its delightful, not blue self in no time(?)(I hope)


    As for an update, the whole next part is pretty much completely planned out, I just need to put the words on paper, er, word document. Should be up by today or tomorrow. (And I actually mean that)
    "You must know, then, that there are two methods of fight, the one by law, the other by force: the first method is that of men, the second of beasts; but as the first method is often insufficient, one must have recourse to the second. It is therefore necessary for a prince to know well how to use both the beast and the man.
    -Niccolo Machiavelli


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    As a big fan of the Iberians I hope to see great progress with this :) Awesome update and man I have some good memories of the early years of Iberian life in EB

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    Chapter 1: From the Ashes, Part 4 - An Unexpected Visit

    The morning breeze lightly caressed Tantalos’s face as he looked down upon the gentle plains along the north bank of the Anas River. He could see plainly that the representatives from the Qart-Hadast had already arrived; they set up modest white tents, arranged in a semi-circle facing out towards Tantalos. Before the tent Tantalos could see the glimmering red of a small fire. Around the fire he could see a group of people; they were talking to one another. Tantalos looked upon all this with a shudder. Somewhere down there was his man, the liaison to the now Kingdom of Lusitania. The liaison was appointed by the Qart-Hadast to secure the lucrative trade deals and alliances which they once held with the Turduli, but were nullified when the King of the Turduli ceded his power to the Lusitani.

    Tantalos took one deep breath, and led his horse down the hill and towards the riverbank below. He was flanked on his left by Luxinios, the one-time king of the Turduli. Luxinios was accompanying Tantalos firstly because he could actually speak the confusing language of the foreigners, and Tantalos actually trusted the man’s translations. Secondly, Tantalos brought Luxinios along because being the king of the Turduli; Luxinios had had extensive experience with the Qart-Hadast, and knew how to deal with outsiders, and was used to their strange customs.

    On his right was Baitesir, his most trusted advisor. At 35 years of age, he looked no different than when he was twenty, thin and handsome, with long, dark hair, and dark eyes. However his youthful looks were matched with an exceedingly capable mind, and Tantalos often looked to his close friend for advice, and that level headed insight was what Tantalos was hoping for today.

    The party reached the base of the hill, and finally attracted the attention of the Qart-Hadast group. From the mass of guards, diplomats, translators, and their respective retinues came but three men. The first was a man in his mid thirties. Not fat, but corpulent to say the least, with balding black hair and a clean shaven face. Adorned on his slightly stubby fingers was an assortment of rings, mostly of silver, but some of gold too. He wore a linen tunic ending at the knees, and leather sandals. To his right and left were taller, meaner looking men, with iron swords hanging conspicuously at their hips.

    Tantalos dismounted from his horse, and Luxinios and Baitesir did likewise. The two parties came together in between the in between both camps. The corpulent man in the center of the Qart-Hadast trio stepped forward and bowed before Tantalos, his two guards quickly followed suit.

    Tantalos stood and stared blankly at the three men, before Luxinios kindly crept up behind the King and whispered, “It is customary for men in these parts to bow to one another when they greet.” Tantalos nodded and started to bow, followed quickly by Luxinios and Baitesir.

    Then the man took another step forward and began speaking. Tantalos once again stared blankly as the foreign words breezed effortlessly past his ears. Finally the man stopped speaking. Tantalos turned towards Luxinios, who began to translate what the man said: “He said, ‘greetings oh King, my name is Shafat. It is a pleasure to be able to talk with you this day so that the trade agreements we once held with the Turduli may be resumed. I’m sure you are as eager as I to re-establish those agreements, for they were quite profitable to both the Turduli and us. But that is for later. For now, I can see that you and your people are wearied from the day’s journey. Please, set up camp, and when that is done, come join us by the fire where we can take a mid-day meal together. Then later in the day we shall begin the negotiations.’” Luxinios fell quiet. Tantalos looked to towards Shafat, who looked to be serenely awaiting a response from the King. Tantalos turned towards Luxinios, “Tell him that we are delighted by your proposal, and will indeed eat with you as soon as we can get our camp set up.” Luxinios nodded, and soon began speaking to Shafat in his own tongue. Meanwhile, Tantalos turned to his men, and ordered them to begin unpacking and setting up camp.

    The coolness of the morning had burned off entirely in the mid-day sun by the time the work was finished. Sweat shimmered in the sun as the Lusitani men hurried to raise the tents, and secure everything down. The smell of cooking meat wafting through the air only incited the men to work harder, and the work was soon finished in good order. Some of the men outright sprinted over to the fire to get their share of the food. Soon the serene silence of the scene was replaced by the boisterous uproar of contented men as the food was served and the wine began to flow freely.

    Soon the men stopped eating, and began socializing with one another. It was at this moment that Luxinios took Tantalos aside and began to speak: “Alright, we’re doing fine so far. Soon, we shall meet and confer with these people, and Shafat will produce several items which you will need to sign. Whatever he is proposing now is beneficial for the two of us, but know this: do not grow accustomed to these people, for they care naught for you. Their only concern is profit, and if your kingdom becomes unprofitable to them, they will leave you with nothing. At the moment, you are in no position to defy any of their proposals, however, be prepared for anything.”

    Tantalos thanked Luxinios for his advice. In short order the men began to finish their meals, and Tantalos, aided by officers on both sides, soon managed to corral the retinues from both sides into the center of camp, where they were facing each other, with a wide gap separating them.

    Then Shafat came forward into the empty space, flanked by the two guards from before. Tantalos met Shafat and also came out to meet Shafat, flanked by Luxinios and Baitesir. Shafat began speaking to the assembly, and as he spoke, Luxinios translated what he was saying for the benefit of the Lusitani: “Friends! Welcome all! Come, gather ‘round and listen to what I have to say, for on these plains this day I feel the beginnings of great things will be set in place. We are here today to renegotiate a trade deal which we the Qart-Hadast once maintained with the Turduli. I know many of you once benefited greatly from that trade, and many more are eager to re-establish it. Well, I can assure you that we would like just as much as you to continue to profit from that trade. So then, let us get down to business, shall we?”

    Shafat turned to a man on his left, and spoke to him in a low voice. The man nodded and then walked away towards the Qart-Hadast tents. Several moments later he returned with several pieces of parchment in his hands each filled completely with Carthaginian writing. The man handed a couple of the pieces to Shafat, who turned once again towards the Lusitani and began to speak, Luxinios translating again.

    “These articles I hold here in my hand confirm and mete out our trade agreements. In this we agree to allow any trade ships, marked to be coming from a Lusitani port to be forthwith allowed into any given Qart-Hadast port. In exchange, it also states that any registered Qart-Hadast trade ships are to be allowed free access to Lusitani ports, and to have the right to sell their wares.” Shafat fell silent, and was met with applause from both sides of the camp. Shafat’s retainer then handed him a stylus. Shafat took the tool and then turned to speak once again. “I will sign this agreement on behalf of the people of Qart-Hadast. By making my mark on this formal agreement, I agree to the terms written herein, and therefore opening free trade between our peoples.” Then Shafat turned to the agreement, now placed on a table, and signed the parchment. Shafat rose and handed the stylus to Tantalos who also made his mark on the parchment, exactly as Luxinios had shown him before. The signing of the agreement was met with applause by both camps.

    Tantalos was ready to dismiss his men and return to his camp, but suddenly Shafat once again turned to his retainer, and took in hand the rest of the parchment. He turned back and began to speak. “In addition to the agreement in free trade between our two peoples, the rulers of our great Empire see the potential in your kingdom, and have made it apparent to seek a stronger bond between you, the Kingdom of the Lusitani, and we, the Qart-Hadast. In my hand I hold an agreement of alliance between the two nations. In this agreement, both nations are to allow free passage of the other’s military forces on their land. Also in this agreement is a promise to come to the aid of the other nation in the event of war with any nation. As before, Shafat took the stylus, and with the setting sun before him, he made his mark on the agreement. Then Tantalos did likewise. Then Shafat turned to the assembly and said, “Thank you, and may this agreement be the first step in an everlasting friendship between our two peoples.”

    Tantalos rose from the table as the sun began to fall behind the hills to the north. Suddenly, out of the corner of his eye, Tantalos noticed one of his retainers look towards those hills to the north. Then another did likewise, followed by another. Soon some began to tap others on their shoulders, and began pointing towards those hills to the north. It began to distract his men to such an extent, that Tantalos finally glanced up to see what they were looking at.

    In the field of vibrant oranges, purples, and blues of the setting sun, Tantalos could see the silhouettes of a great body of people. Some he could see were on horses and others on foot. Tantalos stared at them for another couple minutes before he said, quite calmly, “Men, go to your tents, gather your weapons and armor, and prepare for a battle.” It took the men a few moments to gather what their King had said, but in soon after they all, nearly in unison got up from their seats and began scrambling to their tents. Tantalos watched the mass begin to make its way down the hills and towards the camp, and he hoped his men could be assembled in time. In short order, men began moving out from their tents, and began to assemble in a semblance of a formation.

    Soon the entire body was out on the exterior of the camp, arranged in a long, stable line, swords drawn, and spears pointed towards the mass, which was now only a hundred meters from the camp. Tantalos’s men began chanting to steady their nerves, as the mass of men began to inch their way towards the men. Now out of the sun, Tantalos could distinctly see the banner of the enemy forces: “The Green Boar, so it is the Paesuri who are attacking us,” Tantalos thought to himself, “But why would they come all the way out here to attack us?”

    Now the two forces were standing face to face, and from the Paesuran force emerged one man. He walked towards the Lusitani, and held his hand up, to signal that they came in peace. Tantalos noticed this, and ordered his men to stand down. A sigh of relief exuded from all three forces as the Paesuri came forward to meet the Qart-Hadast and Lusitani. The man who stepped forward from the crowd was Indortes, the King of the Paesuri.

    Tantalos had had several meetings in the past with this man. He was proud and arrogant; however this was met by the strength and force of will to match. Meetings between the two kings had never went well, for Indortes only met with Tantalos when he had a demand to make, and this put Tantalos ill at ease.

    Tantalos approached the Paesuran king as he was busily ordering his men to set up their camp. He noticed Tantalos’s approach, and greeted the King boisterously. “Tantalos my friend!” he exclaimed, “What a coincidence meeting you here!”

    “What do you want,” Tantalos replied, flatly.

    “What, can’t two great friends such as us meet up in neutral territory without having some secret agenda?” He replied, incredulously. “Besides, a little bird told me that you were meeting with a dignitary from Qarthadastim. I just wanted to make sure you weren’t treated unfairly by those greedy outsiders!”

    Tantalos glared at the King, and then replied calmly, “Your spies serve you well, oh King. It is true that I traveled here to meet with leaders from Qart-Hadast, in fact I just did, and I would ask that you keep your business to yourself and mine to me, thank you.” Indortes glared at the Lusitani king, but said nothing. Tantalos grinned and strode away from the clearly insulted Paisuran.

    Tantalos began striding over to the fire that everyone seemed to be hanging around now. The Qart-Hadast men took a great stag freshly killed and placed it upon the fire. Soon the area began to fill with the smells of roasting meat, and Tantalos suddenly noticed just how hungry he was. Finally the meat was cooked completely and the men, Paesurans, Qart-Hadast, and Lusitani alike started shoving and jockeying for position, each hoping to get the best cut of meat possible. Once each man got his fair share they all retreated into little groups which were scattered across the camp. Most group were composed entirely of men familiar to one another, however there were some too who were more sociable than the rest and soon became acquainted with the groups from the other kingdoms.

    Tantalos was seated before his tent, alongside Shafat, Luxinios, and Baitesir. Most of the conversing was between Luxinios and Shafat, who, while they never before had met, were indeed quite familiar with one another, operating in the same circle, and so were now catching up on old times, jabbering endlessly in Shafat’s native tongue.

    Tantalos looked up to see Indortes striding towards their circle. Tantalos sighed deeply and rose to get up. “Ah, Tantalos!” The Paesuran king yelled, “Just the man I was looking for! Allow me to speak with you for a moment…privately.” Tantalos relented, and then led him into his tent. Once Tantalos sealed the flap behind him, Indortes began to speak.

    “Well, I’ll speak plainly then. I’m sure you’ve guessed that it’s not by mere chance that I came here, I have a reason. My spies did inform me some time back that you were planning to meet with the Qart-Hadast to make some sort of trade deal. Now we all know that Qart-Hadast trade on the Turduli coast is one of the most lucrative deals in the area. Now here’s what I want. I want a cut of that trade profit.”

    “That is out of the question,” Tantalos said bluntly.

    “No, no, now hear me out King. I don’t want too much. And you’ll still maintain wealthy profits, but I want some of it, so what say you?”

    “No, you will have none of it.”

    “Now you listen here! You are in no place to negotiate. We the Paesurans are the most powerful Kingdom around. I’d love to maintain our good relations, and carry things out in a peaceable manner. But if you don’t grant me your profits, I’m going come in, and I’m going to take it from you, and then you’ll have nothing left, and your little kingdom is just going to be a memory.”

    “My answer still remains the same: no, I will not, nor will I ever agree to such an outrageous demand.”

    Indortes’s eyes narrowed as he glared at the Lusitani King. Tantalos could see the man’s hands shaking, and the whiskers on his face bristled in rage. “You will regret this,” he said, struggling to maintain his composure, “this isn’t over!” With that, he sharply turned around towards the opening in the tent, his wool cape flowing behind him as he strode out angrily. Tantalos followed him out, and watched as the man started ordering his men to pack up and prepare to leave. The Paesuran men were very sad to leave, but soon the camp was packed up, and whole group left, back over the mountains.

    Everyone was very confused, but Tantalos preferred not to comment on what had just transpired. He was truly worried about what the future held, for the Paesuran King said he would come and take it, Tantalos knew that the Lusitani were the weaker of the tribes, and he hoped that they would be able to hold on at least until the deranged King came to his senses.

    ***

    Several weeks past, and still nothing happened. Tantalos was back home in Oxtraca, finally reunited with his wife, son of fifteen, and now his newborn son Ditalkos, for his wife had finally conceived once again. In fact, Tantalos had made it back from his summit just in time to be with his wife for the birth. He was amazed at how much his son had grown in the past five years. Just yesterday he was talking to a powerful noble to discuss a wife for his son. She was ten years old now, a five year gap between the two. It would be another couple years before the two were officially wed, but that time would come, soon enough.

    Tantalos was seated in his throne in his palace, his wife at his left, and his son to his right. He looked to his wife and smiled, when suddenly the door before him opened and a guard approached the throne. Behind him was a young man. “My lord,” the guard said, “this young man has something to speak, will you hear him?”

    Tantalos brushed the guard aside and spoke directly to the man. “Speak, man. What is it you have to say, do not be afraid.”My name is Cado. I am a shepherd from the northern parts of the kingdom. Trust me when I say, oh King, that what I say is completely true, I have seen it with my own eyes.” Tantalos nodded to show he understood, and Cado continued, “It was a day like any other day. I was sitting on the hill by my house as always, watching my herd, when suddenly; to the river to the north I could see a great party moving rapidly towards out village. As they came closer to the bridge by our river, some of the leaders from the village rode out to meet them. I watched as the leaders were cut down with no remorse. Then the party fell upon the village and indiscriminately killed everyone in the village. Soon they began burning the entire village to the ground. It was all I could do to get out alive; I may be the only one who survived the attack.”

    Latronos was obviously very interested in the tale, and interjected once Cado feel silent. “Perhaps it was just another Celtiberian raid. They have grown more frequent in these last few years, especially on small villages such as those. Tantalos nodded, but Cado shook his head.

    “No, it was no Celtiberian raid, for just as I was leaving, I managed to catch a glimpse at the banners. The banners held a green boar on them.”

    “The Paesurans!” Latronos exclaimed!

    “Yes,” Tantalos replied, “A horrible tragedy, but not unexpected. How long ago did this occur?”

    “Just a few days.”

    “It was good of you to come here, Cado, you will be well rewarded. Guards, see to it that this man is well rewarded. Latronos, you’d better come with me, we have a lot to do, and not much time in which to do it!”
    Last edited by Owen Glyndwr; 06-28-2009 at 21:23.
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