The Machiavellian Adventures of Princess Eleanor

[Prince Cobra]

Well, there is no need to restrict yourself to only 5 updates. I see big potential in this story. It is clear Eleanor took much from Trempwick and if there is a man, who played the role of a father, it is him. With the predictable gap between her and Fulk, I think the relations with the ex-spymaster will be more mature. Hmm, I wonder if Eleanor will find a lover... For obvious reasons, it won't be Trempwick. The story with the 'slut' sister is an interesting hint for that, I think.

[Death is yonder]

Well, there is no need to restrict yourself to only 5 updates. I see big potential in this story.

An update full of suspense indeed. The story looks like a beginning of something anew though, as if the first chapter of another flowing tale.

Also, it is nice to get back to reading a sequel of sorts to the story, it fits in very nicely, although some things were not instantly clear, such as the mention of Hugh's bastard son, which was pointed out earlier.