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Quote[/b] (Monk @ Mar. 30 2004,21:35)]And with a last attempt i try to make this story readable...
Well if you are not happy with how the story is going there is little anyone can do to help, I thought it was as readable as usual.I do like the crusader theme, it has a lot of potential for you to use.
That was just the writer's side of my brain speaking there. I thought this story wasn't turning out very well, but then again thats what i always think unless i'm told otherwise...damn my sub conscience mind

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Quote[/b] ]Maybe you should take a break and come back after a week or two and see what you think of the story then.
That is exactly what i decided to do. It's been about a week since i even looked at this story or tried to get ideas and now that i go back through it doesn't look half bad. maybe now i can finish the tale with confidence.

thank you for the replies.