yep.
say can you look at my story and give feedback?I need critiism,i need to improve my story writing!!!![]()
yep.
say can you look at my story and give feedback?I need critiism,i need to improve my story writing!!!![]()
Last edited by Marshall Louis-Nicolas Davout; 04-18-2011 at 19:28.
I will try to pay some attention to the Noble descendant of the Takeda clan. It would be very disgraceful and dangerous to ignore such a strength.Unfortunately, it won't be this week...
Actually, I write for fun only. The other reason is that I try to improve my English... which leads me to the point that it takes a lot of time to write several pages in English and then to proof-read and proof-read until I post it. And once I have posted it, I realise it does not sound that well and then... anyway, let's go back to work.![]()
R.I.P. Tosa...
I used to dabble in writing. I liked non rhyming poems and short stories. None published, I never made an attempt. I call them deep delves into my subconsious, others call them confusing. :/ No problem though, the effort is still enjoyable. Most have been lost in the belly of old PCs and floppy disks long ago, but I have a few that still remain.
Silence is beautiful
Self improvement, I like that.![]()
Bring them out!I used to dabble in writing. I liked non rhyming poems and short stories. None published, I never made an attempt. I call them deep delves into my subconsious, others call them confusing. :/ No problem though, the effort is still enjoyable. Most have been lost in the belly of old PCs and floppy disks long ago, but I have a few that still remain.
Trunking such work is not good, not good at all.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
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Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Scared! :O I've been wanting to work on some ideas again though. I'll have to hit MS Words some time and post them here! :DBring them out!
Trunking such work is not good, not good at all.
Silence is beautiful
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Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Sounds good. You wouldn't happen to have any motivation I could borrow? :)
Silence is beautiful
i stick with my AAR before i go to novels :)
but I remember a member MCM (marcusmarcellussomething...) who had an EPIC aar going on here YEARS ago, and he had plans of writing a novel
don't know what came of it though
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