Jillie thought the ice cream sundae was beautiful just to look at, and she let it sit in front of her before starting to eat. The ice cream made her think of being rolled in soft blankets, and the whipped cream was like the clouds outside. The cherry looked like her cat’s nose. She took her first spoonful, and as the hot fudge and ice cream made her mouth both hot and cold, she shut her eyes. She curled her toes and moaned. The second bit was even better and she moaned again and giggled. A trickle ran from the corner of her mouth because she was smiling so much. It hung off the side of her chin, and she thought of it as an ice cream tear. She wanted to give everyone she loved a taste, her mother, her father, and her brother, but it was her seventh birthday and she didn't have to share. After another bite, she couldn’t control herself any more, and as loud as she could, she screamed “Oohh, I just love this.” when it was all gone, she wiped the inside of the dish with her finger and stuck it in her mouth. She rubbed her stomach, shut her eyes, and hummed to herself.
ok i challenge anyone to read the paragraph and not laugh and/or think dirty thoughts.
hard, isnt it?
so this was the paragraph we read in my English class as an example of settling the mood, or something like that.
yes, we were all laughing, even my English teacher, who strangely expected us to not laugh.
a challenge
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