Gah - miles behind with part three, so I've split it into parts three and four.
Lot of soppy nonsense here, especially in the forest (that sounds bad), but I thought it was necessary to flesh Langly out a bit, so he's not just an object for Fitzjohn to scream at.
The scene with Fitzjohn's cousin was great fun to write, building Fitzjohn up to boiling point. I reckon it's been too long since he's had a proper rage - and after that display of soppiness in the forest, he needs to get back to his old self Don't expect the castle to stay pristine under cousin Will after that outburst.
Part four (continuation of this), soonish. I hope.
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