I think it is important to take steps to make your AAR reader-friendly, after all you must want people to read it otherwise you wouldn't have posted it here.

The forum is more like a magazine than a novel, so an AAR needs short paragraphs and illustrations to maintain reader attention.

I crop my pictures and generally give them captions to help tie them to the text. I also try to keep the direction of view consistent in order to make it easier for the reader to understand the shape of the battle.

I know that many writers here don't have English as their first language, but it is always worth running the spell checker and doing some proof-reading. In the end you are (I presume) trying to make the reader feel what you felt yourself when you were writing, so the text needs close review to ensure it is sending the right message.