I think it is good, but as you mentioned it will be quite lengthy by the end...
Major focus has to be given to the Hellenistic period of course, maybe you could shorten this part, while keeping the same style for EBII's timeframe...
Still there are definitely long descriptions in the game already :P
BTW as an update: I finished and submitted "Saka Yabgu", just reviewing it now...
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