Admiral

[SwordsMaster]

It is indeed strange there was not a single feedback. The story was nice. Your style is very good, IMHO. There were some imperfections in the punctuation but there was nothing disturbing. For example, I noticed that in the English literature the thoughts are not in inverted commas

Yeah, I have contemplated just keeping thoughts in italics instead of inverted commas, but I wasn't really sure about either, so I let it be.

About the plot: the-man-made-of-steel character is a kind of cliche but your skilful work with the contrasts made this story remarkable. I admit I was moved at certain moments. One of my favourite moments was when the admiral was giving instructions to his executors. A real aristocrat.

I tried to show the man's human side - he was deeply religious, and mentioned his beloved Anna a few times. But this was his last day, and that's how he chose to meet it. The interesting thing was that the real life character I have represented was almost equally nonchalant about his mortality.

Thanks for the feedback!