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    Well, here I am starting Part 2 of this 3 Part aar. As Ive mentioned before, Part 2 will be focusing on Hamalcar Barca's invasion of Italy. There will be twists and turns along the way, and I will try to keep it as interesting as possible. I suggest you read Part 1 of this aar before reading Part 2, as things will make a lot more sense.
    Thassalokratia- A Carthaginian AAR -Part 1-
    Part 1

    P.S. I will give a balloon to the first person who PM's me the correct answer as to why I picked such a name for this aar. Johnhughthom, you are excluded from the competition, because you know what part 2 is going to contain.

    Thank you for reading Part 1, and I hope you enjoy Part 2.
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    DISCLAIMER

    The following contents of this aar do not necessarily represent my personal views, nor the forums. Likewise, they do not necessarily represent the views of the Rômaioktonoi, but, if you enjoy the following aar, you may want to consider joining the Rômaioktonoi

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    Default Re: Life, death, and revenge - A Carthaginian AAR -Part 2-

    I would normally feel opted to say a smart-ass answer such as "Because it is the second part' but I feel like actually finding out what it means.





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    The prophecy-Prologue to Part 2

    Filth, Rome, filth. That was the only word the the man could say about
    the city. He stood there at the entrance of the forum and watched
    the people. So many people were at the forum. Slaves were being bought
    and sold, prostitutes were making their daily wages. Here and there
    the scum of the city stealing and conniving. The fat and pompous senators
    walking around, bribing the mob leaders. Filth.

    The man watched a poor beggar sit in his corner. Every day the beggar
    would be dragged out there by some scum who would extort the money
    that the beggar earned, leaving him with a small portion of bread and
    cheap wine.

    The man watched as a rich and young man, who was clean shaven and
    finely dressed, walked passed the beggar. The beggar pleaded with the
    rich man, and the rich man, to the watching mans surprise starting beating
    the beggar. Hungry, malnourished and exhausted, the beggar could not put
    up a defense at all. Not that it mattered. This happened daily.

    The rich man, satisfied with himself, continued walking while making a joke
    to his friends about the beggar.

    The man, who had been in the city for only a week, finally stood on the
    platform where slaves were being sold and shouted to the people.

    "People of Roma! Listen to my words and prepare yourself. An invader
    comes from the desert, from a land of terror.A dire vision has been shown
    to me: The traitor betrays, the looter takes loot. He will bring to an end
    to all the groaning the shewolf caused."

    Some people stopped to listen to the man speak, others laughed at such words.

    "At this my body is racked with pain, pangs seize me, like those of a
    woman in labor; I am staggered by what I hear, I am bewildered by
    what I see. My heart falters, fear makes me tremble; the twilight I
    longed for has become a horror to me. No one will be spared. All of you
    will be punished. The old will cry out and not be heard. The young will be
    thrown off the walls."

    The crowd gathered even more to listen the man, who was now the
    center of attention in the entire forum.

    He continued "People, leave this city, for it like a fat swine, ready for
    the slaughter. It will be picked apart and destroyed. He will come, and
    he will avenge himself. You are all whores of money, no good thing can
    be found in your hearts. All this I say..."

    He was interrupted when a pomegranate sized rock hit him square in
    the face. He fell off the stage and onto the dusty stone slab. Groaning
    from pain, he tried to get up, but it was in vain, as the crowd now
    pounced him. A kick to the face, a jab to back. There was no where
    to run. His only hope was the what he said would happen to this
    evil and barbaric city.

    They carried him to the walls of the city, and someone already painted
    a sign that said "Prophet of doom". They hung the sign around his neck,
    along with a rope to hang him and threw him off the walls of the city of filth.

    And so, the prophet of doom spoke, and the city did not listen.


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    P.S. I will give a balloon to the first person who PM's me the correct answer as to why I picked such a name for this aar. Johnhughthom, you are excluded from the competition, because you know what part 2 is going to contain.
    You chose an English title this time because choosing a Greek one contains the inbuilt possiblity of making a mistake, such as "Thassalokratia" instead of "Thalassokratia". A red or blue one please.

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    NOOO! Why didnt anyone ever tell me? I feel foolish now. Sadly though, this is not the reason. Still, here is your balloon, ill give it to you from my own stash.

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    Default Re: Life, death, and revenge - A Carthaginian AAR -Part 2-

    Excellent intro. I'll be looking forward to this...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vasiliyi View Post
    NOOO! Why didnt anyone ever tell me? I feel foolish now. Sadly though, this is not the reason. Still, here is your balloon, ill give it to you from my own stash.
    Sorry, but truth to be told,
    1) I really thought Maion would have told you
    2) I don't want to be the nitpicker all the time...

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    Our fathers

    In our lives, few things influence us like our fathers do. From them,
    we learn to become the men we are. From them, we either learn to
    hate or love, kill or create, encourage or discourage. Fathers either
    succeed in showing us what real men are, or fail utterly, creating
    within us a void. Some of us try to fill the void with things that matter
    little, others with fulfilling things.

    Our fathers either provide the love and care that we need to survive,
    enabling us to become weak and second class, or they force us to
    fight for what we need, making us learn what a fist feels like. Many
    young boys learn to do what they hate from their fathers, while
    others hate to learn what they see in their fathers. And so it was
    like that with them.

    **************
    "ARRGH!" Bareaus cried out as he swung his sword as hard as he
    could at his son. Clang!

    The sound of cold steel against steel was unnerving to the child.
    Being only ten, he understood little of life. He only understood that
    his father was his god. He revered his father, loved him, and most
    of all feared him. His father knew right from wrong, the difference
    from love and death.

    "Likinos, get up!" Bareaus commanded his son.

    Likinos jumped to his feet, raising his heavy celtic sword up, parrying
    his fathers next hit. Again, and again, his father brought his child down
    using the for from his sword. Again and again his son stood up.

    Sweating profusely, and exhausted, Bareaus looked at his son. He
    looked just like his mother. So beautiful, so full of life. Not like a Celt
    should look. There was no barbarism in this boy. Not a drop. He was
    gentle and loving like the beautiful woman he married. Still, this child
    obeyed his father with such reverence, that Bareaus was touched.

    "Good, that is enough for today. Tomorrow is another day."

    He sat next to his boy, giving him the goatskin full of water first. He
    watched his son drink the water. Whatever his son did, he did gracefully.
    It amused Bareaus greatly, being very clumsy himself.

    Bareaus thought of his own father. The drunken fool he was. Yes,
    he was a chief, but he never payed attention to his youngest son.
    He promised to show his son attention. In his heart, he vowed to
    teach his son everything he knew, before it was too late.

    "My son, the only thing that matters is life. But you must understand,
    that life, is nothing without love. Without love, there is no life, and
    without life there is no love. The two are like one. One cannot exist
    without the other. Remember this lesson." He stopped to drink from
    the goatskin himself.

    The boy sat silently, exhausted from protecting himself from his fathers
    massive blows. He listened to his fathers wisdom.

    "Love, is why we are here. Love is why we are alive still. There is much
    hate in this world, much death, much revenge, but there is also love.
    Love may be little, but it will always triumph against hate. Maybe not
    write away, but it will."

    Likinos looked up at his father and then out at the setting sun. Bareaus
    put his hand on his sons shoulder and also looked out at the setting sun.

    **************

    "Oh! Give him what he wants! I have much to do, a city can't run itself!"
    Avarro yelled at his wife.

    His wife, shocked at the response, handed back the falcata to the boy.
    Uxentio snatched it from her and looked at his father. He was only ten,
    and he looked up to his father. Although he was always busy, he was
    always generous in giving Uxentio what he wanted, no matter what the
    price.

    "Father will you teach me to use it?"

    Avarro looked at the boy, annoyed of being taken away from his
    work. He spent the half the day avoiding his wife so that he didn't
    have to have this conversation. Then he spent the other have avoiding
    his son who begged him to get the falcata from his mother.

    Avarro, in a mad rage from the days annoyance, took the falcata and
    thrust it into his wife's stomach.

    A shriek, and then a moan escaped from his wife's beautiful mouth and
    then she died.

    Avarro, not realizing what he had done, dropped the falcata and left
    the room. He was much to busy to think of this. Uxentio, being only a
    boy looked at his dead mother. He placed his hand on his mothers
    stomach, where the warm sticky blood was flowing from. With his other
    hand, he took the falcata. A sense of death came over him. Had he killed
    his mother? Why did death excite him so? What would happen now?

    He stayed with his dead mother, until the servants came to clean up
    the mess. That was the day he learned that life and death are just
    a thread away.

    *************

    "Swear it to me! SWEAR YOUR HATRED FOR THEM!" Hamalcar yelled
    at his son.

    He held his son over a roaring fire of a sacrificial chamber. He could
    feel the intense heat against his skin, and he could only imagine how
    bad his son felt.

    "I swear to you! I hate them! I hate all of them, they are nothing but swine!"

    "What will you do to them!?"

    "I will destroy them! None shall escape my wrath!"

    He held the boy there for a moment longer, until he was satisfied with
    the vow, then he pulled the boy back, and let him catch his breath.

    "My son, you must accomplish what you said to me. I know you do
    not understand what all this means, but you will one day. One day,
    you will understand the importance to do this. They are nothing but
    pigs, ready for the slaughter."

    The boy was only ten, but one thing was sure in his heart.
    Revenge was the reason for life. And he would avenge his mother.

    ************

    I caution you, fathers, to think of the consequences of your actions.


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    Gee, I hope someone gets the title now.

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    Nice update. You started with something lovely and adorable and continued with murder, blood, fire and hate. Keep it up!

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    These are the words of HunGeneral. Congrats, here is your balloon ->

    "Life, Death and Revenge" - I suspect this is a kind of a reference or symbolism to the three protagonists of the Story and what there "goal of life" is right now:

    Likinos - Life: he knows from his father that love is the real reason for life and compared to the other two characters is not bent just on war... He is married and has children and wishes to return home some day.

    Uxentio - Death: he is a killing machine trough and trough and for him fighting and killing aswell as facing death is almost all in life. He seems to wish to find a worthy foe, but it looks like he hasn't found one in Iberia... He also appears like a character who wishes to die on the battlefield (atleast I wouldn't predict him returning to Iberia to marry and have children).

    Hamalcar - Revenge: he wants revenge for his mothers death by the Romani. He has spent most of his life prepearing for it and all his actions are pointing towards Italia and the destruction of Rome.

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    Thank you wery much

    And thanks for writing this wondefull AAR Vasiliyi!
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    You spelt "guessing" wrong in your sig there Hun.

    That sounded weird...

    Edit: "campaigns" is spelt incorrectly too, just while I'm on the subject...
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    Your welcome.

    Quote Originally Posted by johnhughthom View Post
    You spelt "guessing" wrong in your sig there Hun.

    That sounded weird...

    Edit: "campaigns" is spelt incorrectly too, just while I'm on the subject...
    Ofcourse, Johnhughthom must be anal about a minor spelling error while he fails to notice the multitudes of spelling and grammar errors in my chapters.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vasiliyi View Post
    Ofcourse, Johnhughthom must be anal about a minor spelling error while he fails to notice the multitudes of spelling and grammar errors in my chapters.
    Meh, look through my AARs and notice how some chapters had edits weeks or months after they were written. I will give feedback on storyline or screenshots etc, but I spent ages correcting spelling and grammar mistakes on my own AARs, I'm not going to subject somebody else to my spelling/grammar nazi-ness.
    Hope you didn't take offence Hun, I was only trying to be helpful.

    Man, that sounded weird too...
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    Quote Originally Posted by johnhughthom View Post
    You spelt "guessing" wrong in your sig there Hun.

    That sounded weird...

    Edit: "campaigns" is spelt incorrectly too, just while I'm on the subject...
    Corrected.
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