Quote Originally Posted by pevergreen View Post
No, not really.

In mine you start off, you quickly find out what the objective is, and there is only that one objective.

No dream worlds, no crazy alternate world.


Much simpler, much shorter as well.

(This is mainly because i could go create a wonderful world for it to take place in, but my writing skills are terribad, so it would all turn into mush)
Have a try anyway. Even I'm doing write up and I got terrible grades in English.