Well, the only gripe with your fight scene is it started a bit too abruptly. But the description of the scene itself is A-OK
~Wiz
Well, the only gripe with your fight scene is it started a bit too abruptly. But the description of the scene itself is A-OK
~Wiz
"It ain't where you're from / it's where you're at."
Eric B. & Rakim, I Know You Got Soul
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