Very nice work ElGascon, very nice indeed.
As a friendly question I'd like to ask why you don't keep all the parts of the story together in one topic. You've got a very good story which flows from one part to the next but earlier parts are in danger of getting lost leaving your work greatly deminished. If you wanted I could ask ShadesWolf to combine the various parts into one topic called 'The Ballad of Aleramo'.
Anywho keep up the good work.
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