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Quote[/b] (Ludens @ July 06 2004,07:31)]It is beautiful, Monk. I am glad you found time to write it.

I agree with Wizzy that the stronger emphasis on emotions makes the story better than you previous work.
First off, let me thank you for your kind words Ludens. I did my very best making this story. I am glad to see that my new writing style is a lot better than my old, I always thought something was missing from my older works and this was it. Was it so good as to call it beautiful? oh gosh

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Quote[/b] ]But what will hapen with your crusade story?
That is a very good question. Right now, well it is safe to say that it won't be done anytime soon. My current Irish story that is pending completion is short enough for me to write and finish it by the end of this week, however my crusader story is...how they say... Another story all together... no pun intended.

As i said in another thread i have had a tremendous amount of medical problems, and they have by no means gone away. As it is i find myself with a lot of dead time, but i just don't feel like writing much (as can be expected i would guess). To finish the Crusader story i'd need to feel better and get to a point where i can stand to sit down and write for hours on end like i used to.

I'm scheduled to go to the hospital in ten days for surgery, i'll be out for a week or two after that so it's anybody's guess when the Crusader story will even get attention. I imagine i'd have to go back over the whole thing and rewrite it.

Well...thats my situation in a nutshell... Glad you enjoyed the story..