A gripping story, good job =)
Re: Shizan
A gripping story, good job =)
Re: Shizan
Thank you for the feedback.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Shizan
The short story has been edited to make use of better paragraphing and improved wording to convey the ideas better. Hope you enjoy.
Check my other Japanese-themed short story, Kawanakajima Tessen, winner of the 2011 Org Writing Contest -
https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showt...akajima-Tessen
Last edited by edyzmedieval; 06-30-2011 at 14:58.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
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