Quote Originally Posted by novice View Post
Yeah I would like to see Manasi's response to this.


This is strangely formulated though, what are you trying to say? It's a little late to cross-examine Jowy, and if Manasi is scum we should lynch her, right?
The sentence is a bit garbled.

If Manasi got a moderate townread from me and is scum, her behavior toward Jowy this game should be looked at (to determine if that is the case).

Which is also not a great sentence. The "if" doesn't really apply.

It should be "her behavior toward Jowy should be looked at to determine if Manasi is scum". A lot simpler, but that thought was happening at the same time I'm thinking I've got a moderate townread on her and what if she's scum.

Those thoughts all combined into one cluster of a sentence.