Let's Play Ideas?

[Greyblades]

Ok here's afew suggestions:
1: Up the volume on the voice, its realy hard to hear over the music.
2: Dont make it too sensetive. The sound of your breathing, mouth smacking, and that metalic clicking I think I heard during the loading screen is rather distracting
3: Try to entertain, we dont watch these for a walkthrough so try not to adress the audience over the games dialogue. There are several different styles and a rather good LP I watched is a HL1 called Freeman's mind where the LP'er sounds like he is actually the character instead of just a player.
4: Make a script,or at least record the voice after recording the segment, the Ums and ahs make it sound umprofessional and any jokes you can make will take afew trys to deliver properly.