Quote Originally Posted by miotas View Post
Maybe you should have put the passage first and then asked if we laughed or thought any dirty thoughts. I went into it looking for dirty things, if you didn't say anything I don't I would have seen anything dirty, and I didn't laugh either. Maybe you should edit you post to get a more accurate reaction.
While you have a point, I don't think it would've mattered regardless of where he placed the passage. I had no expectation for what was in the paragraph, yet I still couldn't help having a somewhat lascivious perspective while reading it.